2024屆高考英語二輪復習書面表達專項練習10 旅游探險類話題指導

　　2024屆高考英語二輪復習書面表達復習專題10 旅游探險類話題指導

　　實例指導1---羅馬旅游

　　【寫作任務】

　　【寫作指導】

　　1．仔細審題，確定表達信息。

　　本文屬于日記類應用文寫作。文章要求敘述旅游觀光的行程，描述各景點內容，可以按照行程以及參觀景點的先后順序展開寫作。另外，本寫作要用第一人稱，時態以過去時態為主。

　　日記應主要包括如下要點：1）旅行方式以及旅游地點一一羅馬，并對其進行整體介紹；2)參觀的三個景點的描述一一國立博物館、凱旋門、圓形競技場等；3)表達自己的感受和計劃。

　　2．選詞組句，表達信息。

　　寫作過程中可以參考如下詞匯和句式結構：

　　1)信息表達詞匯。如：描述景點的詞語：beautiful，precious；a symbol of，be well known for，splendid，be worth等；表達游人感受的詞語：be attracted by , be struck by，prefer to，I really think等；客觀描述地理事物的詞語：be situated in the middle ; a long history等。

　　2)向式結構。為使用有限的文字描述美麗的景點，也為了提高表達的質量，寫作過程中要盡量多地使用復雜的句式結構，如：

　　1. 用含有時間狀語從句的復合句表達“抵達地點以及感受”：I was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment we arrived the there at 7 o’clock in the morning by plane．

　　2. 用過去分詞短語作狀語，表達地點，并用定語從句補充說明其悠久的歷史：Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula , Rome is well known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history of 2，500 years．

　　用定語從句補充說明參觀景點后的感受和收獲：In the morning we visited' Museo Nazionale Romano, where I enjoyed many precious and beautiful sculptures.以及we had a chance to visit the symbol of Rome, Colosseo, which is very beautiful in the setting sun.等。

　　3)篇章結構中的過渡與銜接詞語。如：therefore，first ，then , finally , but等。

　　【學生習作】

　　May 1 st

　　Friday

　　Sunny

　　Today I paid a visit to one of the oldest cities in Europe, Rome in Italy. I was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment we arrived here at 7 o'clock in the morning by plane. Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula, Rome is well known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history of 2.500 years. Therefore, many tourists from all over the world would prefer to spend their holiday here, espeically in warm spring.

　　In the morning we visited Museo Nazionale Romano, where I enjoyed many precious and beautiful sculptures. Then we went to enjoy the splendid building of Triumphal Arch in the afternoon. Nearly at dark, we had a chance to visit the symbol of Rome, Colosseo,. ①that is very beautiful in the settine sun.

　　It was time for us to leave for another city, but I really think that Rome is ②very worth a second visit one day in the future.

　　得，非常

　　值得”。

　　3．畫龍點睛：第一段的最后一句顯得羅嗦：將后面的原因狀語從句改成簡單的介詞短語就可以，如改成：Therefore，many tourists from all over the world would refer to spend their holiday here , especially in warm spring．

　　【參考范文】

　　May 1st

　　Friday

　　Sunn3

　　Today I paid a visit to one of the oldest cities in Europe, Rome in Italw I was attracted by the beauty:of the city the moment we arrived here at 7 o'clock in the morning by plane. Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula, Rome is well known

　　實例指導2--- 四川名勝

　　【寫作任務】

　　你的英語老師在上課時樣你們準備介紹中國的某個省份的旅游景點。你放暑假的時候準備去四川，因此你在網上查了一些資料，請用英語寫出有關資料，與同學們分享。

　　四川省

　　位置 中國的西南部

　　省會 成都

　　景點 有眾多的名勝古跡，其中著名的有：

　　九寨溝：位于四川西北，以湖最為出名，湖水清澈見底。

　　都江堰水利工程（the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project），建于2000多年前，至今仍發揮著作用。

　　特點 氣候宜人，交通便利

　　以各式各樣的麻辣小吃著名。

　　要求：

　　文章要包括以上所有要點，可以適當增加細節，以使文章連貫。

　　詞數：120左右。開頭已經為你寫好，不及入總詞數。

　　【寫作指導】

　　旅游景點的描寫應該屬于介紹類說明文，寫好這類文章，這對于我們平時對于介紹給親朋好友一個你比較熟悉的地方時是很有幫助的，在寫作時要注意下列問題：

　　1．不宜以跟介紹一下景點的歷史、特色、以及它在當地的一個地位①Today I will tell you some information about Sichuan Province’s travelling. Sichuan Province, ②which capital city is Chengdu, lies in the southwest of china and covers an area of about 485,000 square kilometers.

　　It is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of ③interests , such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. ④Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, whose water is so clear that you can see the bottom of them. ⑤The other attraction is the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project, which was built over 2,000 years ago and is ⑥still playing a important part in irrigation today.

　　⑦In a word, the nice weather, convenient transportation and the variety of famous hot food can also⑧make your trip even more enjoyable.

　　語從句，不能用which引導，這也算是一個這個很好的復合句中的一個小瑕疵吧！

　　③ interests →interest。place of interest 作為一個復合名詞，意思為“名勝”，它的中心詞是place，因此復數形式應該是places of interest。只有表示性別的這類復合名詞，例如：woman doctor ，其復數形式才為women doctors 。

　　④這個句子寫得很好，既出現了句式結構be known for、so…that …， 還用到了whose引導的非限制性定語從句，可見這個同學的語言基礎結構不錯。

　　⑤ The other→Another。

　　⑥ a→an。盡管這個地方由于失誤出錯，但是很好地用到了play part in 這個短語。

　　⑦In a word ，起到了承上啟下和最后總結的作用。

　　⑧ 使用了“make sth.+形容詞作賓補”這個結構。

　　實例指導3—介紹倫敦

　　3．描述地點時需要我們準確掌握表示方位的詞或短語。

　　4．本文的時態主要以一般現在時態為主。

　　5．要適當注意書信的格式，以免影響得分。

　　【參考短語和句型】

　　短語：in front of , in the front of , close to , at the back of , on the other side, lie in , in the north of ，to the east/ west/ , on the bank of , as for the weather, opposite to , arrive at, arrive in . a population of ; as you know

　　句型：how time flies; it has been two months since I … ;is located in , it is a modem city /place with a long history and rich tour resources, the most famous is/ are

　　, be well known for, it is really an impressive visit , another attraction is…,

　　what impressed me most is that … ;

　　I have just been to …, which… , I hope I can hear from you soon.

　　【范文欣賞】

　　Dear Li Ping,

　　How time flies! It has been two months since I left China and came to London.

　　As you know, London is the capital of Britain, which is on the bank of

　　River Thames. It’s a very big city with a population of about 7 million. It is also a busy place. People here are usually friendly and helpful, but they are often in a hurry. What impressed me most is that the weather is chopping and changing. I begin to understand why the English people always talk about the weather. London has many beautiful parks and gardens and other famous places of interest. I have just been to London Museum and Hyde Park recently.

　　How are you now? I miss you very much. I hope I can hear from you soon.

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours,

　　Wang Lin

　　實例指導5--Exploration in Space

　　隨著科技的發展,近年來,人類加強了對外層空間的探索,例如探索火星,但是最近有人提出探索外層空間耗資太大,這部分資金應該用在治理地球環境污染上。你是怎樣看待這個問題的呢？最近你們學校校報的Talk欄目正在征集意見,請你寫一篇120詞左右的英文短文,闡述自己的觀點。

　　分析:

　　1. 本寫作任務要求我們寫一篇議論性的短文來發表自己的觀點。首先,我們必須要分析寫作任務要求我們對什么問題發表自己的看法。弄清楚要討論的問題后再確定自己的觀點,并組織語言。確定了自己的觀點后,應該用簡明扼要的語言將自己的觀點闡述清楚,然后再舉出支持自己觀點的理由。

　　2. 在確定了自己的觀點和支撐自己觀點的理由之后,我們就可以開始著手寫作了。首先,我們可以用列舉不同觀點的方式引出自己的觀點,比如,本寫作任務中要討論的問題是"到底應該把大量的資金投入到對外太空的探索中去,還是應該把這部分錢省下來用到保護我們的家園——地球上去"。我們可以這樣寫:As technology develops, people are spending a great sum of money on space exploration. However, some people argue that the money should be used to protect the Earth. My opinion is that ... 當然,我們也可以首先說明文章要討論的問題是什么,然后說出自己的觀點, 如:Currently, there is a heated debate about whether people should spend more money on space exploration or protecting the Earth. In my opinion, ...

　　這篇學生習作從總體上來看是符合寫作任務的要求的。它抓住了寫作任務要求談論的問題,觀點鮮明,語言也比較通順,基本完成了寫作要求。

　　但是,文章中也暴露出一些不足,首先,文章的結構是頭大、身體小。這樣,文章的重點部分,即闡明自己觀點并說明原因的部分就顯得非常薄弱。

　　其次,文章里的一些過渡做得不太好。如:第一、第二兩句間過渡太倉促,如果改為:However, recently some people have said ..., 就很好了。 ???? 然后,第三句話I totally against this point of view應該是I am totally against this pressure on the Earth. Secondly, people will know more about outer space and learn Earth better by studying other planets. Finally, space exploration will help us find more solutions to Earth’s pollution problems.

　　In a word, exploring outer space should be encouraged and is worth the time and money we spend on it.

　　Powerful sentences:

　　1. Exploration of outer space not only helps us know more about the universe, but also helps us know our own home —Earth better.

　　2. Exploration is important to human beings. When the Earth is no longer fit for people to live, the exploration of outer space will help us find another home in the universe.

　　3. Earth is our home. Without it, none of us would survive, so we should spend most of our money protecting it.

　　實例指導6--北京歡迎你

　　寫作任務:

　　假如你的學校正在舉行一場英語演講比賽,請你擬一篇關于"北京歡迎你"的演講稿,向外國友人介紹長城,天安門廣場,和頤和園三個景點。并邀請外國友人來北京旅游。(詞數:不少于120)

　　寫作分析:

　　1. 根據寫作任務可知本文要求大家寫一篇介紹北京的說明文,文章的主要時態為一般現在時。

　　2. 本文寫作時可分為三大部分。第一部分為寫作目的,歡迎國外朋友來北京,引出介紹北京的話題；第二部分介紹北京的三個著名景點:長城、天安門廣場和頤和園；第三部分概括總結,緊扣文章中心"北京歡迎你"。

　　3. 第二部分可參照如下信息:

　　(1)長城:始建于2500年前；毛主席題詞"不到長城非好漢"。

　　(2)天安門廣場:世界最大的廣場,廣場 四周建筑有大會堂、博物館、毛主席紀念堂等。

　　(3)頤和園:北京著名公園,坐落于北京東北部。

　　參考詞匯:

　　天安門廣場Tian’anmen Square；

　　頤和園the Summer Palace

　　初稿:

　　Welcome to China! Welcome to Beijing! Let me introduce some famous sights to you.

　　The Great Wall is an amazing sight. It was built 2,500 years ago. Chairman Mao once said, "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man." There are some other spots, like Tian’anmen Square and the Summer Palace. Tian’anmen Square is one of the largest and oldest public squares in the world. Around it are halls, museums and monuments. Mao’s body rests in the Maozedong Memorial Hall. The Summer Palace is one of the best parks in the city, and lies in the northeast of the city. You can go there by bus or by car. There are many things to see in Beijing. I’m sure you will enjoy them all.

　　1. 初稿的優點:對文章的要點把握比較準確,文章的體裁及格式準確。

　　2. 不足之處在于文章的第一段和最后一段過于簡單,因此難以激起讀者了解北京的興趣。

　　3. 在第二段的要點陳述中所運用的都是簡單句,句型單調不夠靈活,要點轉換尤顯生硬。

　　1. 首尾呼應,畫龍點睛。第一段提出了"Have you been to China? Have you been to Beijing?"的問題。而最后一段對文章概括之后,用一句"I’m sure you will enjoy them all."和第一段遙相呼應,使整篇文章給讀者以渾然一體之感。

　　2. 作者分三段來分別描寫三個景點,層次分明,一目了然。

　　3. 更難能可貴的是使用了較為復雜的句型,例如定語從句和狀語從句,并且邏輯關系表達準確。

　　Powerful Sentences:

　　1. I still remember my first trip to Beijing last year as if it were yesterday.

　　2. People in Beijing like morning markets, where they can get many kinds of delicious foods.

　　3. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners want to find out more about Beijing.

　　4. It is a dream for me to visit Beijing.

　　5. The Great Wall is actually over 6,000 kilometers long, 6 to 7 meters tall and 4 to 5 meters wide.

　　6. Every year many visitors from all over the world come to China to visit Beijing.

　　Paris, the capital of France, is located in the north of France. It has a population of about eleven million. It is the second largest city in Europe. As for the weather, it never gets too hot or too cold. And it is at its best during the spring and autumn months.

　　Paris is the culture, education, business center of France. It is a city of fashion and romance. So many important events have been held here. Paris is a modem city with a long history and rich tour resources.

　　There are so many places for people to visit. The most famous are the Eiffel Tower, a Triumphal Arch and Old Notre Dame.

　　In a word, Paris is really a great and attractive city.

　　【寫作任務】

　　六百多年前，我國就有了鄭和下西洋的壯舉，請根據下列表格中的內容寫一篇120-150詞的英語短文，敘述這—探險活動并發表你的看法。

　　時間 地點 意義

　　1405――1433年 到過東南亞、東非的30多個國家，最遠到達非洲東海岸，還可能去過澳大利亞。 7次遠洋探險展示了破國高超的造船技術，增進了中國和世界各國的了解和友誼。

　　【寫作指導】

　　1．先審題，這個寫作任務是讓我們寫一篇敘議結合的文章，記敘為主，議論為輔，前面先敘述鄭和下西洋的探險活動，后面要有自己的感受，并且二者要有機結合起來；寫的時候不能對表格內容進行逐字翻譯，要進行整合：