湖南省長沙縣實驗中學2024屆高三英語二輪復習書面表達復習重點話題指導專題07 建議申請話題指導（學生版）
實例指導1—求職申請
Dear sir,
My name is Li Ming . I’d like to apply be one of the envioremental protection volunteers for the 2010 Shanghai World Exposition.
I'm a 20 year-old boy of Jinan. And I'm quite familar with the city of Shnaghai . Being a college student, I have a good knowledge of environmental protection. I believe I can make reasonable suggestions about how to solve environmental problems.
In my opinion, traffic lines should be arranged by the government, plastic bags should be replaced by cloth bags and waste should be sorted and dealt with. Only in this way can we
beautify the environment of Jinan and make the 2010 Shanghai World Exposition a successful event.
If I have the honor to be a volunteer, I will work hard to make contributions to the the 2010 Shanghai
World Exposition.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
實例指導2—征求建議
【寫作任務(wù)】
假如你是Amy，你所在的城市要修一座地鐵，現(xiàn)在面向社會廣泛征求意見。作為一名中學生，請你給設(shè)計師寫封信告訴他你的建議；希望他至少能考慮以下幾點，并說明你的理由：
1．地鐵的入口和出口標牌要醒目；
2．通往地鐵的臺階應(yīng)用電梯代替。
要求：詞數(shù)120—150，可以適當加以擴展。
【參考范文】
Dear Sir/ Madame
I am writing this letter for the purpose of making some suggestions for the subway that will be built. For a smoothly-flowing subway I would like to suggest the following.
First, more outstanding entrances and exits to subway stations should be provided. It is usual that entrances and exits are hard to find since they are almost hidden at the corner of the street. Besides, directing signs are easily left unnoticed because of many advertisements. Second, it would be better to replace traditional steps with lifts to make it convenient for the elders and even for the disabled．Furthermore，lifts help save time．
Looking forward to the improvement of the subway and wishing you all the success．
Yours sincerely，
Amy
實例指導3—如何寫好規(guī)勸性質(zhì)的書信
【寫作任務(wù)】
徐敏同學是一名高三學生，英語成績很優(yōu)秀，她的一名筆友李麗來信希望她給她提供一些建議如何寫好英語，為此徐敏給她寫了一封回信，在信中她提了很多的建議
First of all, you should know clearly what you study for. As we know, English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. To be a capable person in your future life, you must learn English well.
Secondly , I think the basic thing to do is to memorize as many English words as possible. When you come across new words, you should write them down again and again .
Thirdly , you should read out English texts loudly every morning, learn phrases, useful expressions and sentence patterns. They are helpful in improving speaking and writing as well.
Last , grammar is also very important. You ought to listen to the teacher' s lectures carefully in class. When you have trouble, you must ask for help in time .
Yours faithfully
Xumin
實戰(zhàn)演練
假如你是Tom，你從報紙上得知政府正在積極努力解決人們的社業(yè)問題，請你給《學英語》報社的編輯寫一封信，建議政府專門設(shè)立一個機構(gòu)來幫助殘疾人就業(yè)，并提出原因和方法。
要點如下：
1．就業(yè)競爭激烈，殘疾人容易被忽視；
加入你是一名殘疾學校的學生王兵，你們城市準備建造新的體育館，你寫信給建筑師李先生，提供一些建議，期中也包括一些有利于殘疾人的建議。注意：
1．在城市的北面，那里方便。
2．至少要放下2萬人。
3．要留給殘疾人座位和通道。
體育館：gymnasium
字數(shù)：120－150 。
【思路指導】
1．在歷年高考中，英語試題中的書面表達題考查最多的應(yīng)用文為書信形式。而內(nèi)容有很多又是關(guān)于很多疑惑問題的請教或解答。
2．故掌握英文書信的寫法對考生來講非常必要。英文書信，通常包括以下幾個部分，即：信頭、稱呼、正文、謙稱和結(jié)束語、簽名。
3．本文是一個以學生的身份寫信，因此語言要客氣、委婉。
4．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和將來時態(tài)為主。
【學習習作】
Dear Mr. Li I am a student in a disability school . It is very glad for me to have a chance to write to you, a famous architect.
I hear a big gymnasium will be put up in our city and you are the leading architect . As a sport fan , I want to give suggestions to you . Firstly , I think it should be in the north of the city , as it is convenient for citizens ,especially for our disabled men . Secondly , I think it will be good if it is a very big , and I think it can hold over 20,000 people . Last , the important suggestion , it should have many seats for our disabled sports fans , and it should there be a way for us to enter the gymnasium.
I heartily wish you may consider my these suggestions . And I am looking forward to the wonderful gymnasium.
Yours,
Li Ming
下面是刊登在《中國日保》上的一則關(guān)于招聘銷售經(jīng)理的廣告，假如你有意應(yīng)聘，請仔細閱讀這則廣告，然后寫一篇120左右的求職信。
We are looking for a competent person to fill the position of Sales Manager.
Requirements:
College graduate majoring in Marketing in Marketing Management.
Some experience in the marketing field
Out going personality
Able to communicate with people of different levels and communication skills in both English and Chinese.
Good knowledge in PC operation
Interested in it, please contact with Mr. Johnson at johnson@sina.com
【參考范文】
Dear Mr. Johnson,
假設(shè)你是李華。學校的廣播站最近要從在校生中招聘一名英文廣播員，條件是：熱愛播音工作，熱心為同學服務(wù)，英語口語好，有一定的播音知識和經(jīng)驗者優(yōu)先。請你給廣播站王老師寫信應(yīng)聘。詞數(shù)：120――150 左右。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I'm glad to know that our school radio station will choose one broadcaster recently. I'm a student
from senior two, and now I'm writing to apply for the
position.
I'm fond of the work of broadcasting and I am willing to serve all of our schoolmates, providing them with wonderful English programs over the radio. First of all, I'm good at English, especially at spoken English. I won the first prize for the School Spoken English Contest last year. In addition, when I was in primary school, I worked for the school radio station, which gained me rich experience in this field. Therefore , I'm sure to get along well with my work if I can get the chance..
Yours,
Li Hua
?
Dear Sir / Madame,
Having read your ad in the newspaper, I hope to get the job as an English secretary in your company. My name is Yang Qian, a healthy girl of 28 and I am 1.66 meters tall. I am the Bachelor of English, and can speak fluent English and can write in English as well as read all kinds of articles in English. What’ s more, skillful in operating Words, I can type 130 words per minute. With two years’ relevant experience in a company, I could make myself generally useful, if there should be any opportunity of your requiring my services. As an open, warm-hearted and easy-going person, I hope I am the kind of person you want and I’d appreciate your calling me at 010-89347521. Or, my E-mail is: yangqian@sina.com. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Yours
sincerely,
? Yang Qian
實例指導1—求職申請
Dear sir,
My name is Li Ming . I’d like to apply be one of the envioremental protection volunteers for the 2010 Shanghai World Exposition.
I'm a 20 year-old boy of Jinan. And I'm quite familar with the city of Shnaghai . Being a college student, I have a good knowledge of environmental protection. I believe I can make reasonable suggestions about how to solve environmental problems.
In my opinion, traffic lines should be arranged by the government, plastic bags should be replaced by cloth bags and waste should be sorted and dealt with. Only in this way can we
beautify the environment of Jinan and make the 2010 Shanghai World Exposition a successful event.
If I have the honor to be a volunteer, I will work hard to make contributions to the the 2010 Shanghai
World Exposition.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
實例指導2—征求建議
【寫作任務(wù)】
假如你是Amy，你所在的城市要修一座地鐵，現(xiàn)在面向社會廣泛征求意見。作為一名中學生，請你給設(shè)計師寫封信告訴他你的建議；希望他至少能考慮以下幾點，并說明你的理由：
1．地鐵的入口和出口標牌要醒目；
2．通往地鐵的臺階應(yīng)用電梯代替。
要求：詞數(shù)120—150，可以適當加以擴展。
【參考范文】
Dear Sir/ Madame
I am writing this letter for the purpose of making some suggestions for the subway that will be built. For a smoothly-flowing subway I would like to suggest the following.
First, more outstanding entrances and exits to subway stations should be provided. It is usual that entrances and exits are hard to find since they are almost hidden at the corner of the street. Besides, directing signs are easily left unnoticed because of many advertisements. Second, it would be better to replace traditional steps with lifts to make it convenient for the elders and even for the disabled．Furthermore，lifts help save time．
Looking forward to the improvement of the subway and wishing you all the success．
Yours sincerely，
Amy
實例指導3—如何寫好規(guī)勸性質(zhì)的書信
【寫作任務(wù)】
徐敏同學是一名高三學生，英語成績很優(yōu)秀，她的一名筆友李麗來信希望她給她提供一些建議如何寫好英語，為此徐敏給她寫了一封回信，在信中她提了很多的建議
First of all, you should know clearly what you study for. As we know, English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. To be a capable person in your future life, you must learn English well.
Secondly , I think the basic thing to do is to memorize as many English words as possible. When you come across new words, you should write them down again and again .
Thirdly , you should read out English texts loudly every morning, learn phrases, useful expressions and sentence patterns. They are helpful in improving speaking and writing as well.
Last , grammar is also very important. You ought to listen to the teacher' s lectures carefully in class. When you have trouble, you must ask for help in time .
Yours faithfully
Xumin
實戰(zhàn)演練
假如你是Tom，你從報紙上得知政府正在積極努力解決人們的社業(yè)問題，請你給《學英語》報社的編輯寫一封信，建議政府專門設(shè)立一個機構(gòu)來幫助殘疾人就業(yè)，并提出原因和方法。
要點如下：
1．就業(yè)競爭激烈，殘疾人容易被忽視；
加入你是一名殘疾學校的學生王兵，你們城市準備建造新的體育館，你寫信給建筑師李先生，提供一些建議，期中也包括一些有利于殘疾人的建議。注意：
1．在城市的北面，那里方便。
2．至少要放下2萬人。
3．要留給殘疾人座位和通道。
體育館：gymnasium
字數(shù)：120－150 。
【思路指導】
1．在歷年高考中，英語試題中的書面表達題考查最多的應(yīng)用文為書信形式。而內(nèi)容有很多又是關(guān)于很多疑惑問題的請教或解答。
2．故掌握英文書信的寫法對考生來講非常必要。英文書信，通常包括以下幾個部分，即：信頭、稱呼、正文、謙稱和結(jié)束語、簽名。
3．本文是一個以學生的身份寫信，因此語言要客氣、委婉。
4．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和將來時態(tài)為主。
【學習習作】
Dear Mr. Li I am a student in a disability school . It is very glad for me to have a chance to write to you, a famous architect.
I hear a big gymnasium will be put up in our city and you are the leading architect . As a sport fan , I want to give suggestions to you . Firstly , I think it should be in the north of the city , as it is convenient for citizens ,especially for our disabled men . Secondly , I think it will be good if it is a very big , and I think it can hold over 20,000 people . Last , the important suggestion , it should have many seats for our disabled sports fans , and it should there be a way for us to enter the gymnasium.
I heartily wish you may consider my these suggestions . And I am looking forward to the wonderful gymnasium.
Yours,
Li Ming
下面是刊登在《中國日保》上的一則關(guān)于招聘銷售經(jīng)理的廣告，假如你有意應(yīng)聘，請仔細閱讀這則廣告，然后寫一篇120左右的求職信。
We are looking for a competent person to fill the position of Sales Manager.
Requirements:
College graduate majoring in Marketing in Marketing Management.
Some experience in the marketing field
Out going personality
Able to communicate with people of different levels and communication skills in both English and Chinese.
Good knowledge in PC operation
Interested in it, please contact with Mr. Johnson at johnson@sina.com
【參考范文】
Dear Mr. Johnson,
假設(shè)你是李華。學校的廣播站最近要從在校生中招聘一名英文廣播員，條件是：熱愛播音工作，熱心為同學服務(wù)，英語口語好，有一定的播音知識和經(jīng)驗者優(yōu)先。請你給廣播站王老師寫信應(yīng)聘。詞數(shù)：120――150 左右。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I'm glad to know that our school radio station will choose one broadcaster recently. I'm a student
from senior two, and now I'm writing to apply for the
position.
I'm fond of the work of broadcasting and I am willing to serve all of our schoolmates, providing them with wonderful English programs over the radio. First of all, I'm good at English, especially at spoken English. I won the first prize for the School Spoken English Contest last year. In addition, when I was in primary school, I worked for the school radio station, which gained me rich experience in this field. Therefore , I'm sure to get along well with my work if I can get the chance..
Yours,
Li Hua
?
Dear Sir / Madame,
Having read your ad in the newspaper, I hope to get the job as an English secretary in your company. My name is Yang Qian, a healthy girl of 28 and I am 1.66 meters tall. I am the Bachelor of English, and can speak fluent English and can write in English as well as read all kinds of articles in English. What’ s more, skillful in operating Words, I can type 130 words per minute. With two years’ relevant experience in a company, I could make myself generally useful, if there should be any opportunity of your requiring my services. As an open, warm-hearted and easy-going person, I hope I am the kind of person you want and I’d appreciate your calling me at 010-89347521. Or, my E-mail is: yangqian@sina.com. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Yours
sincerely,
? Yang Qian
