雅思寫作有哪些值得警惕的錯誤
【學生習作節選】
Nowadays, a increasing number of people concerned about the enhancement of public services. However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services other than waste money on arts is controversial issue. In my view, public service are vital to our life, but spending money on arts is definitely not just waste money.
不看不知道，一看嚇一跳!這短短3句話共53詞的開頭段里，密布著8處語法錯誤，這在雅思寫作評分標準中的 語法準確性一條上自然會大打折扣。
下面我們就挨個來八一八這些看似微小，但卻決定了雅思寫作成敗的細節問題，也請各位烤鴨對號入座!
【細節一】冠詞的使用
1. 原文：Nowadays, a increasing number ofpeople...
診斷：元音單詞increasing前的不定冠詞應用an而不是a。這樣的錯誤在口語中不容易犯，但寫到紙上時就容易忽視。所以說，寫完的作文不僅要重看，更要重讀，才能借助語感揪出這樣的小錯誤。
修改：Nowadays, an increasing number ofpeople...
2. 原文：However, whether the government... on arts is controversial issue.
診斷：issue是可數名詞，但這里既沒有用冠詞又不是復數，顯然是有問題的。
修改：However, whether the government... on arts is a controversial issue.
【細節二】名詞單復數
3. 原文：However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services ...
診斷：fund表示政府撥款的資金，此處應該使用復數，表示多筆撥款。
修改：However,whether the government should allocate funds topublic services ...
4. 原文：In my view, public service are vitalto our life, but...
診斷：句子主語public service與謂語are不一致，主語是單數，而謂語是復數用法。此處public services泛指公共服務，應用復數。
修改：In my view, public services are vitalto our life, but...
【細節三】動詞詞組用法
5. 原文：Nowadays, increasing number of people concernedabout the enhancement of public services.
診斷：動詞詞組be concernedabout...表示對關注。但這句話中使用時漏掉了be動詞，導致整個句子語法錯誤。
修改：Nowadays, increasing number of people are concerned about the enhancement of public services.
注：中括號內單詞表示已在原文中修改的錯誤。下同。
【細節四】近似用法混淆
6. 原文：However, whether the government should allocate fund to publicservices other than waste...
診斷：考生原本想用的應該是rather than，表示而不是，卻錯誤地寫成了形式類似的other than，表示除了之外，整句話的意思就改變了。
修改：However,whether the government should allocate fund to public services rather than waste...
【細節五】非謂語動詞用法
7. 原文：However, whether... to public services than waste money on arts is...
診斷：ratherthan是介詞，后面可接名詞或動名詞形式，但此處考生錯誤地接了動詞原形。
修改：However,whether... to public services than wasting money on arts is...
8. 原文：In my view... but spending money on arts is definitely not just waste money.
診斷：考生想表達在藝術上投資絕不僅僅是浪費金錢，但卻錯誤地用動詞原形waste作表語，暴露了基本功不扎實的問題
修改：In myview... but spending money on arts is definitely not just wasting money.
注：除了動名詞之外，其他幾種非謂語動詞動詞不定式、現在分詞、過去分詞等，也是寫作中的重頭戲。如果用得好自然錦上添花，但這些往往也是最容易出錯的部分。
【總結】
看完以上錯誤分析，是不是深刻體會到了The devil is in the details這句話的內涵?
所謂細節決定成敗。要想在雅思寫作中收獲高分，除了玩轉各種酷炫的觀點和行文技巧，更要留心語法細節，不要讓這些小錯誤毀了你的雅思寫作!
【學生習作節選】
Nowadays, a increasing number of people concerned about the enhancement of public services. However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services other than waste money on arts is controversial issue. In my view, public service are vital to our life, but spending money on arts is definitely not just waste money.
不看不知道，一看嚇一跳!這短短3句話共53詞的開頭段里，密布著8處語法錯誤，這在雅思寫作評分標準中的 語法準確性一條上自然會大打折扣。
下面我們就挨個來八一八這些看似微小，但卻決定了雅思寫作成敗的細節問題，也請各位烤鴨對號入座!
【細節一】冠詞的使用
1. 原文：Nowadays, a increasing number ofpeople...
診斷：元音單詞increasing前的不定冠詞應用an而不是a。這樣的錯誤在口語中不容易犯，但寫到紙上時就容易忽視。所以說，寫完的作文不僅要重看，更要重讀，才能借助語感揪出這樣的小錯誤。
修改：Nowadays, an increasing number ofpeople...
2. 原文：However, whether the government... on arts is controversial issue.
診斷：issue是可數名詞，但這里既沒有用冠詞又不是復數，顯然是有問題的。
修改：However, whether the government... on arts is a controversial issue.
【細節二】名詞單復數
3. 原文：However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services ...
診斷：fund表示政府撥款的資金，此處應該使用復數，表示多筆撥款。
修改：However,whether the government should allocate funds topublic services ...
4. 原文：In my view, public service are vitalto our life, but...
診斷：句子主語public service與謂語are不一致，主語是單數，而謂語是復數用法。此處public services泛指公共服務，應用復數。
修改：In my view, public services are vitalto our life, but...
【細節三】動詞詞組用法
5. 原文：Nowadays, increasing number of people concernedabout the enhancement of public services.
診斷：動詞詞組be concernedabout...表示對關注。但這句話中使用時漏掉了be動詞，導致整個句子語法錯誤。
修改：Nowadays, increasing number of people are concerned about the enhancement of public services.
注：中括號內單詞表示已在原文中修改的錯誤。下同。
【細節四】近似用法混淆
6. 原文：However, whether the government should allocate fund to publicservices other than waste...
診斷：考生原本想用的應該是rather than，表示而不是，卻錯誤地寫成了形式類似的other than，表示除了之外，整句話的意思就改變了。
修改：However,whether the government should allocate fund to public services rather than waste...
【細節五】非謂語動詞用法
7. 原文：However, whether... to public services than waste money on arts is...
診斷：ratherthan是介詞，后面可接名詞或動名詞形式，但此處考生錯誤地接了動詞原形。
修改：However,whether... to public services than wasting money on arts is...
8. 原文：In my view... but spending money on arts is definitely not just waste money.
診斷：考生想表達在藝術上投資絕不僅僅是浪費金錢，但卻錯誤地用動詞原形waste作表語，暴露了基本功不扎實的問題
修改：In myview... but spending money on arts is definitely not just wasting money.
注：除了動名詞之外，其他幾種非謂語動詞動詞不定式、現在分詞、過去分詞等，也是寫作中的重頭戲。如果用得好自然錦上添花，但這些往往也是最容易出錯的部分。
【總結】
看完以上錯誤分析，是不是深刻體會到了The devil is in the details這句話的內涵?
所謂細節決定成敗。要想在雅思寫作中收獲高分，除了玩轉各種酷炫的觀點和行文技巧，更要留心語法細節，不要讓這些小錯誤毀了你的雅思寫作!
