2024年高考英語高效書面表達專題卷：10（含解析）

　　1．

　　學校體育課與體育鍛煉

　　現代社會人們越來越重視健康和體育鍛煉，學校更是重視體育課的開設，規定高中生體育課至少兩節。請根據以下提示寫一篇關于短文：

　　[寫作內容]

　　1. 你校每周有幾節體育課？

　　2. 體育課的內容；

　　3. 你校另外還有哪些體育鍛煉形式；

　　4. 談談你或的同學對體育鍛煉的看法和做法。

　　書面表達（滿分30分）

　　保持健康的方法

　　題目要求：

　　健康對我們任何人來說都是最為重要的。為了保持健康，我們需要一些普通的知識

　　要點如下：

　　1．注意你的飲食。吃大量的水果和蔬菜, 不要吃太多富含脂肪的食物

　　2．經常性的鍛煉身體

　　3．養成良好的生活習慣，保證睡眠，不抽煙

　　要求：1．詞數100左右。

　　2．可適當添加細節。

　　3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　The Ways to Stay Healthy

　　Health is most important for any of us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge.

　　_________________________________________________________________________________

　　3．假如你是高一學生王剛，在放寒假之前你想寫一封信給你的英文老師Mrs. Chen信的內容應包括以下幾個方面：

　　1） Mrs. Chen的課堂生動有趣，自己進步很大；

　　2） 自己在學習中的困難；

　　3） 給老師的教學建議(至少兩條)；

　　注意：1）不要逐條翻譯

　　2）字數為120左右，開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數；

　　3）不得使用真實姓名

　　Dear Mrs. Chen,

　　How time flies! I have been your student for nearly half a year.___________________________

　　_________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____

　　Best wishes to you!

　　Yours,

　　Wang Gang

　　4．請用英語寫一篇100個詞左右的短文，記述一件發生在你身上（邊）的助人為樂的事跡。要求如下：

　　1. 描述事情經過；

　　2. 談談你的感想。

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________________________

　　5．最近，你們班上將要組織一場以 “To be self-confident” 為題的主題班會。你是英語課代表，請根據以下內容準備一篇120詞左右的文章作為發言稿。

　　提示：1. 簡述自信的重要性。

　　2. 假設你以前缺乏信心…(1) 誰給了你鼓勵？ （2）什么事讓你改變？

　　3. 適當加入自己的評論

　　參考答案

　　1．

　　Nowadays people focus more and more on the physical training, and the students in the school especially enjoy more physical training. We high school students have two PE classes every week and we have many forms of training, such as running, playing basketball, football, table tennis, and so on. Besides, some students get up early in the morning to run, some even run to school every day, many boy students often play basketball or football and after school or at weekend. In fact, we students all like to have PE classes very much. But sometimes we are so busy with our studies that we have little time to take part in sports.

　　【解析】

　　________________________________________________________________________________2．參考范文：

　　The Ways to Stay Healthy

　　Health is most important for any of us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge.

　　??????Firstly, pay attention to the diet. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in fiber and low in fat. As a proverb says, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” So fruit is good for health. Don’t have a lot of food that contains too much fat, such as butter. Meanwhile, sweets should be eaten in proper quantity, because too much sugar does harm to us. Don＇t drink too much coffee, either.

　　????? Secondly, exercise is necessary. Regular exercise can help us keep from getting fat. People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than those who don’t.

　　???? ?Finally, form good living habits. We should sleep for about 8 hours at night, and never work too hard. Over work and little sleep will lead to illness. What＇s more, stay away from cigarettes.

　　????? These are the things we should pay attention to so as to stay healthy.

　　【解析】略

　　3．Dear Mrs. Chen,

　　How time flies! I have been your student for nearly half a year.

　　To begin with, I want to say thanks to you for your hard work . Besides, we all enjoy your lively and interesting class. And with your help, we have made such great progress in English.

　　To be honest, I still have some puzzles. I can’t keep so many new words in mind and don’t know how to use them correctly. What’s more, grammar is a big problem to me. I often mix up its rules. Would you please help me with these problems?

　　Mrs. Chen, as we hope to improve our listening ability, could you please speak more English in Class? And we can’t bear so much homework of all the subjects, so would you please reduce the amount of English homework?

　　Best wishes to you!

　　Yours,

　　Wang Gang

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：這是一篇英文書信，寫一封信給你的英文老師Mrs. Chen1） Mrs. Chen的課堂生動有趣，自己進步很大； 2） 自己在學習中的困難；3） 給老師的教學建議(至少兩條)；

　　考點:考查英文書信

　　點評;寫作正文時就和寫提綱作文一樣，要點不能省略，要完全包括在內。要注意使用合適的連接詞和高級的詞匯和短語，也可以使用不同的句式。

　　4．

　　One possible version：

　　Last Saturday, some of my classmates and I went to the Qiandao lake for some refreshment.

　　Suddenly I noticed an old dustman collecting rubbish thrown about by the visitors. He was apparently having great difficulty collecting some small items, especially cigarette butts. An idea struck me. Why not help him collect litter? Much to my joy, all my classmates agreed and were willing to help. So we worked hard together with the dustman and collected lots of rubbish. Then we parted and waved farewell to the thankful dustman.

　　Dog-tired as I was, I felt really happy. As the saying goes, helping hands are more sacred than praying lips. I truly believe we’d have a more harmonious society if everybody took action. What a fine deed!

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于記敘文的寫作范疇,在寫作時要注意記論文的六要素,即時間、地點、人物、事件、原因和結果等,都要在文中給予清楚明白地表達。在敘述事情經過時，要寫清事情發生與發展的過程以及事情發生的前因后果等,但是要詳略得當,分清主次。同時要注意使用一般過去時來敘述過去發生的事情,而且應使用第一人稱。.此外要盡量發揮想象力,使用自己熟悉的詞語與句型將其擴展成篇,擴展時要注意要求的字數，防止由于字數不夠而引起的扣分。

　　【亮點說明】Why not help him collect litter? 讓步狀語從句Dog-tired as I was,定語從句 As the saying goes,等。.此外諺語helping hands are more sacred than praying lips.和一些高級詞匯 refreshment, apparently, struck, farewell parted的使用也是文章的一大亮點,顯示了作者詞匯的豐富和對詞語的準確把握能力..

　　考點：作文

　　5．Boys and Girls,

　　Life is but a hard and bitter journey. Therefore, I would like to say, “ No matter what happens, be self-confident.”

　　I’d like to share my own experience with you. When I was 14, I suffered from a lack of confidence. I didn’t dare to answer teachers’ questions in class and was afraid to speak in public. Later, something happened and changed my life. It was a speech contest held at our school. My mother persuaded me to participate, and she had great confidence in me. I chose a topic most appropriate to me—Self-confidence and Success. I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror. With my mother’s great love and encouragement, I won the first prize in the contest!

　　Since then, I feel strongly self-confidence is the first step towards success. So, dear friends, be self-confident and have a brighter future.

　　Thank you!

　　【解析】略

　　1．

　　學校體育課與體育鍛煉

　　現代社會人們越來越重視健康和體育鍛煉，學校更是重視體育課的開設，規定高中生體育課至少兩節。請根據以下提示寫一篇關于短文：

　　[寫作內容]

　　1. 你校每周有幾節體育課？

　　2. 體育課的內容；

　　3. 你校另外還有哪些體育鍛煉形式；

　　4. 談談你或的同學對體育鍛煉的看法和做法。

　　書面表達（滿分30分）

　　保持健康的方法

　　題目要求：

　　健康對我們任何人來說都是最為重要的。為了保持健康，我們需要一些普通的知識

　　要點如下：

　　1．注意你的飲食。吃大量的水果和蔬菜, 不要吃太多富含脂肪的食物

　　2．經常性的鍛煉身體

　　3．養成良好的生活習慣，保證睡眠，不抽煙

　　要求：1．詞數100左右。

　　2．可適當添加細節。

　　3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　The Ways to Stay Healthy

　　Health is most important for any of us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge.

　　_________________________________________________________________________________

　　3．假如你是高一學生王剛，在放寒假之前你想寫一封信給你的英文老師Mrs. Chen信的內容應包括以下幾個方面：

　　1） Mrs. Chen的課堂生動有趣，自己進步很大；

　　2） 自己在學習中的困難；

　　3） 給老師的教學建議(至少兩條)；

　　注意：1）不要逐條翻譯

　　2）字數為120左右，開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數；

　　3）不得使用真實姓名

　　Dear Mrs. Chen,

　　How time flies! I have been your student for nearly half a year.___________________________

　　_________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____

　　Best wishes to you!

　　Yours,

　　Wang Gang

　　4．請用英語寫一篇100個詞左右的短文，記述一件發生在你身上（邊）的助人為樂的事跡。要求如下：

　　1. 描述事情經過；

　　2. 談談你的感想。

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________________________

　　5．最近，你們班上將要組織一場以 “To be self-confident” 為題的主題班會。你是英語課代表，請根據以下內容準備一篇120詞左右的文章作為發言稿。

　　提示：1. 簡述自信的重要性。

　　2. 假設你以前缺乏信心…(1) 誰給了你鼓勵？ （2）什么事讓你改變？

　　3. 適當加入自己的評論

　　參考答案

　　1．

　　Nowadays people focus more and more on the physical training, and the students in the school especially enjoy more physical training. We high school students have two PE classes every week and we have many forms of training, such as running, playing basketball, football, table tennis, and so on. Besides, some students get up early in the morning to run, some even run to school every day, many boy students often play basketball or football and after school or at weekend. In fact, we students all like to have PE classes very much. But sometimes we are so busy with our studies that we have little time to take part in sports.

　　【解析】

　　________________________________________________________________________________2．參考范文：

　　The Ways to Stay Healthy

　　Health is most important for any of us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge.

　　??????Firstly, pay attention to the diet. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in fiber and low in fat. As a proverb says, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” So fruit is good for health. Don’t have a lot of food that contains too much fat, such as butter. Meanwhile, sweets should be eaten in proper quantity, because too much sugar does harm to us. Don＇t drink too much coffee, either.

　　????? Secondly, exercise is necessary. Regular exercise can help us keep from getting fat. People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than those who don’t.

　　???? ?Finally, form good living habits. We should sleep for about 8 hours at night, and never work too hard. Over work and little sleep will lead to illness. What＇s more, stay away from cigarettes.

　　????? These are the things we should pay attention to so as to stay healthy.

　　【解析】略

　　3．Dear Mrs. Chen,

　　How time flies! I have been your student for nearly half a year.

　　To begin with, I want to say thanks to you for your hard work . Besides, we all enjoy your lively and interesting class. And with your help, we have made such great progress in English.

　　To be honest, I still have some puzzles. I can’t keep so many new words in mind and don’t know how to use them correctly. What’s more, grammar is a big problem to me. I often mix up its rules. Would you please help me with these problems?

　　Mrs. Chen, as we hope to improve our listening ability, could you please speak more English in Class? And we can’t bear so much homework of all the subjects, so would you please reduce the amount of English homework?

　　Best wishes to you!

　　Yours,

　　Wang Gang

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：這是一篇英文書信，寫一封信給你的英文老師Mrs. Chen1） Mrs. Chen的課堂生動有趣，自己進步很大； 2） 自己在學習中的困難；3） 給老師的教學建議(至少兩條)；

　　考點:考查英文書信

　　點評;寫作正文時就和寫提綱作文一樣，要點不能省略，要完全包括在內。要注意使用合適的連接詞和高級的詞匯和短語，也可以使用不同的句式。

　　4．

　　One possible version：

　　Last Saturday, some of my classmates and I went to the Qiandao lake for some refreshment.

　　Suddenly I noticed an old dustman collecting rubbish thrown about by the visitors. He was apparently having great difficulty collecting some small items, especially cigarette butts. An idea struck me. Why not help him collect litter? Much to my joy, all my classmates agreed and were willing to help. So we worked hard together with the dustman and collected lots of rubbish. Then we parted and waved farewell to the thankful dustman.

　　Dog-tired as I was, I felt really happy. As the saying goes, helping hands are more sacred than praying lips. I truly believe we’d have a more harmonious society if everybody took action. What a fine deed!

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于記敘文的寫作范疇,在寫作時要注意記論文的六要素,即時間、地點、人物、事件、原因和結果等,都要在文中給予清楚明白地表達。在敘述事情經過時，要寫清事情發生與發展的過程以及事情發生的前因后果等,但是要詳略得當,分清主次。同時要注意使用一般過去時來敘述過去發生的事情,而且應使用第一人稱。.此外要盡量發揮想象力,使用自己熟悉的詞語與句型將其擴展成篇,擴展時要注意要求的字數，防止由于字數不夠而引起的扣分。

　　【亮點說明】Why not help him collect litter? 讓步狀語從句Dog-tired as I was,定語從句 As the saying goes,等。.此外諺語helping hands are more sacred than praying lips.和一些高級詞匯 refreshment, apparently, struck, farewell parted的使用也是文章的一大亮點,顯示了作者詞匯的豐富和對詞語的準確把握能力..

　　考點：作文

　　5．Boys and Girls,

　　Life is but a hard and bitter journey. Therefore, I would like to say, “ No matter what happens, be self-confident.”

　　I’d like to share my own experience with you. When I was 14, I suffered from a lack of confidence. I didn’t dare to answer teachers’ questions in class and was afraid to speak in public. Later, something happened and changed my life. It was a speech contest held at our school. My mother persuaded me to participate, and she had great confidence in me. I chose a topic most appropriate to me—Self-confidence and Success. I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror. With my mother’s great love and encouragement, I won the first prize in the contest!

　　Since then, I feel strongly self-confidence is the first step towards success. So, dear friends, be self-confident and have a brighter future.

　　Thank you!

　　【解析】略