2024屆高考英語一輪復習專題技能突破演練：42 寫作之應用文——建議信（含解析）
專題技能突破(42) 寫作之應用文——建議信
【技能講解】 建議信是寫信人向收信人對某事提出的建議和忠告。信的內容要包括寫信的原因、建議的內容、提出建議的理由等。一般由三段構成：第一段，表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單自我介紹；第二段，首先肯定對方的優點，然后再寫需要改進的地方或針對具體情況提出合理建議，一定要注意語氣，要彬彬有禮而不能過于強硬；第三段，做出總結，表達祝愿。[常用表達方式] I'm writing to express my views concerning...
It couldn't be better if you could...
If I were you, I would...
I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
I will be more than happy to see improvements in...
I hope you can take my advice into account/ consideration.
典例剖析[2024·江西南昌一模]假設你是英文報紙Teens的編輯Collins，讀者李華寫信告訴你他對高中學校生活的壓力和父母整天的嘮叨感到很厭煩，打算輟學外出打工，到社會上闖蕩一下。請你用英文給他寫一封信勸他放棄這個念頭并給出自己的建議。
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3.文章的開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。
參考詞匯：闖蕩make a living away from home
Dear Li Hua，
This is Collins from Teens. I'm sorry to hear from you that you planned to drop out and find a job away from your parents.
Yours sincerely，
Collins
[范文]
Dear Li Hua，
This is Collins from Teens. I'm sorry to hear from you that you planned to drop out and find a job away from your parents. It is a very dangerous idea for a teenager like you to intend to make a living away from home.
As a high school student, it is natural for us to meet problems in our school life. Both our teachers and parents show their love to us every day in the form of praise, criticisms or even complaints. We should be aware of it and grateful to it.①
In my opinion, the most important duty for you today is to learn knowledge and learn how to deal with different difficulties at home and at school. To face the unknown world is our next step after graduation.②
I hope my idea will be useful to you.
Yours sincerely，
Collins
[解析] 第二段中，高級詞匯運用很恰當。in the form of “以……形式”，praise “表揚”，criticism “批評”，complaint “嘮叨”，be aware of “意識到”，be grateful to “對……感激”。
第三段中動詞不定式運用很得心應手。to learn...and learn...作表語，how to deal with...作learn的賓語，to face...作主語。
技能演練[2024·貴州七校聯考]假如你是新華中學的學生李華。最近你在英語課的某個單元中學習了一些關于急救的知識，感覺很有用，想建議學校提供專門的急救課程，以便學生了解更多相關知識。于是，你給校長寫了一封信。要點如下：
1.急救課程有用；
2.需要開課的原因；
3.你的建議。
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3.開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Dear Mr President，
Our class has been studying a unit on first aid.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Mr President，
Our class has been studying a unit on first aid. It has been very useful because we have learnt about what to do to help someone who has had an accident.
We would like to have a course on first aid, because it would give information about many more situations. It would also give us the chance to practice first-aid treatments.
I suggest that the school should organize a first aid course. We think such a course in the school is a necessary part of our education and will make us more useful members of our society. Perhaps we will even save someone's life one day.
Best regards!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
專題技能突破(42) 寫作之應用文——建議信
【技能講解】 建議信是寫信人向收信人對某事提出的建議和忠告。信的內容要包括寫信的原因、建議的內容、提出建議的理由等。一般由三段構成：第一段，表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單自我介紹；第二段，首先肯定對方的優點，然后再寫需要改進的地方或針對具體情況提出合理建議，一定要注意語氣，要彬彬有禮而不能過于強硬；第三段，做出總結，表達祝愿。[常用表達方式] I'm writing to express my views concerning...
It couldn't be better if you could...
If I were you, I would...
I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
I will be more than happy to see improvements in...
I hope you can take my advice into account/ consideration.
典例剖析[2024·江西南昌一模]假設你是英文報紙Teens的編輯Collins，讀者李華寫信告訴你他對高中學校生活的壓力和父母整天的嘮叨感到很厭煩，打算輟學外出打工，到社會上闖蕩一下。請你用英文給他寫一封信勸他放棄這個念頭并給出自己的建議。
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3.文章的開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。
參考詞匯：闖蕩make a living away from home
Dear Li Hua，
This is Collins from Teens. I'm sorry to hear from you that you planned to drop out and find a job away from your parents.
Yours sincerely，
Collins
[范文]
Dear Li Hua，
This is Collins from Teens. I'm sorry to hear from you that you planned to drop out and find a job away from your parents. It is a very dangerous idea for a teenager like you to intend to make a living away from home.
As a high school student, it is natural for us to meet problems in our school life. Both our teachers and parents show their love to us every day in the form of praise, criticisms or even complaints. We should be aware of it and grateful to it.①
In my opinion, the most important duty for you today is to learn knowledge and learn how to deal with different difficulties at home and at school. To face the unknown world is our next step after graduation.②
I hope my idea will be useful to you.
Yours sincerely，
Collins
[解析] 第二段中，高級詞匯運用很恰當。in the form of “以……形式”，praise “表揚”，criticism “批評”，complaint “嘮叨”，be aware of “意識到”，be grateful to “對……感激”。
第三段中動詞不定式運用很得心應手。to learn...and learn...作表語，how to deal with...作learn的賓語，to face...作主語。
技能演練[2024·貴州七校聯考]假如你是新華中學的學生李華。最近你在英語課的某個單元中學習了一些關于急救的知識，感覺很有用，想建議學校提供專門的急救課程，以便學生了解更多相關知識。于是，你給校長寫了一封信。要點如下：
1.急救課程有用；
2.需要開課的原因；
3.你的建議。
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3.開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Dear Mr President，
Our class has been studying a unit on first aid.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Mr President，
Our class has been studying a unit on first aid. It has been very useful because we have learnt about what to do to help someone who has had an accident.
We would like to have a course on first aid, because it would give information about many more situations. It would also give us the chance to practice first-aid treatments.
I suggest that the school should organize a first aid course. We think such a course in the school is a necessary part of our education and will make us more useful members of our society. Perhaps we will even save someone's life one day.
Best regards!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
