GRE寫作提綱舉例指導(dǎo)（5）
7 、The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.
攝象機是非常重要的記錄手段，但不能夸大其作用
1、承認攝象機可以生動而真實地記錄發(fā)生事件 trip to Europe; Wedding ceremony; robbery in bank; stealing in supermarket; traffic rule violation
2、有些信息不適合僅用攝象機記錄，特別是需要存檔以后使用的信息，如復(fù)雜事件、會議 complex legal case; conference;
3、抽象信息攝象機無法記錄，如數(shù)字信息，人的內(nèi)心世界 quantitive information; peoples mind, thinking, feeling
攝像機可以如此精確有力地記錄當代人們的生活，因此它已經(jīng)成為比紙筆記錄更重要的記錄方式。
1. 數(shù)碼相機好。首先，后代可以更清楚地了解以前的事情. 此外，數(shù)碼媒體占地更小 。這些對于文字來說都是不可能的
2. 文字媒體好
3. 最后，兩者各有所長，還能取長補短：需要再現(xiàn)場景用照片;需要記錄相關(guān)事實，挖掘內(nèi)在含義，用文字;很多情況下，照片和文字結(jié)合使用，圖文并茂才能完整的描述一件事情。
數(shù)碼相機可以精確、令人信服地記錄當代人們的生活，作為一種記錄方式，它的重要性已經(jīng)超過了紙筆記錄。
關(guān)鍵詞：攝影機，精準，記錄，生活，代替紙筆
核心是：圖象和文字記錄的比較
1 分別定義圖象記錄 和文字記錄
2 人類為什么要 記錄 -創(chuàng)作+傳播+記錄史實
3 如何滿足這樣的需求?要求記錄的工具必須-可以記錄+可以傳播+可以存儲
4 從這三個基本要求出發(fā)，對圖象記錄和文字記錄分別進行優(yōu)劣比較
5 比較 1-可記錄方面，VIDEO可以錄聲畫，完全再現(xiàn)，缺點成本高，拍攝者的主觀視角;文字，只有文字，理解時容易誤差，然而最廣泛的應(yīng)用，所以各種流派各種思想都會被記錄，比較全面客觀
6 比較2-可傳播方面。VIDEO要求要用放映的基本設(shè)施，文字作品輕便得多，隨時隨地可以看
7 比較3-可存儲方面。拷貝的存儲要求一些特定的要求，溫度，濕度，等等;書籍就相對簡單，而且復(fù)制起來也便宜
8 除此之外，VIDEO有一個致命的缺點，就是無法表達人內(nèi)心的思想和一些抽象的東西。而文字是可以表達的。所以無法代替文字，但 100 年后如何，誰也不知道
【題目】The video camera provides such an accurate an d convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.
【提綱】數(shù)碼相機可以精確地拍攝當代人們的生活，它的重要性已經(jīng)超過了紙筆記錄。
【翻譯】Position ：balance ，兩者配合使用
1. 攝像機優(yōu)點：準確、生動、真實、能夠記錄瞬間、移動物體 ，而文字記錄的閱讀著還需要在腦中重現(xiàn)，并且由于記錄者的原因可能產(chǎn)生誤讀。)
eg. Video surveillance cameras ar e objective witnesses with perfect memories, thus play a vital evidentiary role in legal proceedings, such as those involving robbery and motor vehicle violations
2. 攝像機缺點：記錄時間短暫、成本高、不靈活- 攜帶不方便、無概括提煉
3、紙筆紀錄的優(yōu)點：經(jīng)過思考、提煉、加工;隨時記錄;大眾方式- 攝像機沒普及
4、總結(jié)
Video 和Written Records
一、各有各的好處。錄像機更形象，紙筆能記錄抽象思維，而且錄像機貴，不方便
二、錄像機的好處 It is true that video records are more convincing and vibrant.
1.記錄recount 大事件，衛(wèi)星發(fā)射，新年音樂會，奧運會開幕式
2. 視覺效果 visual scene，文學作品最多只能 mental picture
3.生活中的瞬間, surprise party, baby born process, grad uate ceremony, clues for capturing droplets along our life river
三、錄像機不能記錄詳 complex邏輯的clauses, 和statistical and quantitative 數(shù)據(jù)。as we know, video records are of little use in documenting complex, lo gical clauses and statistical, quantitative data.
1.法律條款，合同，條約
2.我體會 data的重要性 GDP，失業(yè)，CPI
四、錄像機貴、不方便 the speaker ignores the obvious differences in costs and portability of video and written records.
1.不是每個人都買得起
2.不能隨便帶
3. On the basis of the scant resources, Net outcome 最大化, 恰當選擇
7T The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of do cumentation than written records.
攝影機可以精確地拍攝當代
人們的生活，它的重要性已經(jīng)超過了紙筆記錄
Our life has gone through great changes since the video camera came into being, which provides a totally new and different way of recording life to the traditional written methods.
攝影機的優(yōu)點：Compared with written records, video documentation is much less influenced by the one who took record and the one who interpreted it.
Another conspicuous advantage of video records is its生動lifelikeness 。People can see what happened by themselves.如：看 Olympic
攝影機的缺點：Yet its rash to say that video camera has already won over traditional written documents and become the new domination of do cumentation field since video record is limited in several aspects
A 過去的歷史事件沒有記錄 restricted by time. B 價格高昂，不是所有人都能承受。
文字的優(yōu)點：在統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)方面，以及深刻性方面總結(jié)，各有千秋。有時需要結(jié)合起來。
We cannot say whether video camera or the written document is more important than the other in that each one has its irreplaceable merits and values. Video camera offers the accurate and convincing method of recording which can revive life in before while traditional written document can provide a more detailed and rational record in lower cost.
7 、The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.
攝象機是非常重要的記錄手段，但不能夸大其作用
1、承認攝象機可以生動而真實地記錄發(fā)生事件 trip to Europe; Wedding ceremony; robbery in bank; stealing in supermarket; traffic rule violation
2、有些信息不適合僅用攝象機記錄，特別是需要存檔以后使用的信息，如復(fù)雜事件、會議 complex legal case; conference;
3、抽象信息攝象機無法記錄，如數(shù)字信息，人的內(nèi)心世界 quantitive information; peoples mind, thinking, feeling
攝像機可以如此精確有力地記錄當代人們的生活，因此它已經(jīng)成為比紙筆記錄更重要的記錄方式。
1. 數(shù)碼相機好。首先，后代可以更清楚地了解以前的事情. 此外，數(shù)碼媒體占地更小 。這些對于文字來說都是不可能的
2. 文字媒體好
3. 最后，兩者各有所長，還能取長補短：需要再現(xiàn)場景用照片;需要記錄相關(guān)事實，挖掘內(nèi)在含義，用文字;很多情況下，照片和文字結(jié)合使用，圖文并茂才能完整的描述一件事情。
數(shù)碼相機可以精確、令人信服地記錄當代人們的生活，作為一種記錄方式，它的重要性已經(jīng)超過了紙筆記錄。
關(guān)鍵詞：攝影機，精準，記錄，生活，代替紙筆
核心是：圖象和文字記錄的比較
1 分別定義圖象記錄 和文字記錄
2 人類為什么要 記錄 -創(chuàng)作+傳播+記錄史實
3 如何滿足這樣的需求?要求記錄的工具必須-可以記錄+可以傳播+可以存儲
4 從這三個基本要求出發(fā)，對圖象記錄和文字記錄分別進行優(yōu)劣比較
5 比較 1-可記錄方面，VIDEO可以錄聲畫，完全再現(xiàn)，缺點成本高，拍攝者的主觀視角;文字，只有文字，理解時容易誤差，然而最廣泛的應(yīng)用，所以各種流派各種思想都會被記錄，比較全面客觀
6 比較2-可傳播方面。VIDEO要求要用放映的基本設(shè)施，文字作品輕便得多，隨時隨地可以看
7 比較3-可存儲方面。拷貝的存儲要求一些特定的要求，溫度，濕度，等等;書籍就相對簡單，而且復(fù)制起來也便宜
8 除此之外，VIDEO有一個致命的缺點，就是無法表達人內(nèi)心的思想和一些抽象的東西。而文字是可以表達的。所以無法代替文字，但 100 年后如何，誰也不知道
【題目】The video camera provides such an accurate an d convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.
【提綱】數(shù)碼相機可以精確地拍攝當代人們的生活，它的重要性已經(jīng)超過了紙筆記錄。
【翻譯】Position ：balance ，兩者配合使用
1. 攝像機優(yōu)點：準確、生動、真實、能夠記錄瞬間、移動物體 ，而文字記錄的閱讀著還需要在腦中重現(xiàn)，并且由于記錄者的原因可能產(chǎn)生誤讀。)
eg. Video surveillance cameras ar e objective witnesses with perfect memories, thus play a vital evidentiary role in legal proceedings, such as those involving robbery and motor vehicle violations
2. 攝像機缺點：記錄時間短暫、成本高、不靈活- 攜帶不方便、無概括提煉
3、紙筆紀錄的優(yōu)點：經(jīng)過思考、提煉、加工;隨時記錄;大眾方式- 攝像機沒普及
4、總結(jié)
Video 和Written Records
一、各有各的好處。錄像機更形象，紙筆能記錄抽象思維，而且錄像機貴，不方便
二、錄像機的好處 It is true that video records are more convincing and vibrant.
1.記錄recount 大事件，衛(wèi)星發(fā)射，新年音樂會，奧運會開幕式
2. 視覺效果 visual scene，文學作品最多只能 mental picture
3.生活中的瞬間, surprise party, baby born process, grad uate ceremony, clues for capturing droplets along our life river
三、錄像機不能記錄詳 complex邏輯的clauses, 和statistical and quantitative 數(shù)據(jù)。as we know, video records are of little use in documenting complex, lo gical clauses and statistical, quantitative data.
1.法律條款，合同，條約
2.我體會 data的重要性 GDP，失業(yè)，CPI
四、錄像機貴、不方便 the speaker ignores the obvious differences in costs and portability of video and written records.
1.不是每個人都買得起
2.不能隨便帶
3. On the basis of the scant resources, Net outcome 最大化, 恰當選擇
7T The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of do cumentation than written records.
攝影機可以精確地拍攝當代
人們的生活，它的重要性已經(jīng)超過了紙筆記錄
Our life has gone through great changes since the video camera came into being, which provides a totally new and different way of recording life to the traditional written methods.
攝影機的優(yōu)點：Compared with written records, video documentation is much less influenced by the one who took record and the one who interpreted it.
Another conspicuous advantage of video records is its生動lifelikeness 。People can see what happened by themselves.如：看 Olympic
攝影機的缺點：Yet its rash to say that video camera has already won over traditional written documents and become the new domination of do cumentation field since video record is limited in several aspects
A 過去的歷史事件沒有記錄 restricted by time. B 價格高昂，不是所有人都能承受。
文字的優(yōu)點：在統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)方面，以及深刻性方面總結(jié)，各有千秋。有時需要結(jié)合起來。
We cannot say whether video camera or the written document is more important than the other in that each one has its irreplaceable merits and values. Video camera offers the accurate and convincing method of recording which can revive life in before while traditional written document can provide a more detailed and rational record in lower cost.
