2024屆高考英語二輪復習攻關篇課件:題型6 書面表達6.2.7(新課標全國通用)
專題七 人際關系 人際關系類話題是高考英語書面表達的熱點話題,內容包括表達歉意、感謝、贊美等。寫作類型以書信、致辭和電子郵件為主。 【典例示范】(2024浙江卷) 在班級活動中,當你的想法與大多數同學不一致時,你是堅持自己的觀點并說服別人,還是尊重大多數同學的意見?請你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”為題,用英語寫一篇100~120詞的短文。要求如下: 1.從以上兩種做法中選擇一種; 2.以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。 注意:短文中,不得以任何形式透露地區、學校、同學姓名等真實信息。否則,按考試作弊行為認定。 When I Have a Different Opinion 【審題謀篇】 這是一篇議論文。不管選擇哪種方式,寫作結構都是相同的,具體寫作要素是: 【范文展示】 When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.When I have a better idea,I would choose to stick to it.By doing so,I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.①
Once we were discussing where to go for an outing.Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place.②I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea.We did have a good time that day.③Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all. 本文結構緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了許多漂亮詞匯和句式: 【亮點詞匯】 choose to do sth.選擇做某事 have an idea of doing sth.有了一個……的主意 persuade sb.into doing sth.勸服某人做某事 be worth doing值得做 stick to 堅持 【精彩句式】 句①使用了not only...but also...連接并列分句,意為“不僅……而且……”。 句②使用while表示兩種情況的對比。 句③使用了助動詞did強調謂語。 A B A (2024福州一模) “Your family are God’s gift to you,as you are to them.”是1984年諾貝爾和平獎得主Desmond Tutu曾就個人與家人關系說過的一句話。請認真品味這句話,然后按要求用英語寫一篇短文。 內容要求: 1.你對這句話的理解; 2.結合具體事例說明; 3.恰當的結尾。 注意: 1.短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數; 2.文中不能出現考生的具體信息; 3.詞數:120左右。 A B Desmond Tutu,winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1984,once said,“Your family are God’s gift to you,as you are to them.”,which tells us that ? ? ? A B 參考范文: Desmond Tutu,winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1984,once said,“Your family are God’s gift to you,as you are to them.”,which tells us that parents are to us what lighthouses are to ships.Without parents,we would get lost when we grow up;without us,parents would feel sad and lonely.? I’m the apple of my parents’ eye.As a pupil,I couldn’t remember English words,often failing exams.So bitter was the feeling of being defeated that I thought of giving up.To encourage me,they told me to fill a glass with rapid running water.Unexpectedly,I found however hard I tried my glass was only half full.Only then did I realize what I needed to learn English well were right ways.With their help,I mastered the methods of memorizing vocabulary.Now,English has become my strength,which has also become their pride and joy. No doubt both parents and we are important to each other.(136 words) A B B (2024安徽淮北二模) 假如你是李華,最近你校正在開展“感恩父母”的主題征文活動,要求學生就以下圖片談談自己的感觸。主要內容應包括: 1.簡要描述圖片信息; 2.感恩父母對于自己的付出; 3.將來如何回報父母。 要求:詞數120詞左右。開頭和結尾已給,不計入總詞數。 這道題你算過沒有? 假如父母再活30年,假如自己平均每年回家1次,每次5天,計算得出: A B As is shown in the picture,supposing our parents can live another 30 years,we are left only? ? A B 參考范文: As is shown in the picture,supposing our parents can live another 30 years,we are left only about 1 month to accompany them.What a shocking and depressing result it is!On seeing the picture,the memory of my growth with my parents’ care and love just crowds into my mind.? My parents might work hard,but they are always there for me.Whenever I get into trouble and desperately need a hand,they come over first to support me and encourage me.I grow up with their constant care and love.They share my happiness and sorrow,for which they ask for nothing in return. A B At present,nothing can better comfort my parents than my working hard and being admitted to a good university.However,when I get employed,it’s my sparing as much time as possible to stay with them that can give them much joy.Therefore,I will try my best to show my gratitude to my parents and make them live a great life without worrying about me and my life.