2024屆高考英語牛津譯林版一輪寫作能力提升課件：第9講 高級詞匯和短語在寫作中的應用

　　譯林卷區版

　　英語 第9講

　　高級詞匯和短語在寫作中的應用 ——好詞妙用，與眾不同 一、魔法導航 寫作中所謂的 “高級詞匯”指的是《課程標準》中有但課本中出現的頻率 不高而實際上經常用到,或《課程標準》中沒有列入或沒有識記要求,但在實 際運用中卻出現比較頻繁的詞匯(包括短語)。要讓語言表達多樣化,就要做到 “人無我有,人有我優”。如果考生能恰當地運用此類詞匯,在寫作中定會給 評卷老師留下深刻的印象,提高書面表達的得分。下面把寫作中常用的高級 詞匯做一下簡要總結,希望對同學們的寫作有所裨益。 ?動詞類 1.attend (參加)→be involved in;participate in 2.cause(導致)→lead to;result in;contribute to;give rise to 3.consider(考慮)→take...into consideration/account 4.fail(失敗)→meet with failure 5.help (幫助)→do...a/the favor;lend...a helping hand

　　6.master(掌握)→have a good command of 7.realize(意識到)→be aware

　　8.remember(記得)→bear/keep in mind

　　9.save(節省)→set aside 10.send(送)→deliver 11.thank(感謝)→appreciate

　　12.tend to do sth.(傾向于做某事)→have a tendency to do sth. 13.use(使用)→make use of 14.understand(理解)→make sense of

　　15.be made up of(由……組成)→be composed of/consist of 16.be being built(在建造中)→be under construction 17.can't do sth.(不能做某事)→have trouble/difficulty doing sth. 18.decide to do sth.(決定做某事)→determine to do sth.;be determined to do sth. 19.have to do sth.(不得不做某事)→cannot help but do sth.;have no alternative but to do sth. 20.lie in(位于)→be located/situated in 21.think of sth. (想到某事)→sth.occurs to sb. 22.try one's best to do sth.(盡力做某事)→spare no effort to do sth./do everything in one's power to do sth. ?典句引領 I thought of a good idea suddenly. →All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to me.

　　我突然想到一個好主意。 We should remember that we should love nature.

　　→We should keep in mind that we should love nature.

　　?雕詞琢句 (1)很多因素導致了交通問題。(2024江蘇) ??

　　?? ?答案　 Quite a few factors give rise to/lead to/result in the traffic problem. (2)我真誠地希望你能考慮我的建議。(2024浙江)??

　　? 答案　 I sincerely hope you can take my suggestions into account.

　　(3)除了采取措施向污染宣戰,我們別無選擇。 ??

　　?? ?答案　 We have no alternative but to take measures to fight against pollution. ?名詞類 1.chance(機會)→opportunity

　　2.choice(選擇)→alternative

　　3.people(人們)→individuals 4.result(結果)→consequence 5.shortcoming(缺點)→drawback 6.more and more people(越來越多的人)→an increasing number of people ?典句引領 You should seize the chance to overcome the shortcoming. →You should seize the opportunity to overcome the drawback.

　　你應該抓住這個機會克服這個缺點。 ?雕詞琢句 不同的人對食品安全的問題有著不同的看法。 ???

　　? ?答案　 Different individuals have different opinions about the safety of food.

　　?形容詞類 1.difficult(困難的)→challenging 2.enough (足夠的)→adequate

　　3.good(好的)→outstanding;distinguished;brilliant 4.important(重要的)→essential;vital;significant 5.proper(恰當的)→appropriate

　　6.rich(豐富的)→abundant

　　7.tired(疲憊的)→exhausted;worn out 8.be angry with(對……生氣)→be annoyed with 9.be busy with(忙于……)→be occupied with 10.be very happy(很高興)→be wild with joy 11.be+adj. (important/useful/beneficial/helpful/valuable) →be of+n. (importance/use/benefit/help/value) 12.be satisfied with(對……感到滿意)→express one's satisfaction with

　　13.be interested in(對……感興趣)→show interest in;be fascinated by;be crazy about;...appeal to sb.

　　?典句引領 Hearing the exciting news, all of us were very happy. →Hearing the exciting news, all of us were wild with joy. 聽到這個令人興奮的消息,我們都欣喜若狂。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)In the coming three years, 　????(我們的學校生活將非常具有挑戰 性). (2024江西) ?答案　 our school life will be challenging (2)事實上,遵守交通規則很重要。(2024江蘇) ??

　　?? ?答案　As a matter of fact, obeying the traffic rules is vital/significant.

　　?副詞類 1.finally(最后)→eventually 2.hardly(幾乎不)→barely

　　3.however(然而)→nevertheless 4.hurriedly(匆忙地)→in a hurry 5.immediately(立刻)→without hesitation/delay;in a flash 6.nowadays(現在)→currently

　　7.so(因此)→consequently;therefore;thus 8.suddenly(突然)→all of a sudden 9.very(非常)→extremely ?典句引領 Finally, we worked out the difficult problem which was very tough for them. →Eventually, we worked out the difficult problem which was extremely tough for them. 最終,我們解決了對他們來講極其困難的問題。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)　????(毫不猶豫), I decided to follow them and did have lots of fun that day. (2024浙江) ?答案　 Without hesitation

　　(2)昨天雨下得很大。因此,我們取消了會議。 ??

　　?? ?答案　 It rained heavily yesterday. Therefore, we called off the meeting.

　　?介詞(短語)類 1.considering(考慮到)→in view of

　　2.during(在……期間)→in the course of

　　3.in fact(事實上)→as a matter of fact 4.in a word(總之)→to summarize;in conclusion; to sum up

　　?典句引領 Considering his age and conditions, he has done it very well. →In view of his age and conditions, he has done it very well. 考慮到他的年齡和條件,他做得已經相當不錯了。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)事實上,每個人都有自己的優點和缺點。 ??

　　?? ?答案　 As a matter of fact, everyone has his own strengths and weaknesses.

　　(2)總之,為了提高普通話水平,你最好多加練習。(2024四川) ??

　　?? ?答案　 In conclusion, in order to improve your Mandarin, you had better prac tice more.

　　二、學以致用 1.單句美容

　　寫出與畫線部分意思相近的詞或短語。 (1)Bored with the long lecture,I turned to an interesting novel. ?

　　??? (2)His composition was so good that all of us wanted to read it. ?

　　??? (3)In fact,that English song didn't attract the audience.????

　　(4)I believe that the advice he has offered to you will be helpful to your English study.????

　　(5)In my opinion,you should take part in some social activities to open your eyes.????

　　(6)In a word,if you use your spare time better,you will improve your spoken Eng- lish soon.????

　　?答案 (1)Fed up with;amusing/appealing (2)outstanding/excellent;were inclined to/tended to (3)Actually/As a matter of fact;appeal to/capture the attention of

　　(4)am convinced/hold a firm belief;beneficial/of help (5)From my point of view/As far as I'm concerned;participate in;broaden your horizons

　　(6)To summarize/In conclusion/To sum up;provided;make full use of/make the most of;promote

　　2.話題寫作 [本期話題]　文化節日 [寫作要求]　至少使用三處高級詞匯。 根據下面的信息提示,寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。 1.中秋節是中國的傳統節日之一,非常受歡迎; 2.無論工作多忙,人們都盡量回家慶祝; 3.家人在一塊兒賞月、吃月餅,玩得很高興; 4.人們還有旅游、拜訪親友等其他活動。????

　　?答案 One possible version: Being one of the traditional Chinese festivals in China, the Mid-Autumn Festival has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually,no matter how busy people are with their work,they still do everything in their power to go home for the celebration. When enjoying the full moon as well as eating moon cakes to- gether, people are wild with joy. In addition, they have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting relatives or friends.In conclusion, the Mid-Autumn Festival is of great importance for Chinese people.

　　三、美文賞讀 請根據以下提示,并結合事例,用英語寫一篇短文。 As Madame Curie put it,“I never see what has been done;I only see what re- mains to be done.” 注意: 1.無須寫標題; 2.除詩歌外,文體不限; 3.內容必須結合你生活中的一個事例; 4.文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱; 5.詞數100左

　　?答案 One possible version: ①In the course of my years of school life,what strikes me most is that I've learned I should look at what I need to do in future,rather than be lost in what I've done before. When I was luckily admitted into this key senior high school three years ago with good grades,I ②was wild with joy,thinking that the good grades might guarantee me enough time for relaxation. ③Therefore,I found myself hanging around with some other students rather than devoting myself to my studies.It didn't take long before I realized that I fell behind sharply in my studies,sometimes even with my homework unfinished.Fully④ aware of the fact that I still had a long way to go before I relaxed,I began to catch up. We ⑤have a tendency to be content with what we've achieved,forgetting all about our road ahead,which may actually put us at a disadvantage.Only when we ⑥keep in mind what remains for us to do can we make continuous progress. 本文①—⑥充分、靈活地使用了高級詞匯或短語,提升了語言表達層次,展示 了作者高超的語言運用能力,值得大家揣摩和學習。 【寫作點評】

　　譯林卷區版

　　英語 第9講

　　高級詞匯和短語在寫作中的應用 ——好詞妙用，與眾不同 一、魔法導航 寫作中所謂的 “高級詞匯”指的是《課程標準》中有但課本中出現的頻率 不高而實際上經常用到,或《課程標準》中沒有列入或沒有識記要求,但在實 際運用中卻出現比較頻繁的詞匯(包括短語)。要讓語言表達多樣化,就要做到 “人無我有,人有我優”。如果考生能恰當地運用此類詞匯,在寫作中定會給 評卷老師留下深刻的印象,提高書面表達的得分。下面把寫作中常用的高級 詞匯做一下簡要總結,希望對同學們的寫作有所裨益。 ?動詞類 1.attend (參加)→be involved in;participate in 2.cause(導致)→lead to;result in;contribute to;give rise to 3.consider(考慮)→take...into consideration/account 4.fail(失敗)→meet with failure 5.help (幫助)→do...a/the favor;lend...a helping hand

　　6.master(掌握)→have a good command of 7.realize(意識到)→be aware

　　8.remember(記得)→bear/keep in mind

　　9.save(節省)→set aside 10.send(送)→deliver 11.thank(感謝)→appreciate

　　12.tend to do sth.(傾向于做某事)→have a tendency to do sth. 13.use(使用)→make use of 14.understand(理解)→make sense of

　　15.be made up of(由……組成)→be composed of/consist of 16.be being built(在建造中)→be under construction 17.can't do sth.(不能做某事)→have trouble/difficulty doing sth. 18.decide to do sth.(決定做某事)→determine to do sth.;be determined to do sth. 19.have to do sth.(不得不做某事)→cannot help but do sth.;have no alternative but to do sth. 20.lie in(位于)→be located/situated in 21.think of sth. (想到某事)→sth.occurs to sb. 22.try one's best to do sth.(盡力做某事)→spare no effort to do sth./do everything in one's power to do sth. ?典句引領 I thought of a good idea suddenly. →All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to me.

　　我突然想到一個好主意。 We should remember that we should love nature.

　　→We should keep in mind that we should love nature.

　　?雕詞琢句 (1)很多因素導致了交通問題。(2024江蘇) ??

　　?? ?答案　 Quite a few factors give rise to/lead to/result in the traffic problem. (2)我真誠地希望你能考慮我的建議。(2024浙江)??

　　? 答案　 I sincerely hope you can take my suggestions into account.

　　(3)除了采取措施向污染宣戰,我們別無選擇。 ??

　　?? ?答案　 We have no alternative but to take measures to fight against pollution. ?名詞類 1.chance(機會)→opportunity

　　2.choice(選擇)→alternative

　　3.people(人們)→individuals 4.result(結果)→consequence 5.shortcoming(缺點)→drawback 6.more and more people(越來越多的人)→an increasing number of people ?典句引領 You should seize the chance to overcome the shortcoming. →You should seize the opportunity to overcome the drawback.

　　你應該抓住這個機會克服這個缺點。 ?雕詞琢句 不同的人對食品安全的問題有著不同的看法。 ???

　　? ?答案　 Different individuals have different opinions about the safety of food.

　　?形容詞類 1.difficult(困難的)→challenging 2.enough (足夠的)→adequate

　　3.good(好的)→outstanding;distinguished;brilliant 4.important(重要的)→essential;vital;significant 5.proper(恰當的)→appropriate

　　6.rich(豐富的)→abundant

　　7.tired(疲憊的)→exhausted;worn out 8.be angry with(對……生氣)→be annoyed with 9.be busy with(忙于……)→be occupied with 10.be very happy(很高興)→be wild with joy 11.be+adj. (important/useful/beneficial/helpful/valuable) →be of+n. (importance/use/benefit/help/value) 12.be satisfied with(對……感到滿意)→express one's satisfaction with

　　13.be interested in(對……感興趣)→show interest in;be fascinated by;be crazy about;...appeal to sb.

　　?典句引領 Hearing the exciting news, all of us were very happy. →Hearing the exciting news, all of us were wild with joy. 聽到這個令人興奮的消息,我們都欣喜若狂。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)In the coming three years, 　????(我們的學校生活將非常具有挑戰 性). (2024江西) ?答案　 our school life will be challenging (2)事實上,遵守交通規則很重要。(2024江蘇) ??

　　?? ?答案　As a matter of fact, obeying the traffic rules is vital/significant.

　　?副詞類 1.finally(最后)→eventually 2.hardly(幾乎不)→barely

　　3.however(然而)→nevertheless 4.hurriedly(匆忙地)→in a hurry 5.immediately(立刻)→without hesitation/delay;in a flash 6.nowadays(現在)→currently

　　7.so(因此)→consequently;therefore;thus 8.suddenly(突然)→all of a sudden 9.very(非常)→extremely ?典句引領 Finally, we worked out the difficult problem which was very tough for them. →Eventually, we worked out the difficult problem which was extremely tough for them. 最終,我們解決了對他們來講極其困難的問題。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)　????(毫不猶豫), I decided to follow them and did have lots of fun that day. (2024浙江) ?答案　 Without hesitation

　　(2)昨天雨下得很大。因此,我們取消了會議。 ??

　　?? ?答案　 It rained heavily yesterday. Therefore, we called off the meeting.

　　?介詞(短語)類 1.considering(考慮到)→in view of

　　2.during(在……期間)→in the course of

　　3.in fact(事實上)→as a matter of fact 4.in a word(總之)→to summarize;in conclusion; to sum up

　　?典句引領 Considering his age and conditions, he has done it very well. →In view of his age and conditions, he has done it very well. 考慮到他的年齡和條件,他做得已經相當不錯了。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)事實上,每個人都有自己的優點和缺點。 ??

　　?? ?答案　 As a matter of fact, everyone has his own strengths and weaknesses.

　　(2)總之,為了提高普通話水平,你最好多加練習。(2024四川) ??

　　?? ?答案　 In conclusion, in order to improve your Mandarin, you had better prac tice more.

　　二、學以致用 1.單句美容

　　寫出與畫線部分意思相近的詞或短語。 (1)Bored with the long lecture,I turned to an interesting novel. ?

　　??? (2)His composition was so good that all of us wanted to read it. ?

　　??? (3)In fact,that English song didn't attract the audience.????

　　(4)I believe that the advice he has offered to you will be helpful to your English study.????

　　(5)In my opinion,you should take part in some social activities to open your eyes.????

　　(6)In a word,if you use your spare time better,you will improve your spoken Eng- lish soon.????

　　?答案 (1)Fed up with;amusing/appealing (2)outstanding/excellent;were inclined to/tended to (3)Actually/As a matter of fact;appeal to/capture the attention of

　　(4)am convinced/hold a firm belief;beneficial/of help (5)From my point of view/As far as I'm concerned;participate in;broaden your horizons

　　(6)To summarize/In conclusion/To sum up;provided;make full use of/make the most of;promote

　　2.話題寫作 [本期話題]　文化節日 [寫作要求]　至少使用三處高級詞匯。 根據下面的信息提示,寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。 1.中秋節是中國的傳統節日之一,非常受歡迎; 2.無論工作多忙,人們都盡量回家慶祝; 3.家人在一塊兒賞月、吃月餅,玩得很高興; 4.人們還有旅游、拜訪親友等其他活動。????

　　?答案 One possible version: Being one of the traditional Chinese festivals in China, the Mid-Autumn Festival has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually,no matter how busy people are with their work,they still do everything in their power to go home for the celebration. When enjoying the full moon as well as eating moon cakes to- gether, people are wild with joy. In addition, they have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting relatives or friends.In conclusion, the Mid-Autumn Festival is of great importance for Chinese people.

　　三、美文賞讀 請根據以下提示,并結合事例,用英語寫一篇短文。 As Madame Curie put it,“I never see what has been done;I only see what re- mains to be done.” 注意: 1.無須寫標題; 2.除詩歌外,文體不限; 3.內容必須結合你生活中的一個事例; 4.文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱; 5.詞數100左

　　?答案 One possible version: ①In the course of my years of school life,what strikes me most is that I've learned I should look at what I need to do in future,rather than be lost in what I've done before. When I was luckily admitted into this key senior high school three years ago with good grades,I ②was wild with joy,thinking that the good grades might guarantee me enough time for relaxation. ③Therefore,I found myself hanging around with some other students rather than devoting myself to my studies.It didn't take long before I realized that I fell behind sharply in my studies,sometimes even with my homework unfinished.Fully④ aware of the fact that I still had a long way to go before I relaxed,I began to catch up. We ⑤have a tendency to be content with what we've achieved,forgetting all about our road ahead,which may actually put us at a disadvantage.Only when we ⑥keep in mind what remains for us to do can we make continuous progress. 本文①—⑥充分、靈活地使用了高級詞匯或短語,提升了語言表達層次,展示 了作者高超的語言運用能力,值得大家揣摩和學習。 【寫作點評】