2024屆高考英語二輪復習強化練：短文改錯三
第一部分 (一)
(2024·課標全國Ⅱ)
One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
答案：
One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his .It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy
a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After
at the toy for some time，he turned around and found
his parents were missing.Tony was scared and
to cry.A woman saw him crying and
him to wait outside
shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw
parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were
worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
解析：
第一處：parent→parents 由下文的his parents were...以及倒數第二句中的媽媽說的話中可知托尼是和爸爸、媽媽一起去的，所以應該用復數形式parents。
第二處：on→in 表示在商店的櫥窗里，用介詞in。
第三處：去掉very 句中使用了so...that...結構，very多余，故將其去掉。
第四處：looks→looking 該動詞位于介詞after后，要用動詞的-ing形式，故把looks改為looking。
第五處：where→that或去掉where found后是一個賓語從句，句子意思和成分完整，應該用只起連接作用的that引導，也可以省略。故把where改為that或去掉where。
第六處：begun→began 本文描述的是過去的經歷，and連接的兩個并列成分應當時態一致，故此處用一般過去時，把begun改為began。
第七處：telling→told 由and可知，此處和謂語動詞saw并列，故用過去式。
第八處：a→the 這里指的是前文提到的shop，所以用定冠詞the修飾，表特指。
第九處：saw后加his 這里特指托尼的父母親，所以用物主代詞his修飾parents。
第十處：terrible→terribly 修飾形容詞worried要用副詞形式。
(二)
(2024·陜西)
My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
答案：
My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do
special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the
biscuits in the world，so I
to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic
of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really .My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor
I was packing them up.
At
party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just
get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me
the biscuits with happy laughter!
解析：
第一處：去掉in 用last，next等表示的時間狀語前不用介詞，故去掉in。
第二處：anything→something anything用于疑問句和否定句中，something用于肯定句中，故將anything改為something。
第三處：better→best 表示比較的范圍是in the world，故改為最高級。
第四處：decide→decided decide意為“決定”，此處時態應與全文時態一致，故改為decided。
第五處：step→steps step是可數名詞，前面有some修飾，故用復數形式。
第六處：well→good 系動詞be后接形容詞作表語，副詞不能充當表語，故改well為good。
第七處：after→when/while 句意為：我唯一的錯誤就是當我正在打包的時候掉地上了一些。根據句意可知將after改為when或while。
第八處：a→the 第一段第二句中有提到party，此處為第二次提到，故用the表特指。故將a改為the。
第九處：just后加to 分析句子結構可知，might have to是謂語部分，從而get不再是謂語動詞，故只能是非謂語動詞。此處表示目的，故用不定式。
第十處：enjoy→enjoying 此處my coach and me作介詞of的賓語，enjoy與my coach and me之間是主動關系，應用現在分詞形式。
(三)
(2024·四川)
Hi, Janice，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three
new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
答案：
Hi, Janice，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want
share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I
you last time, I made three
new
here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time
in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me .And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore,
I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. do you think I should do? If you
me，would you talk to ？
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
解析：
第一處：want后加to want to do sth.為固定搭配，意為“想要做某事”。
第二處：tell→told 根據從句中的時間狀語last time可知該動作發生在過去，故應用一般過去時。
第三處：friend→friends friend為可數名詞，根據前面的數詞three可知此處應用復數形式。故將friend改為friends。
第四處：sing→singing spend some time(in) doing sth.是固定搭配，意為“花時間做某事”。故將sing改為singing。
第五處：many→much 此處說的是在卡拉OK唱歌這件事讓作者花費了很多錢，浪費了很多時間。many指代可數名詞，much指代不可數名詞。故將many改為much。
第六處：so→but 逗號前說不想再去了，而后面又說害怕失去友誼，由此可知逗號前后為轉折關系，而非因果關系。故將so改為but。
第七處：How→What 該句中do you think為插入語，分析句子成分可知動詞do后缺少賓語，而how為疑問副詞，在句中作方式狀語，作賓語應用what。
第八處：are→were 根據下文的would可知此處為if條件句的虛擬語氣。與現在事實相反，應用一般過去時。故將are改成were。
第九處：him→them 上文提到作者交了三個朋友，再結合上文中的their friendship可知此處指代那三個朋友，為復數。故將him改為them。
第十處：去掉with 固定搭配help sb. with sth.意為“幫助某人某事”，help后賓語為人時不用介詞。故去掉with。
(四)
(2024·浙江)
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class，I could easy see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.
答案：
My old classroom was interesting because three
of the classroom were made
glass.I enjoyed
close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class，I could
see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom
also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around .Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in
hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me
like I was dreaming. I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.
解析：
第一處：side→sides side是可數名詞，前面有數詞three修飾，故應改為復數形式。
第二處：from→of 墻壁由玻璃制成，看得出原材料，故將介詞from改為of。
第三處：sit→sitting enjoy后接動名詞作賓語，故將sit改為sitting，和looking at the view構成并列結構。
第四處：easy→easily see是動詞，需要用副詞來修飾，故將easy改為easily。
第五處：is→was 全文用的都是過去時態，故將is改為was，與全文時態保持一致。
第六處：them→it 此處代詞代替的是the school，故將them改為it。
第七處：刪掉not 本文主要是談論透過玻璃墻能欣賞到外面的景色，因而是能欣賞到山上的雪景，故此處的否定意義不符，故去掉not。
第八處：in與hurry之間加a in a hurry意為“立即；匆忙”，為固定搭配。
第九處：felt→feel make使役動詞后用動詞原形作賓語補足語，構成make sb.do sth.結構，意為“使某人做某事”，故將felt改為feel。
第十處：If→Although/Though 句意為：盡管當我在那個教室讀書時還只是個孩子，但我永遠不會忘記它。根據語境可知，這是一個讓步狀語從句，故將If改為Although或者Though。
第一部分 (一)
(2024·課標全國Ⅱ)
One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
答案：
One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his .It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy
a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After
at the toy for some time，he turned around and found
his parents were missing.Tony was scared and
to cry.A woman saw him crying and
him to wait outside
shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw
parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were
worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
解析：
第一處：parent→parents 由下文的his parents were...以及倒數第二句中的媽媽說的話中可知托尼是和爸爸、媽媽一起去的，所以應該用復數形式parents。
第二處：on→in 表示在商店的櫥窗里，用介詞in。
第三處：去掉very 句中使用了so...that...結構，very多余，故將其去掉。
第四處：looks→looking 該動詞位于介詞after后，要用動詞的-ing形式，故把looks改為looking。
第五處：where→that或去掉where found后是一個賓語從句，句子意思和成分完整，應該用只起連接作用的that引導，也可以省略。故把where改為that或去掉where。
第六處：begun→began 本文描述的是過去的經歷，and連接的兩個并列成分應當時態一致，故此處用一般過去時，把begun改為began。
第七處：telling→told 由and可知，此處和謂語動詞saw并列，故用過去式。
第八處：a→the 這里指的是前文提到的shop，所以用定冠詞the修飾，表特指。
第九處：saw后加his 這里特指托尼的父母親，所以用物主代詞his修飾parents。
第十處：terrible→terribly 修飾形容詞worried要用副詞形式。
(二)
(2024·陜西)
My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
答案：
My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do
special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the
biscuits in the world，so I
to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic
of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really .My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor
I was packing them up.
At
party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just
get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me
the biscuits with happy laughter!
解析：
第一處：去掉in 用last，next等表示的時間狀語前不用介詞，故去掉in。
第二處：anything→something anything用于疑問句和否定句中，something用于肯定句中，故將anything改為something。
第三處：better→best 表示比較的范圍是in the world，故改為最高級。
第四處：decide→decided decide意為“決定”，此處時態應與全文時態一致，故改為decided。
第五處：step→steps step是可數名詞，前面有some修飾，故用復數形式。
第六處：well→good 系動詞be后接形容詞作表語，副詞不能充當表語，故改well為good。
第七處：after→when/while 句意為：我唯一的錯誤就是當我正在打包的時候掉地上了一些。根據句意可知將after改為when或while。
第八處：a→the 第一段第二句中有提到party，此處為第二次提到，故用the表特指。故將a改為the。
第九處：just后加to 分析句子結構可知，might have to是謂語部分，從而get不再是謂語動詞，故只能是非謂語動詞。此處表示目的，故用不定式。
第十處：enjoy→enjoying 此處my coach and me作介詞of的賓語，enjoy與my coach and me之間是主動關系，應用現在分詞形式。
(三)
(2024·四川)
Hi, Janice，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three
new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
答案：
Hi, Janice，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want
share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I
you last time, I made three
new
here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time
in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me .And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore,
I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. do you think I should do? If you
me，would you talk to ？
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
解析：
第一處：want后加to want to do sth.為固定搭配，意為“想要做某事”。
第二處：tell→told 根據從句中的時間狀語last time可知該動作發生在過去，故應用一般過去時。
第三處：friend→friends friend為可數名詞，根據前面的數詞three可知此處應用復數形式。故將friend改為friends。
第四處：sing→singing spend some time(in) doing sth.是固定搭配，意為“花時間做某事”。故將sing改為singing。
第五處：many→much 此處說的是在卡拉OK唱歌這件事讓作者花費了很多錢，浪費了很多時間。many指代可數名詞，much指代不可數名詞。故將many改為much。
第六處：so→but 逗號前說不想再去了，而后面又說害怕失去友誼，由此可知逗號前后為轉折關系，而非因果關系。故將so改為but。
第七處：How→What 該句中do you think為插入語，分析句子成分可知動詞do后缺少賓語，而how為疑問副詞，在句中作方式狀語，作賓語應用what。
第八處：are→were 根據下文的would可知此處為if條件句的虛擬語氣。與現在事實相反，應用一般過去時。故將are改成were。
第九處：him→them 上文提到作者交了三個朋友，再結合上文中的their friendship可知此處指代那三個朋友，為復數。故將him改為them。
第十處：去掉with 固定搭配help sb. with sth.意為“幫助某人某事”，help后賓語為人時不用介詞。故去掉with。
(四)
(2024·浙江)
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class，I could easy see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.
答案：
My old classroom was interesting because three
of the classroom were made
glass.I enjoyed
close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class，I could
see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom
also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around .Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in
hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me
like I was dreaming. I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.
解析：
第一處：side→sides side是可數名詞，前面有數詞three修飾，故應改為復數形式。
第二處：from→of 墻壁由玻璃制成，看得出原材料，故將介詞from改為of。
第三處：sit→sitting enjoy后接動名詞作賓語，故將sit改為sitting，和looking at the view構成并列結構。
第四處：easy→easily see是動詞，需要用副詞來修飾，故將easy改為easily。
第五處：is→was 全文用的都是過去時態，故將is改為was，與全文時態保持一致。
第六處：them→it 此處代詞代替的是the school，故將them改為it。
第七處：刪掉not 本文主要是談論透過玻璃墻能欣賞到外面的景色，因而是能欣賞到山上的雪景，故此處的否定意義不符，故去掉not。
第八處：in與hurry之間加a in a hurry意為“立即；匆忙”，為固定搭配。
第九處：felt→feel make使役動詞后用動詞原形作賓語補足語，構成make sb.do sth.結構，意為“使某人做某事”，故將felt改為feel。
第十處：If→Although/Though 句意為：盡管當我在那個教室讀書時還只是個孩子，但我永遠不會忘記它。根據語境可知，這是一個讓步狀語從句，故將If改為Although或者Though。
