高三英語備考總復習課件人教版必修4:寫作進行時-應用文 21張
必 修 4
寫作進行時
——應用文(演講稿、發言稿)[技巧點撥]
.寫作要點
發言稿一般要有問題的提出、分析、認識自己的設想與構思等。具體地說:
1.了解書寫格式。(1)稱呼 (2)問候 (3)介紹 (4)表達心情和謝意 (5)介紹演講的標題 (6)演講的內容 (7)再次表示感謝
2.注意發言稿的結構。發言稿第一段側重介紹事情的發生、發展和結局。第二段應緊扣主題表示歡迎、歡送、號召、建議、個人看法等。
3.序號的巧妙運用。一些發言稿內容繁多,自己的感受和體會也比較多,我們直接寫出問題或自己的想法時,可能會比較零亂,這時可用序號1、2、3等表示,問題講完,即告結束。
4.語言直白簡潔。發言稿是直接面向聽眾的,所以我們在語言的選擇上要簡短,盡可能多使用簡單句,聽眾一聽就能聽懂,當然,一些經典的長句我們也可以用在文中。
5.觀點鮮明,感情真摯。發言稿觀點鮮明,顯示著說話者對一種理性認識的肯定,也顯示著說話者對客觀事物見解的透徹程度,能給人以可信任和可靠感,感情真摯才能打動人,引起聽眾的共鳴。
?、?常用句式
1.First of all, thank you for giving me this opportunity.
2.Many people believe/hold the view/think that...
3.We, can make it clear from the above discussion that...
4.If you choose me to be chairman of the Student Union, I will...
5.It is a great honour for me to stand here and give my speech.
6.The topic of my speech today is...
7.Thanks for your listening(to my speech).
8.As far as I'm concerned, it is a good idea to...
[習作點評]
(2010·福建)
假設你是李華,福建省某中學高中學生,今年暑假將前往澳大利亞參加主題為“WATER FOR LIFE”的交流活動。請你以參訪代表的身份,根據以下圖片提示,用英語寫一篇發言稿。
注意:1.根據圖片的內容適當展開,以使行文連貫;
2.開頭與結尾已寫好,不計入總詞數;
3.文中不能出現考生的具體信息;
4.詞數:120~150。
參考詞匯:短缺shortage; 資源 resource
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning, I'm Li Hua from Fujian, China. It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.________________ ____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thank you.
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning, I'm Li Hua from Fujian, China. It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.
Which we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasing severe mainly due to global warming, enviro- nmental pollution and the ever-increasing population.
【非限制性定語從句,表示“正如……”,應該用as;修飾形容詞severe,應該使用副詞形式increasingly?!縏herefore, it's high time we do something about it. 【在It's high time后的從句中動詞用過去式did?!縁irstly, an effective way, I think, is reserve water in a scientific way for future use. 【此處應該使用動詞不定式to reserve作表語。】Secondly, new methods need to_develop to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water. 【此處應該使用動名詞一般式
developing或者動詞不定式被動式to be developed。】Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law. Last but not least, it's everyone's responsible to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life. 【It's one's responsibility to do something表示“做……是某人的職責”,為固定搭配?!縄n conclusion, people around the world should_aware_of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically. 【should be aware of表示“意識到”。在助動詞should后要加be。】
That's all. Thank you.
[跟蹤演練]
(2011·江西)
假設你是星光中學的李華,將參加主題為“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿,主要內容包括:
1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題。
2.騎自行車的益處,如節能環保、有利健康等。
參考詞匯:低碳生活(low-carbon life);節能(energy saving)
注意:1.詞數:120詞左右;
2.演講稿開頭和結尾已給出,請將其抄寫在答題卡上且該部分不計入總詞數。
Good morning,everyone,
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let's Ride Bicycles”.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
參考范文:
Good morning, everyone,
I'm Li Hua from Xiangguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is
“Let's Ride Bicycles”.
As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems then? As far as I'm concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas. What's more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let's take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!
Thank you!
必 修 4
寫作進行時
——應用文(演講稿、發言稿)[技巧點撥]
.寫作要點
發言稿一般要有問題的提出、分析、認識自己的設想與構思等。具體地說:
1.了解書寫格式。(1)稱呼 (2)問候 (3)介紹 (4)表達心情和謝意 (5)介紹演講的標題 (6)演講的內容 (7)再次表示感謝
2.注意發言稿的結構。發言稿第一段側重介紹事情的發生、發展和結局。第二段應緊扣主題表示歡迎、歡送、號召、建議、個人看法等。
3.序號的巧妙運用。一些發言稿內容繁多,自己的感受和體會也比較多,我們直接寫出問題或自己的想法時,可能會比較零亂,這時可用序號1、2、3等表示,問題講完,即告結束。
4.語言直白簡潔。發言稿是直接面向聽眾的,所以我們在語言的選擇上要簡短,盡可能多使用簡單句,聽眾一聽就能聽懂,當然,一些經典的長句我們也可以用在文中。
5.觀點鮮明,感情真摯。發言稿觀點鮮明,顯示著說話者對一種理性認識的肯定,也顯示著說話者對客觀事物見解的透徹程度,能給人以可信任和可靠感,感情真摯才能打動人,引起聽眾的共鳴。
?、?常用句式
1.First of all, thank you for giving me this opportunity.
2.Many people believe/hold the view/think that...
3.We, can make it clear from the above discussion that...
4.If you choose me to be chairman of the Student Union, I will...
5.It is a great honour for me to stand here and give my speech.
6.The topic of my speech today is...
7.Thanks for your listening(to my speech).
8.As far as I'm concerned, it is a good idea to...
[習作點評]
(2010·福建)
假設你是李華,福建省某中學高中學生,今年暑假將前往澳大利亞參加主題為“WATER FOR LIFE”的交流活動。請你以參訪代表的身份,根據以下圖片提示,用英語寫一篇發言稿。
注意:1.根據圖片的內容適當展開,以使行文連貫;
2.開頭與結尾已寫好,不計入總詞數;
3.文中不能出現考生的具體信息;
4.詞數:120~150。
參考詞匯:短缺shortage; 資源 resource
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning, I'm Li Hua from Fujian, China. It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.________________ ____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thank you.
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning, I'm Li Hua from Fujian, China. It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.
Which we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasing severe mainly due to global warming, enviro- nmental pollution and the ever-increasing population.
【非限制性定語從句,表示“正如……”,應該用as;修飾形容詞severe,應該使用副詞形式increasingly。】Therefore, it's high time we do something about it. 【在It's high time后的從句中動詞用過去式did?!縁irstly, an effective way, I think, is reserve water in a scientific way for future use. 【此處應該使用動詞不定式to reserve作表語。】Secondly, new methods need to_develop to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water. 【此處應該使用動名詞一般式
developing或者動詞不定式被動式to be developed?!縏hirdly, we must stop water pollution by law. Last but not least, it's everyone's responsible to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life. 【It's one's responsibility to do something表示“做……是某人的職責”,為固定搭配。】In conclusion, people around the world should_aware_of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically. 【should be aware of表示“意識到”。在助動詞should后要加be。】
That's all. Thank you.
[跟蹤演練]
(2011·江西)
假設你是星光中學的李華,將參加主題為“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿,主要內容包括:
1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題。
2.騎自行車的益處,如節能環保、有利健康等。
參考詞匯:低碳生活(low-carbon life);節能(energy saving)
注意:1.詞數:120詞左右;
2.演講稿開頭和結尾已給出,請將其抄寫在答題卡上且該部分不計入總詞數。
Good morning,everyone,
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let's Ride Bicycles”.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
參考范文:
Good morning, everyone,
I'm Li Hua from Xiangguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is
“Let's Ride Bicycles”.
As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems then? As far as I'm concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas. What's more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let's take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!
Thank you!