湖南省長沙縣實驗中學(xué)2024屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達復(fù)習(xí)重點話題指導(dǎo)專題20 校園學(xué)習(xí)話題指導(dǎo)（教師版）

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　　實例指導(dǎo)1—畢業(yè)晚會

　　【寫作任務(wù)】

　　經(jīng)過高中三年的學(xué)習(xí)和相處，畢業(yè)在即。不論是同學(xué)之間還是師生之間都建立了深厚的友誼。按照學(xué)校以往的慣例，畢業(yè)之前要舉行畢業(yè)晚會。現(xiàn)在班主任向大家征集晚會的方案，現(xiàn)在請你以The farewell party 為題，寫一下你心中的畢業(yè)晚會。詞數(shù)120-150。

　　內(nèi)容要點：1. 參加者

　　2. 對晚會的設(shè)計

　　2）構(gòu)句：

　　在表達不同的要點時，應(yīng)注意句式多變，活用語法，避免單一化。比如，擅用各類復(fù)合句、非謂語動詞、倒裝句、介詞結(jié)構(gòu)等來恰當(dāng)銜接各個簡單句，才能體現(xiàn)較高的英語構(gòu)句水平。比如：

　　1）As far as I am concerned, we students should play a leading role to make the party unforgettable. 使用了特殊句式As far as I am concerned。

　　The farewell party

　　As far as I am concerned, we students should play a leading role to make the party unforgettable. Because of the lifelong friendship, teachers will be

　　invited as well as our parents who support us so strongly.

　　As you know, how to plan the party is the most important question. At first, our headteacher will make a moving speech for the opening. Then, there will follow the prepared performance, such as songs, dances, cross talks and so on. Besides, party games will be included and teachers, parents and students will take part in them. At last, the party will come to an end by taking photos freely. Last, but not?least, delicious food and drink can’t be left out. As you can see, the farewell party means so much that we will spare no effort to do it well. After all, it should be the highlight of our high school life.

　　實例指導(dǎo)2—校園幫派類

　　【寫作任務(wù)】

　　為預(yù)防和控制青少年違法犯罪，我國于1999年頒布了、《中華人民共和國預(yù)防未成年人犯罪法》，對此問題予以了相當(dāng)程度的重視。但是由于各種原因，青少年違法犯罪現(xiàn)象仍然大量存在，而且往往與校園幫派有著千絲萬縷的聯(lián)系；那么我們該如何看待校園幫派現(xiàn)象呢?針對此問題，請你用英語寫一篇詞數(shù)為120-150的英語短文投給《學(xué)英語》報社發(fā)表自己的看法：

　　參考詞匯：

　　幫派：gang

　　恐嚇、威逼：bully

　　How to View Gangs in Schools?

　　It must be pointed out that gangs made up of several boys or girls, the number of which sometimes even reaches up to several hundred, can be widely seen among middle school students. Not only does a gang have bad effects on students, but also it affects the normal teaching order at school.

　　Most of the gang members are students who are, aggressive and prefer to smoke, drink and play computer games rather than study. Some are willing to join in the gang in order to strengthen the power of their own circles; others just want to get protection from "The Elder Brother"of the gang and still some are forced to do so. Experts suggest that these students be guided correctly in order to avoid them doing harm to society.

　　I think that teenagers should put their time and energy mainly into study. Avoiding joining m any gang means avoiding committing crimes later on

　　【教師點評】

　　這是一篇以議論為主的書面表達，全文共分三段。第一段作為引子提出“校園幫派”存在的現(xiàn)象，

　　用非常肯定的句型：It mustbe pointed out that gangs ．．．can be widely seen among middle school students，；第二段分析“幫派”成員特點和他們加入“幫派”的不同原因，并用一句話. Experts suggest that these students be guided correctly in order to avoid them doing harm to society.得處“幫派”現(xiàn)象的存在是危險的這一結(jié)論；第三段對“幫派”是否應(yīng)該存在這一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的看法。

　　整篇文章符合高分書面表達的特性：

　　1、段落完整，層次分明

　　2、語法正確，用詞恰當(dāng)

　　3、表達個人觀點。具有一定的思想性

　　句型的使用符合以下幾個原則：

　　1、倒裝句原則

　　2、定語從句原則

　　3、并列復(fù)合句原則

　　4、虛擬語氣句原則

　　5；高級詞語原則(動名詞作主語和賓語)

　　【佳句欣賞】

　　1） Not only does a gang have bad effects on students, but also it affects the normal teaching order at school. （倒裝句）

　　2) Most of the gang members are students who are, aggressive and prefer to smoke, drink and play computer games rather than study. (定語從句)

　　3）Experts suggest that these students be guided correctly in order to avoid them doing harm to society. （suggest 引導(dǎo)的虛擬語氣的賓語從句）

　　4） Some are willing to join in the gang in order to strengthen the power of their own circles; others just want to get protection from "The Elder Brother"of the gang and still some are forced to do so. （并列復(fù)合句）

　　5） Avoiding joining m any gang means avoiding committing crimes later on （動名詞短語作主語和賓語）

　　實例指導(dǎo)3－早戀現(xiàn)象

　　【寫作任務(wù)】

　　如今中學(xué)生早戀現(xiàn)象在校園黑出現(xiàn)的越來越多。有的人認為應(yīng)該制止；有的人認為沒有必要干涉，只要不影響正常學(xué)習(xí)即可。作為中學(xué)生，你如何正確看待這個問題?請你寫一篇120--150詞的英語短文來陳述你的觀點或看法。

　　參考詞匯：早戀puppy love

　　3．在寫作時要住意使用銜接成分使上下文過渡自然，

　　【學(xué)生習(xí)作】

　　Puppy love is more and more common among middle school ,students nowadays. Concerning this, different people have different opinions.

　　I hold the view that puppy love is unsuitable for us student's because puppy love can lead to many problems. Firstly, it not only influences our spirit but also distracts us from our studies. Then, it also makes our parents and teachers much too worried about us. What's more, puppy love is a

　　waste of time. We are too young to be involved in it.

　　From my point of view, we should concentrate on ourstudies because we are at a stage of gaining knowledge and growth. At this stage, learning more important th,m being involved in love affairs for us middle school students. It is urgent that we should pay more attention to our studies, and only by doing so can we have a brighter future.

　　【教師點評】

　　1. 本篇習(xí)作基本完成了寫作任務(wù)，并且文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理。第一段直接點題，提出中半生早

　　戀現(xiàn)象越來越多，第二段分三部分敘述了早戀帶來的問題。第三部分闡述自己的觀點：中學(xué)生應(yīng)該把更多的精力放在學(xué)習(xí)上。

　　2. 從本篇習(xí)作看。作者的語言表達能力功底深厚，例如：文章使用了一些高級詞匯，增加

　　了文章的亮點，使文章增色不少．例如：介詞concerning，動詞短語引distract…from…,

　　實例指導(dǎo)4―中學(xué)生是否可以穿時尚的服裝

　　寫作任務(wù):

　　假如你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生,最近在你們班的英語班會上就"中學(xué)生是否可以穿時尚的服裝？"的問題展開了討論。請你根據(jù)下表的討論結(jié)果,給你校校報"英文寫作"欄目投稿,客觀地介紹討論的情況。(詞數(shù):不少于120)

　　意見

　　60％的同學(xué)認為不可以穿時髦的衣服

　　40％的同學(xué)認為應(yīng)該穿時髦的衣服

　　原因 ???1. 價格昂貴，而學(xué)生沒有經(jīng)濟收入；(1). 好看，時尚；(2). 追求時尚會牽扯精力，影響學(xué)習(xí)；

　　2. 作為當(dāng)代的年輕人不應(yīng)該太保守，應(yīng)適應(yīng)時代的發(fā)展；

　　3. 學(xué)生應(yīng)該穿著樸素，時髦的服飾不符合中學(xué)生身份。

　　4. “愛美之心人皆有之”，追求美是中學(xué)生的權(quán)力。

　　初稿:

　　One day we had a discussion about whether students should wear fashionable clothes. 60% of the students are against the idea. They said, "Fashionable clothes are too expensive and we haven’t made money yet. We teenagers should put our hearts into study. Going after the fashion will waste our time and it will have a bad effect on our study. We should be dressed in a simple way, and fashionable clothes don’t fit in with the environment at school." ???? 40% of the students said, "We can wear fashionable clothes, because they are good-looking and popular. As a young student in China, one should follow the fashion of the modern life." They also think that they have right to enjoy their beauty.教師點評: ????本篇作文條理清晰,明確表達了兩種觀點及其原因。但也有不足之處:

　　1. 作者只是將寫作任務(wù)中的表格提示做了字面上翻譯,語言略顯生硬。

　　1. 作者將要點整合,準(zhǔn)確地表達了復(fù)雜的邏輯關(guān)系,條理清晰,使文章渾然一體。2. 在文章中使用了一些恰到好處的復(fù)雜句式,句型富于變化,主動被動交替使用,例如:60% of the students, who are against wearing fashionable clothes, said ... / We are expected to dress simply ... 表現(xiàn)出作者很好的語言功底。

　　?實例指導(dǎo)5----Ought to read too many fantasy stories for teenagers?

　　【寫作任務(wù)】

　　隨著科技和社會的發(fā)展，人們的想象力越來越豐富，隨之而來的便是越來越多的科幻小說問世。科幻小說以其緊張、新奇、刺激的情節(jié)極大地吸引著人們的眼球，尤其是青少年和在校的中小學(xué)生，有的同學(xué)看科幻小說著了迷，甚至耽誤了學(xué)習(xí)，荒廢了學(xué)業(yè)。不過，有的同學(xué)也不以為然。請以O(shè)ught to read too many fantasy stories for teenagers?為題，寫一篇120詞左右的文章發(fā)表你的看法。注意行文連貫流暢，內(nèi)容充實完整

　　看法理由

　　不要多看，影響學(xué)業(yè) 1. 花費太多時間與精力，不利于集中精力學(xué)習(xí)；

　　2. 會依賴空想而不去追求現(xiàn)實生活；

　　3. 有些科幻小說寫得太粗俗，影響身心健康。

　　應(yīng)該多看，豐富想象力科幻能引導(dǎo)科學(xué)的發(fā)展方向；

　　開闊孩子的視野，發(fā)展孩子的想象力和創(chuàng)造力；

　　能夠根據(jù)現(xiàn)在的情形有效地推斷出未來可能發(fā)生的情況。

　　你的觀點自由發(fā)揮

　　參考詞匯：1. vulgar 粗俗；2. creativity 創(chuàng)造力

　　1. nowadays

　　2. as a result

　　3. put out

　　4. considering

　　5. aim

　　6. in one’s opinion

　　7. too many

　　8. absorb

　　9. as a consequence

　　10. lead to

　　11. mental health

　　12. scores of

　　13. base on

　　14. broaden

　　15. in terms of

　　16. as for

　　17. as well

　　18. personally

　　19. focus on

　　【組詞成句】

　　根據(jù)構(gòu)思和文章大意使用上述詞匯和正確的句型將各要點表達出來，注意謂語動詞的適當(dāng)變化形式，以增加語言的表達力；還可以使用不同的句型結(jié)構(gòu)特別是高級句型，如簡單句、并列句、復(fù)合句（賓語從句、非限制性定于從句）等；另外，也可以使用一些比較復(fù)雜的語法現(xiàn)象，如介詞短語（做后置定語、方式狀語）、不定式（做賓語）、動名詞（做主語、賓語）等，使文章更加出彩。

　　1. People develop their imagination quickly.

　　2. More and more fantasy stories have been put out.

　　3. Teenagers can’t read too many fantasy stories as they like.

　　4. Reading fantasy stories takes many students a great deal of time and energy.

　　5. Some teenagers are too ridiculous that they are completely absorbed in fantasy stories.

　　6. Scores of students think it right for teenagers to read fantasy stories.

　　7. They think that such stories are based on science fiction.

　　8. Reading them increases our knowledge and broadens our mind

　　9. It also gives us some new ways to look at old situations and makes us look at the world in terms of centuries, not just six months or five years.

　　10. Important as study is, it is not the only thing we can do.

　　【參考范文】

　　Ought to read too many fantasy stories for teenagers?

　　Nowadays, with the development of the technology and society, people develop their imagination quickly. As a result, more and more fantasy stories have been put out. Is it right for the middle school students to read as many fantasy stories as possible?

　　Considering the main aim for a student, some students don’t think so. In their opinion, teenagers can’t read too many fantasy stories as they like. It's reported that reading fantasy stories takes many students a great deal of time and energy. What’s more, some teenagers are too ridiculous that they are completely absorbed in fantasy stories, as a consequence they ignore their studies. Even worse, some fantasy stories are too vulgar, which can be harmful for the teenagers’ mental health.

　　However, scores of students think it right for teenagers to read more fantasy stories. They think that such stories are based on the science fiction, which can lead the direction of science. Reading them still increases their knowledge and broadens their mind. It also gives them some new ways to look at old situations and makes them look at the world in terms of centuries, not just six months or five years.

　　Personally, although it is a good way for teenagers to develop our imagination and creativity, as middle school students, we must first focus on studies and put more effort into our schoolwork.

　　【佳句背誦】

　　1. As middle school students, learning more knowledge is our first aim.

　　2. To read many fantasy stories will surely have much influence on their studies.

　　3. It’s said that the some young girls are absorbed in fantasy stories, thus they ignore their studies.

　　4. As middle school students, they should concentrate on their studies at present.

　　5. Reading fantasy stories can enrich our knowledge and broaden our mind.

　　6. Although it is a good way for teenagers to develop their imagination and creativity, as middle school students, they must first focus on studies and put more effort into their schoolwork.

　　實例指導(dǎo)6—選擇高考志愿

　　[真題展示]

　　下表是你根據(jù)平時了解所得到的中國高三學(xué)生選擇高考志愿的信息。請你根據(jù)該表用英語寫一篇150詞左右的簡要介紹，向編輯部反映該情況。

　　約35%的同學(xué)認為：約45%的同學(xué)認為：約20%的同學(xué)認為：

　　1.應(yīng)以個人興趣為主。

　　2.興趣是成功之母。

　　3.被迫學(xué)自己不感興趣的專業(yè)是痛苦的。 1.應(yīng)以社會需要為主。

　　2.將來容易找到工作。

　　3.興趣可以培養(yǎng)和改變。 1.如何選擇，是一難題。

　　2.聽從父母或老師的意見。

　　第二步

　　圍繞主題，提煉要點，編擬提綱