gre argument79提綱分析匯總
前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析,希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總,讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。
題目題材:交通安全
gre argument 79題目:
The following appeared in a magazine for the trucking industry.
The Longhaul trucking company was concerned that its annual accident rate was too high. It granted a significant pay increase to its drivers and increased its training standards. It also put strict limits on the number of hours per week each driver could drive. The following year, its trucks were involved in half the number of accidents as before the changes were implemented. A survey of other trucking companies found that the highest-paid drivers were the least likely to have had an accident. Therefore, trucking companies wishing to reduce their accident rate can do so simply by raising their drivers pay and limiting the overall number of hours they drive.
提綱:
Other possible factors could also lead to the decline in the number of accidents of Longhaul.
The author fails to provide the annual accident rate of Longhual after the changes were implemented. The author does not inform us the total mileage driven at Longhaul in that year.
The author fails to rule out the possibility that those highest-paid drivers earn high salary just because they are safe drivers.
Adopting the authors proposal alone may not sufficiently reduce the accident rates.
Other methods could also be used to achieve the same purpose.
注:題目中括號里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。
無論是gre issue還是gre argument,考生都應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習(xí)慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習(xí)可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性,而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強(qiáng)。
前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析,希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總,讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。
題目題材:交通安全
gre argument 79題目:
The following appeared in a magazine for the trucking industry.
The Longhaul trucking company was concerned that its annual accident rate was too high. It granted a significant pay increase to its drivers and increased its training standards. It also put strict limits on the number of hours per week each driver could drive. The following year, its trucks were involved in half the number of accidents as before the changes were implemented. A survey of other trucking companies found that the highest-paid drivers were the least likely to have had an accident. Therefore, trucking companies wishing to reduce their accident rate can do so simply by raising their drivers pay and limiting the overall number of hours they drive.
提綱:
Other possible factors could also lead to the decline in the number of accidents of Longhaul.
The author fails to provide the annual accident rate of Longhual after the changes were implemented. The author does not inform us the total mileage driven at Longhaul in that year.
The author fails to rule out the possibility that those highest-paid drivers earn high salary just because they are safe drivers.
Adopting the authors proposal alone may not sufficiently reduce the accident rates.
Other methods could also be used to achieve the same purpose.
注:題目中括號里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。
無論是gre issue還是gre argument,考生都應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習(xí)慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習(xí)可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性,而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強(qiáng)。