四川省成都市2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（1）

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成都市2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（1）附參考范文

一、導語 ? ? What does beauty really mean？ Everybody has own definition. The standard of beauty changes with different society， culture and nations. Some hold the point that the beautiful appearance is of great importance， which is visible to all. Others have the idea that the spiritual beauty is the loveliest one, which lasts long. However different it might be， their opinions are all acceptable. ? ??

什么是美呢？每個人都有自己的定義。美的標準因社會、文化和國度不同而產生差異。有的人認為相貌上的美是最重要、最直觀的美，有的人則認為心靈上的美才是最可愛、最長久的美。無論哪種美，這些對美的定義都是有道理的。 ? ? ? ? 二、創設情境 ? ? 以“What is beauty in your mind”為主題，發表自己的看法，題目自擬。要求：1. 行文流暢，觀點鮮明；2. 內容豐富，層次分明；3. 詞數150左右。

三、學生習作

Beauty will buy no beef ? ? Everyone admires beauty. Nowadays some people tend to think that they own beauty if they have a good looking. They are not satisfied with their appearance. They spend much money taking a kind of operation. Can beauty really be man-made？If so， everybody can get beauty. As a result，there is no beauty at all. ? ? The appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the world. Everyone should value it. I’d ①rather prefer nature as the standard of beauty. Just accept yourself, accept everything the god gives to you，and create the beautiful life ②belong to you. ? ? Many heroes don’t have beautiful surface. However，their beautiful images often come to our minds. Their beauty comes from their contributions to the society. ? ? Don’t be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a thorough understanding of him. A beautiful person is not the one with a good looking，but with a broad and kind heart. ? ? Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important. As an old saying goes，“Virtue is fairer than beauty.”If you have a kind heart，you own real beauty. ? ? ? 【點評】 ?本文以諺語“漂亮不能當飯吃”為題，直截了當地亮出了自己的觀點。全文以“美德勝于美貌”為主線，闡述了“追求外形的美而放棄了內在的美不是真正的美”。文章觀點鮮明，結構嚴謹，用詞恰當，作者能運用諺語來強化自己的觀點，有較強的英語語言組織能力和表達能力。 ? ? 本文有兩處語言錯誤：① I’d rather prefer應改為 ?I’d prefer。would rather表示“寧愿”，prefer也是“寧愿”的意思，兩者不能連用在一起。② belong to 改為belonging to，在此處作定語。(4)(25 min.)

(2011·沈陽市高三質量檢測三——改編)假設你是李華，最近國內一家英文報紙正在討論大學生開網店的問題。以下是你所在班級的討論情況。請你給該報寫一封信，反映討論結果。

贊成反對

1. 大學生時間充裕，具有豐富的網購經驗；

2. 大學生思想活躍，了解時尚需求。 1. 大學生開網店浪費時間，會耽誤學業；

2. 大學生缺乏經商經驗，容易失敗。

你的觀點……

注意：

1．詞數不少于120；

2．不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫；

3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。Dear Editor，

Recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether college students should run online shops.

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參考范文

One possible version：

Recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether college students should run online shops.

Some students think that college students have not only enough spare time but also rich experience in online shopping. Besides, they know the trend of fashion very well, which is helpful for their jobs in the future.

Others, however, hold the opposite view that running online shops will waste a lot of time, which can definitely affect their studies. What's more, it is easier for them to fail in the business owing to the lack of experience. As a result, the failure will have a lasting influence on them.

In my opinion, college students should focus on studies first. After all, running an online shop requires much time and energy. College students should devote most of their time to studying instead of making money.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

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高考英語書面表達講義：表格作文

(3)(25 min.)

(2024·師大附中月考)假如你是紅星村的李華，家鄉人民決定開發農業旅游，邀請你參與策劃紅星生態山莊旅游項目，并請你寫一篇英語文章向旅游者推介紅星生態山莊。

地理位置長沙市以北35公里處，占地面積15平方公里；北面靠山，湘江從村邊經過

主要產品茶葉，綠色蔬菜，魚等

娛樂休閑項目釣魚，……

生態旅游有利

條件(不少于兩條) ……

參考詞匯： ecological village

注意：自擬標題，詞數不少于120。

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【參考范文】One possible version：

A village like no other

Do you feel tired after a week's hard work in the noisy city? Why not visit Red Star Ecological Village and try something different to relax yourself?

Red Star Ecological Village is a beautiful and quiet village, located 35 kilometers north of Changsha, which only takes approximately 30 minutes' drive from the center of the city. It covers an area of 15 kilometers. It is a place where you can see many big pine trees in the mountains in the north, where you can see a lot of ducks on the Xiangjiang River, and where you can join the villagers picking up green tea leaves and growing vegetables in the garden. If you are a fishing lover, you can go fishing in the pond and barbecue what you get in the water under the big trees. It is really fantastic to enjoy your lunch in the open air with your family and friends, talking and laughing.

Whether you are looking to try green food or enjoy quiet country life, Red Star Ecological Village is the place for you. Come to Red Star Ecological Village and try something different to relax yourself.

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高考英語作文精選范文（看圖作文類）

5. 根據圖畫寫一篇短文，敘述某天小明與其媽媽發生的故事。

要求：1．不僅要表述出圖中的內容，還要發表自己的感想；2．字數：100字左右；3．開頭已給出。One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” A few days later, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be. And Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I did something about the bottle, you would think that it was I who knocked it over.”

I disagree with what the mother did in the story.

I think parents should set a good example to their children. They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds. They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.

Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?

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【3】

Baloney is a kind of sausage that many Americans eat often．The word also has another meaning in English．It is used to describe something—usually something someone says—that is false or wrong or foolish．

Baloney sausage comes from the name of the Italian city，Bologna．The city is famous for its sausage，a mixture of smoked，spiced meat from cows and pigs．But，boloney sausage does not taste the same as beef or pork alone．

Some language experts think this different taste is responsible for the birth of the expression baloney．Baloney is an idea or statement that is nothing like the truth．．．in the same way that baloney sausage tastes nothing like the meat that is used to make it．Baloney is a word often used by politicians to describe the ideas of their opponents．The expression has been used for years．Fifty years ago，a former governor of New York State，Alfred Smith，criticized some claims by President Franklin Roosevelt about the successes of the Roosevelt administration．Smith said，“No matter how thin you slice is，it is still baloney．”A similar word has almost the same meaning as baloney．It even sounds almost the same．The word is blarney．It began in Ireland about 1600．The lord of Blarney castle，near Cork，agreed to surrender the castle to British troops．But he kept making excuses for postponing the surrender．And，he made them sound like very good excuses，“This is just more of the same blarney．”The Irish castle now is famous for its Blarney stone．Kissing the stone is thought to give a person special powers of speech．One who has kissed the Blarney stone，so the story goes，can speak words of praise so smoothly and sweetly that you believe them，even when you know they are false．

1．What’s the main idea of the text？(No more than 5 words)

2．According to Americans，what does baloney refer to？(No more than 8 words)

3．What do you know about the lord of Blarney castle，near Cork？(No more than 6 words)

4．Why do people kiss the Blarney stone？(No more than 6 words)

1．The other meaning of baloney．

2．It is something false or wrong or foolish．

3．He was a clever man．

4．To get special powers of speech．

成都市2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（1）附參考范文

三、學生習作

贊成反對

1. 大學生時間充裕，具有豐富的網購經驗；

2. 大學生思想活躍，了解時尚需求。 1. 大學生開網店浪費時間，會耽誤學業；

2. 大學生缺乏經商經驗，容易失敗。

你的觀點……

注意：

1．詞數不少于120；

2．不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫；

3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。Dear Editor，

Recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether college students should run online shops.

_______________________________________________________________________

參考范文

One possible version：

Recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether college students should run online shops.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

******************************************************結束

高考英語書面表達講義：表格作文

(3)(25 min.)

地理位置長沙市以北35公里處，占地面積15平方公里；北面靠山，湘江從村邊經過

主要產品茶葉，綠色蔬菜，魚等

娛樂休閑項目釣魚，……

生態旅游有利

條件(不少于兩條) ……

參考詞匯： ecological village

注意：自擬標題，詞數不少于120。

________________________________________________________________________

【參考范文】One possible version：

A village like no other

Do you feel tired after a week's hard work in the noisy city? Why not visit Red Star Ecological Village and try something different to relax yourself?

***********************************************************結束

高考英語作文精選范文（看圖作文類）

5. 根據圖畫寫一篇短文，敘述某天小明與其媽媽發生的故事。

I disagree with what the mother did in the story.

Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?

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【3】

1．What’s the main idea of the text？(No more than 5 words)

2．According to Americans，what does baloney refer to？(No more than 8 words)

3．What do you know about the lord of Blarney castle，near Cork？(No more than 6 words)

4．Why do people kiss the Blarney stone？(No more than 6 words)

1．The other meaning of baloney．