SAT寫作的五大基本要求
SAT寫作是有一定的規范和要求的,我們在積累了一定的例證以及寫作方法以后,就要注意這些規范性的細節,SAT寫作要求具體表現在五個方面:避免使用俚語和口語、避免使用不完整或冗長的句式、正確使用標點符號、正確使用修飾語、正確使用代詞,下面我們一一來看一下。
一、避免使用俚語和口語
盡量避免在正式的寫作中使用俚語和口語,因為它們使用并不普遍,所以極易使讀者誤解作者要表達的意思。例如:
錯誤:She plays a wicked game of tennis.
正確:She excels in tennis.
錯誤:John has been doing a science for years.
正確:John has been a scientist for years.
錯誤:The blackened salmons been one of the restaurants most popular entrees.
正確:The blackened salmon has been one of the restaurants most popular entrees.
稍作思考,你就會選擇正確的用法。注意要堅持使用標準用法,拋棄非正式場合用語以及表述不清晰的縮寫等用法。
二、避免使用不完整或冗長的句式
不完整的句式沒有獨立的從句;而冗長的句式則有兩個以上的從句,而這若干從句之間并沒有恰當地銜接。這兩種錯誤都是我們應該努力避免的,具體做法如下。
不完整的句式
正式寫作中的每句話都必須有獨立從句。所謂獨立從句,就是包含主語、謂語,并且不以下述連詞作為句子開頭:
After if than whenever although in order that though where as provided that unless whether because since until while before so that
錯誤:Global warming. This is what the scientists and journalists are worried about.
正確:Global warming is the cause of concern for scientists and journalists.
注意,以并列連詞and、but、or、nor和for作為單句的開頭,則是可以接受的。例如:
正確:Most people would agree that indigent patients should receive wonderful health care. But every treatment has its price.
冗長的句式
在時間緊張的情況下,不少學生寫出來的句子沒有標點連接,或者只有逗號。例如:
Current insurance practices are unfair they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
我們有三種修改方法:
1)標注句號:Current insurance practices are unfair. They discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
這樣,一個獨立的句子就變成幾個獨立的從句。
2)標注分號:Current insurance practices are unfair; they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.利用分號把具有獨立意義的句式分開,但同時向讀者表明句子表示的含義之間存在一定聯系。
3)利用連詞:Current insurance practices are unfair in that they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.這也是最有效的修改方法,從句仍然是獨立的,同時也表明了從句之間的聯系。
出現冗長句式還有一個原因,就是誤用however、nevertheless、furthermore、likewise、therefore等副詞。例如:
錯誤:Current insurance practices are discriminatory, furthermore they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
正確:Current insurance practices are discriminatory. Furthermore, they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
三、 正確使用標點符號
1.逗號
請遵循以下4大規則:
1.用逗號分開系列成分。如果有2個以上相同成分,則應用逗號分開;例如:
My recipe for buttermilk biscuits contains flour, soda and buttermilk.
2. 使用逗號來分開插入從句和短語;例如:
Gordon, who is a writer by profession, bakes an excellent cheesecake.
3.在引導性分詞或介詞短語后使用逗號;例如:
After the banquet, Harold and Martha went dancing.
4.利用逗號來分開連詞連接的獨立從句。例如:
Susans old car has been belching blue smoke from the tailpipe for two weeks, but it has not broken down yet.
2.分號
請遵循以下2大規則:
1.使用分號而不是并列連詞來連接兩個含義緊密的獨立從句;例如:
Whooping cranes are an endangered species; they are unlikely to survive if we continue to pollute.
2. therefore、nevertheless和moreover等詞連接的獨立從句可用分號隔開。例如:
The staff meeting has been postponed until next Thursday; therefore, I will be unable to get approval for my project until then.
3.冒號
請遵循以下3大規則:
1.在正式的寫作中,冒號的作用僅在于表明其后是對前面所述內容的詳細說明、定義、解釋或過去發生事情的概述。冒號之前一般是獨立從句,并且通常情況下有as follows、the following、namely或like等提示短語。例如:
正確:Your instructions are as follows: read the passage carefully, answer the questions on the last page, and turn over your answer sheet.
2.動詞和直接賓語間不要放冒號。例如:
錯誤:I want: a slice of pizza and a small green salad.
正確:This is what I want: A slice of pizza and a small green salad.
3.如果前后兩句話有如上所述的緊密關系,即使沒有上述表示這層關系的短語,也可使用冒號,并且在這種情況下,句號也可用。例如:
正確:We were aghast: The charming country inn that had been advertised in such glowing terms proved to be a leaking cabin full of mosquitoes.
4.連字符號和破折號
請遵循以下7大規則:
1.行末單詞分開時使用連字符號。例如:
正確:In this incredible canvas, the artist used only monochromatic elements.
2.表示21-99這些數字和用作形容詞的分數時,使用連字符號。
錯誤:A two thirds vote was necessary to carry the measure.
正確:A two-thirds vote was necessary to carry the measure.
3.由前綴ex、all、self、semi或后綴elect構成的詞語,前綴或后綴和主體之間應有連字符號。
錯誤:The president elect was invited to chair the meeting.
正確:The president-elect was invited to chair the meeting.
4.如果把復合形容詞放在所修飾詞語的前面,則該形容詞各部分應由連字符號分開。
正確:The no-holds-barred argument continued into the night.
5.專有名詞或形容詞前添加前綴,兩部分應由連字符號隔開。例如:
錯誤:His pro African sentiments were heartily applauded.
正確:His pro-African sentiments were heartily applauded.
6. 如果復合構詞法構成的詞語容易與其他詞語混淆,或者導致元音字母相鄰,則應用連字符號隔開。例如:
錯誤:Most buildings in the ghost town are recreations of the original structures.
正確:Most buildings in the ghost town are re-creations of the original structures.
錯誤:She took an antiinflammatory drug for her sports injury.
正確:She took an anti-inflammatory drug for her sports injury.
7. 用破折號表明思路的突然變化。
正確:To get a high scoreand who doesnt want to get a high scoreyou need to devote yourself to prolonged and concentrated study.
5.撇號
請遵循以下3大規則:
1. 表明動詞縮寫,但是在作文開始中應盡量避免縮寫。
2. 表明名詞所有格。
3.代詞都另有單詞表示其所有格,比較特殊的是中性詞one,其所有格為one加上撇號和s。
四、正確使用修飾語
單詞在句中的位置往往決定該單詞與句中其他單詞的關系,對修飾語而言尤其如此。修飾語和被修飾成分應在所有格和數上保持一致。如果修飾語和被修飾成分隔開太遠,則容易導致語意模糊,所以應盡量避免出現這種情況。例如:
錯誤:Cheung and Martha sat talking about the movie in the office.
正確:Cheung and Martha sat in the office talking about the movie.
五、 正確使用代詞
使用代詞的時候,應明確其所指稱或代表的先行詞。如果容易引起歧義,應明確寫明先行詞,不用擔心重復。例如:
錯誤:The teacher told the student he was lazy.
正確:The student was lazy, and the teacher told him so.
避免用this、that、it或which來指代整個短語或句子,即使這些代詞與其指代的先行詞很近,你可以用這些詞再加上一個名詞來指代。
錯誤:The salesman spoke loudly, swayed back and forth, and tapped the table nervously, which made his customers extremely nervous.
正確:The salesman spoke loudly, swayed back and forth, and tapped the table nervously, mannerisms which made his customers extremely nervous.
除非指代天氣,否則句子開頭不要用it指代。
錯誤:It is difficult to distinguish between the scent of roses and that of tulips.
正確:T o distinguish between the scent of roses and that of tulips is difficult.
少數不定代詞既可以指代單數名詞,也可以指代復數名詞。當這些代詞做主語時,必須明白其先行詞是單數還是復數。
錯誤:His superiors have been following his progress. Some are more impressed than others. None are overwhelmed.
記住:以-body、-one、和-thing結尾的代詞在數上始終是單數含義;both、few、many、several等代詞在數上始終是復數含義。
掌握了這五種SAT寫作要求以后,你的文章會更加規范,避免了這些細節上的小問題,再加上明確的觀點和充分的例證,清晰的段落和流暢的語言,你距離滿分作文越來越近了。
SAT寫作是有一定的規范和要求的,我們在積累了一定的例證以及寫作方法以后,就要注意這些規范性的細節,SAT寫作要求具體表現在五個方面:避免使用俚語和口語、避免使用不完整或冗長的句式、正確使用標點符號、正確使用修飾語、正確使用代詞,下面我們一一來看一下。
一、避免使用俚語和口語
盡量避免在正式的寫作中使用俚語和口語,因為它們使用并不普遍,所以極易使讀者誤解作者要表達的意思。例如:
錯誤:She plays a wicked game of tennis.
正確:She excels in tennis.
錯誤:John has been doing a science for years.
正確:John has been a scientist for years.
錯誤:The blackened salmons been one of the restaurants most popular entrees.
正確:The blackened salmon has been one of the restaurants most popular entrees.
稍作思考,你就會選擇正確的用法。注意要堅持使用標準用法,拋棄非正式場合用語以及表述不清晰的縮寫等用法。
二、避免使用不完整或冗長的句式
不完整的句式沒有獨立的從句;而冗長的句式則有兩個以上的從句,而這若干從句之間并沒有恰當地銜接。這兩種錯誤都是我們應該努力避免的,具體做法如下。
不完整的句式
正式寫作中的每句話都必須有獨立從句。所謂獨立從句,就是包含主語、謂語,并且不以下述連詞作為句子開頭:
After if than whenever although in order that though where as provided that unless whether because since until while before so that
錯誤:Global warming. This is what the scientists and journalists are worried about.
正確:Global warming is the cause of concern for scientists and journalists.
注意,以并列連詞and、but、or、nor和for作為單句的開頭,則是可以接受的。例如:
正確:Most people would agree that indigent patients should receive wonderful health care. But every treatment has its price.
冗長的句式
在時間緊張的情況下,不少學生寫出來的句子沒有標點連接,或者只有逗號。例如:
Current insurance practices are unfair they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
我們有三種修改方法:
1)標注句號:Current insurance practices are unfair. They discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
這樣,一個獨立的句子就變成幾個獨立的從句。
2)標注分號:Current insurance practices are unfair; they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.利用分號把具有獨立意義的句式分開,但同時向讀者表明句子表示的含義之間存在一定聯系。
3)利用連詞:Current insurance practices are unfair in that they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.這也是最有效的修改方法,從句仍然是獨立的,同時也表明了從句之間的聯系。
出現冗長句式還有一個原因,就是誤用however、nevertheless、furthermore、likewise、therefore等副詞。例如:
錯誤:Current insurance practices are discriminatory, furthermore they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
正確:Current insurance practices are discriminatory. Furthermore, they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
三、 正確使用標點符號
1.逗號
請遵循以下4大規則:
1.用逗號分開系列成分。如果有2個以上相同成分,則應用逗號分開;例如:
My recipe for buttermilk biscuits contains flour, soda and buttermilk.
2. 使用逗號來分開插入從句和短語;例如:
Gordon, who is a writer by profession, bakes an excellent cheesecake.
3.在引導性分詞或介詞短語后使用逗號;例如:
After the banquet, Harold and Martha went dancing.
4.利用逗號來分開連詞連接的獨立從句。例如:
Susans old car has been belching blue smoke from the tailpipe for two weeks, but it has not broken down yet.
2.分號
請遵循以下2大規則:
1.使用分號而不是并列連詞來連接兩個含義緊密的獨立從句;例如:
Whooping cranes are an endangered species; they are unlikely to survive if we continue to pollute.
2. therefore、nevertheless和moreover等詞連接的獨立從句可用分號隔開。例如:
The staff meeting has been postponed until next Thursday; therefore, I will be unable to get approval for my project until then.
3.冒號
請遵循以下3大規則:
1.在正式的寫作中,冒號的作用僅在于表明其后是對前面所述內容的詳細說明、定義、解釋或過去發生事情的概述。冒號之前一般是獨立從句,并且通常情況下有as follows、the following、namely或like等提示短語。例如:
正確:Your instructions are as follows: read the passage carefully, answer the questions on the last page, and turn over your answer sheet.
2.動詞和直接賓語間不要放冒號。例如:
錯誤:I want: a slice of pizza and a small green salad.
正確:This is what I want: A slice of pizza and a small green salad.
3.如果前后兩句話有如上所述的緊密關系,即使沒有上述表示這層關系的短語,也可使用冒號,并且在這種情況下,句號也可用。例如:
正確:We were aghast: The charming country inn that had been advertised in such glowing terms proved to be a leaking cabin full of mosquitoes.
4.連字符號和破折號
請遵循以下7大規則:
1.行末單詞分開時使用連字符號。例如:
正確:In this incredible canvas, the artist used only monochromatic elements.
2.表示21-99這些數字和用作形容詞的分數時,使用連字符號。
錯誤:A two thirds vote was necessary to carry the measure.
正確:A two-thirds vote was necessary to carry the measure.
3.由前綴ex、all、self、semi或后綴elect構成的詞語,前綴或后綴和主體之間應有連字符號。
錯誤:The president elect was invited to chair the meeting.
正確:The president-elect was invited to chair the meeting.
4.如果把復合形容詞放在所修飾詞語的前面,則該形容詞各部分應由連字符號分開。
正確:The no-holds-barred argument continued into the night.
5.專有名詞或形容詞前添加前綴,兩部分應由連字符號隔開。例如:
錯誤:His pro African sentiments were heartily applauded.
正確:His pro-African sentiments were heartily applauded.
6. 如果復合構詞法構成的詞語容易與其他詞語混淆,或者導致元音字母相鄰,則應用連字符號隔開。例如:
錯誤:Most buildings in the ghost town are recreations of the original structures.
正確:Most buildings in the ghost town are re-creations of the original structures.
錯誤:She took an antiinflammatory drug for her sports injury.
正確:She took an anti-inflammatory drug for her sports injury.
7. 用破折號表明思路的突然變化。
正確:To get a high scoreand who doesnt want to get a high scoreyou need to devote yourself to prolonged and concentrated study.
5.撇號
請遵循以下3大規則:
1. 表明動詞縮寫,但是在作文開始中應盡量避免縮寫。
2. 表明名詞所有格。
3.代詞都另有單詞表示其所有格,比較特殊的是中性詞one,其所有格為one加上撇號和s。
四、正確使用修飾語
單詞在句中的位置往往決定該單詞與句中其他單詞的關系,對修飾語而言尤其如此。修飾語和被修飾成分應在所有格和數上保持一致。如果修飾語和被修飾成分隔開太遠,則容易導致語意模糊,所以應盡量避免出現這種情況。例如:
錯誤:Cheung and Martha sat talking about the movie in the office.
正確:Cheung and Martha sat in the office talking about the movie.
五、 正確使用代詞
使用代詞的時候,應明確其所指稱或代表的先行詞。如果容易引起歧義,應明確寫明先行詞,不用擔心重復。例如:
錯誤:The teacher told the student he was lazy.
正確:The student was lazy, and the teacher told him so.
避免用this、that、it或which來指代整個短語或句子,即使這些代詞與其指代的先行詞很近,你可以用這些詞再加上一個名詞來指代。
錯誤:The salesman spoke loudly, swayed back and forth, and tapped the table nervously, which made his customers extremely nervous.
正確:The salesman spoke loudly, swayed back and forth, and tapped the table nervously, mannerisms which made his customers extremely nervous.
除非指代天氣,否則句子開頭不要用it指代。
錯誤:It is difficult to distinguish between the scent of roses and that of tulips.
正確:T o distinguish between the scent of roses and that of tulips is difficult.
少數不定代詞既可以指代單數名詞,也可以指代復數名詞。當這些代詞做主語時,必須明白其先行詞是單數還是復數。
錯誤:His superiors have been following his progress. Some are more impressed than others. None are overwhelmed.
記住:以-body、-one、和-thing結尾的代詞在數上始終是單數含義;both、few、many、several等代詞在數上始終是復數含義。
掌握了這五種SAT寫作要求以后,你的文章會更加規范,避免了這些細節上的小問題,再加上明確的觀點和充分的例證,清晰的段落和流暢的語言,你距離滿分作文越來越近了。