【課堂新坐標】2024屆高考英語（通用版）二輪復習短文改錯專題訓練：考法3 行文邏輯錯誤（含解析）
考法3| 行文邏輯錯誤錯誤1——主謂不一致1. (2024·全國卷Ⅱ)My dream school look like a big garden.look→looks [主語My dream school是單數謂語應用第三人稱單數。]2．(2024·遼寧高考)The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.have→has [主語The early morning barking為單數故把have改為has。]3．(2024·日照市二模)More and more Guoxue courses is given in schools of different levels all over China.is→are [主語More and more Guoxue courses為復數故把is改為are。]4．(2024·哈爾濱市第六中學模擬)Eating snacks are a bad habit and is also a waste of money.are→is [動名詞短語作主語為單數故把are改為is。]5．(2024·長春外國語學校質檢)You are the most considerate person who know exactly what I need in our class.know→knows [定語從句的先行詞the most considerate person為單數故who后的謂語動詞應為單數。]
??????? 6．(2024·銀川一中模擬)Therefore,exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health.
are→is [主語為too much exposure為單數故把are改為is。不要受phones的影響而認為主語是復數。] 7．(2024·湖北省七市聯合考試)There are green grass and colorful flowers everywhere.are→is [當there be結green grass為單數故把are改為is。]8．(2024·銀川一中二模)What you have gained are the result of your hard work.are→is [主語從句為單數故are改為is。]9．(2024·濟南市模擬)Talking to friends or family members first are always a good idea.are→is [動名詞作主語為單數故把are改為is。]10．(2024·沈陽二中模擬)Last month, were→was [本句的主語是I不受together with后面主語的影響故把were改為was。]感悟與反思主謂不一致錯誤主要有三種情況：①由于對基本概念忽視而失分：應注意單復數的一致例如當不定式、動名詞或從句作主語時應為單數。②由于受其他詞的影響而失分：例如第六題too much exposure to phones中易受phones的影響而認為主語是復數。③注意就近原則。錯誤2——時態不一致1．(2024·全國乙卷)It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.had→have 2．(2024·全國甲卷)I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost much, thought→think [由is和can可判斷句子的主體時態為一般現在時根據時態的一致性應把thought改為think。]3．(2024·全國卷Ⅰ)When I was a child, think→thought [這兩句話是回憶童年的事情由was和would也可知時態應為過去時根據時態的一致性把think改為thought。]4．(2024·全國卷Ⅱ)We can lie on the grass for a rest, ning to music.
sat→sit [or連接兩個并列謂語第一個是can lie第二個應是can sit前面已有can后面的can應省去。]5．(2024·浙I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noisy and filled with people.
去掉had [此處只是對過去事6．(2024·陜西師大附中模擬)Last night, make→made [既然是昨晚發生的事情時態是一般過去時根據時態的一致性引導的定語從句也應指過去。]7．(2024·邯鄲市第一中學模擬)Yesterday morning I went fishing, catch→caught [句子的整體用過去時有went和was故把catch改為caught。]8．(2024·西工大附中適應性訓練)One day,
spends too much time playing computer games.
spends→spent [第一句指的是過去時態用的是過去時根據時態的一致性第二句應用過去時。]9．(2024·海南省“七校聯盟”聯考)I decided that I would enter for elections again in my final year at school and that I will win the election.will→would [句子的整體時態為過去時故will與前面的would并列也應用would。]10．(2024·青島市一模)One of the reasons is that they show great interest in Chinese and English.Besides, thought→think [句子的整體時態為現在時故把thought改為think。]感悟與反思時態不一致錯誤主要有三種情況錯誤3——指代不一致1．(2024·全國甲卷)If we go on a trip abroad, your→our [由前面的we go on a trip和we can broaden可知應把your改為our。]2．(2024·四川高考)When he came back, her→his [由前面的When he came back可知這束花是在“他的(his)”手里。]3．(2024·全國卷Ⅰ)We must find ways to protect your environment.your→our/the [本句的主語為we因此把物主代詞your改為our此處也可以用the。]4．(2024·四川高考)If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, us→you [由前面的your teacher可判定后面的us改為you。]5．(2024·綿陽市診斷性考試)When I was in high school, it→one [我的大部分朋友有自行車我希望也能有一輛。此處應用one表示“一輛自行車”不能用it表特指。]6．(2024·大慶實驗中學訓練)To make the journey fruitful, rs devoted his time and energy to us.
his→their [由our teachers可判定后面的his改為their。]7．(2024·哈爾濱市第六中學一模)In fact, ather here is quite different from it in your city.
it→that [此處from后的代詞應用that代替前面出現過的the weather不能用it因為it8．(2024·哈師大附中模擬)The Palace Museum plans to extend their opening hours to make it more convenient for tourists.their→its [由The Palace Museum可知應把their改為its。]9．(2024·陜西高考)My uncles immediately jumped up and shot their arrows at the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.Neither→None [代替第一句的their arrows應用none因為沒有說是兩支箭故不能用neither。]10. (2024·德州市模擬)It is not only bad for smokers himself, himself→themselves [由smokers可知應用themselves。]感悟與反思指代不一致錯誤主要有四種情況：①人稱不一致。②單復數不一致。③性別不一致。④替代詞和不定代詞考查錯誤特別是it和that的錯誤4——邏輯不一致1．(2024·全國卷Ⅰ)Nearly five years before, (圣女果)in our back garden.before→ago [這里講的是過去發生的事情著眼點是現在故應把before改為ago。]2．(2024·銀川一中模擬)Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge.without→with [句意：醫生也可以用他們的專業知識幫助人們更好地生活。without應改為with。]3．(2024·平頂山調研考試)I keep a diary in English every day because my written English is becoming better and better.because→so/and [句意：我每天用英語寫日記因此我的英語寫作越來越好。前后為因果關系或并列關系故把Because改為so或And。]4．(2024·沈陽二中模擬)For me, never→ever [肯定否定錯誤既然這次旅行進行過就不能用never。]5．(2024·南昌市十所省重點中學模擬)Before I finished it, Before→After [按常理應該是完Before改為After。]6．(2024·天水一中模擬)I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends.Therefore, Therefore→However [前后為轉折關系故應把Therefore改為However。]7．(2024·山東省實驗中學模擬)Overcome it, or→and或will→won't [句子自我矛盾把or改為and或者把will改為won't。]8．(2024·哈爾濱市第六中學模擬)Anxiety and pressure did discourage me at times.Besides, t of my teachers and classmates, I think I'll make it.
Besides→However [前后為轉折關系故應把Besides改為However。]9．(2024·遵義市模擬)How is everything going recently? I'm writing to tell you something more about my birthday.去掉more [more意為“另外的10．(2024·石嘴山市模擬)But, ever→never [根據后面的nor可知前面應為否定故ever改為never。] 感悟與反思邏輯不一致錯誤主要有兩種情況：①肯定否定錯用。②連接詞錯用：應根據先后順序或邏輯關系選擇適當的連詞或副詞。
A
(2024·石家莊市調研檢測) used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones.So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of.This change in communication have good effects on our works and life.Comparing with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are fast and much more convenient.If you missed your grandmother, you just take out your phone and say 揾ello?to him.And she will be happy to hear your voice.If you want to place order with a foreign company, you can emm－mail the message.It'll be minutes after you get their reply.
【答案與解析】 nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead .This change in communication
good effects on our
and life. with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are
and much more convenient.If you
your grandmother, you just take out your phone and say “hello” to .And she will be happy to hear your voice.If you want to place
order with a foreign company, you can e－mail the message.It'll be minutes
you get their reply.改為But 考查連詞。根據語境可知上下句表示邏輯上的轉折關系故用連詞But。刪除of 考查介詞。instead of意為“代替”后跟名詞、代詞或動名詞作賓語但是此處of后無賓語故刪除of。instead是改為has 考查動詞時態和主謂一致。由語境可知應用一般現在時；由句子主語This change可知謂語應用單數形式即has。改為work 考查名詞。此處名詞work表示“工作”而不是作品是不可數名詞沒有復數形式。改為Compared 考查非謂語動詞。compare和句子謂語are之間沒有連詞故用非謂語動詞且和句子主語mobile phones and the Internet構成邏輯上的動賓關系故用過去分詞形式。st改為faster 考查形容詞比較級。由and后的“much more convenient”可知此處表示對比的概念故用形容詞比較級faster作表語。改為miss 考查動詞時態。由“you just take out your phone and say”可知從句謂語應用一般現在時即miss。改為her 考查代詞。與上文的“grandmother”呼應可知此處應用her。后加an 考查冠詞。order是可數名詞意為“訂單”在語境中第一次出現故用不定冠詞修飾。order的讀音以元音音素開頭故用an。改為before 考查連詞。此處為固定句型“it＋be＋時間段＋before...”意為“多久以后……”故用連詞before引導時間狀語從句。B
(2024·河南省八市重點高中質檢)s us last term, she has been encouraging him to overcome fear and speak out in class.Thanks to her, I have made great progresses.Besides, I practiced several times in the front of her.It was her advice which made me a better speaker and full of confidence.And I owe my success to her.
Susan set me a good example.I am determined to become an English teacher when I grow up.
【答案與解析】 whose help I couldn't have won first prize in the English Talent Competition for high school
last week.
I used to be
in spoken English.I was too shy to speak in class.Since she
us last term, she has been encouraging
to overcome fear and speak out in class.Thanks to her，I have made great .Besides, I practiced several times in
front of her.It was her advice
made me a better speaker and full of confidence. I owe my success to her.
Susan
set me a good example.I am determined to become an English teacher when I grow
up.
①at改為without 考查介詞。根據語境可知此處表示“要是沒有她的幫助”故將at改為without。改為students 考查名詞復數。根據語境可知英語才藝大賽是面向所有高中生的故將student改為students。改為poor 考查形容詞。此處應用形容詞作表語。改為taught 考查動詞時態。在含since引導的狀語從句的復合句中主句teaches改為taught。改為me 考查代詞。整篇短文都在講述“我”的情況和“他”沒關系故將him改為me。改為progress 考查名詞的數。progress為不可數名詞不能用復數形式故將progresses改為progress。刪除in后的the 考查冠詞。in the front of表示“在……前面”通常指在某物內部的前面。本題是指the。改為that 考查強調句。分析該句可知本句是一個強調句強調her advice故將which改為that。改為So 考查連詞。前后句是“因果”關系故將And改為So。后加has 考查動詞時態。老師為“我”樹立好榜樣是過去的事情并且對“我”產生了影響所以用現在完成時。C
(2024·合肥市質檢)o get the second place.It was the first time that I had played on the stage in front of such many people.I felt very upset at first, but the encourage from my teacher keeps me going ahead.Surprising, I was given the silver medal，that increased my confidence.If we try our best to get ahead, we will be able to achieve what we desire and deserve it.
【答案與解析】， we are always busy attending
lessons, taking exams and participating in competitions.This summer I joined
a music competition
was lucky to get the second place.It was the first time that I had played on the stage in front of
many people.I felt very upset at first, but the
from my teacher
me going ahead.， I was given the silver medal,
increased my confidence.If we try our best to get ahead, we will be able to achieve what we desire and deserve ．改為time 考查名詞。根據語境time表示(用于工作、休息等的)一段時間為不可數名詞故改為time。改為various 考查形容詞。根據語境可知此處表示上各種各樣的課應用形容詞作定語修飾名詞故改為various。后面加in 考查固定搭配。join in意為“參加(活動)”符合語境故加上in。改為and 考查連詞。根據語境可知此處表示并列關系故改為and。改為so 名詞people前面有形容詞many修飾應用so故改為so。改為encouragement 考查名詞。此處是名詞作主語表示“來自老師的鼓勵”。故改為encouragement。改為kept 考查動詞時態。這是介紹假期中的一件事情并且由上文的felt可知應用一般過去時故改為kept。改為Surprisingly 考查副詞。此處Surprisingly。改為which 考查關系代詞。本句為非限制性定語從句并且關系詞指代前面整句話故改為which。刪除it 考查賓語從句。what在賓語從句中充當賓語多余故刪除。D
(2024·福建省五校高中畢業班統一考試)kind of pollution and the destruction of the environment could be see everywhere in our daily life.
With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make much noise and gave off poisonous gases.Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources have become less and less.Trees have been cut down, but waste water is being poured continuously into rivers and lakes.The whole ecological balance of earth is changing.Massive destruction of the environment have brought about negative effects in the ecosystem around the world and even become a great threat to man's existence.
We must face in the situation that exists and take immediate action to solving our environmental problems together.We hope all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthy environment so that we could live happy in a beautiful and harmonious world.
【答案與解析】 of pollution and the destruction of the environment could be
everywhere in our daily life.
With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make much noise and
off poisonous gases.Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources have become fewer and fewer.Trees have been cut down,
waste water is being poured continuously into rivers and lakes.The whole ecological balance of
earth is changing.Massive destruction of the environment
brought about negative effects
the ecosystem around the world and even become a great threat to man's existence.
We must face
the situation that exists and take immediate action to
our environmental problems together.We hope all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthy environment so that we could live
in a beautiful and harmonious world.
①kind改為kinds 考查名詞的數。根據“All”可知應使用復數形式。改為seen 考查語態。主語與see之間是動賓關系應用被動語態故將see改為seen。改為give 考查動詞的時態。根據and前的“make”可知該句應使用一般現在時。改為and 考查and。前加the 考查冠詞。earth為世界上獨一無二的事物故在earth前面加上定冠詞the。改為has 考查時態和主謂一致。由全文時態可知此處應用現在完成時該句主語為“Massive destruction of the environment”為不可數名詞故謂語動詞應當用單數have改為has。改為on 考查介詞。effect on為固定搭配意為對……有影響”。刪除in 考查動詞的用法。句中的“face”為及物動詞意為“面對”后直接跟名詞作賓語。
改為solve 考查動詞不定式。我們必須立即采取行動以解決環境問題。take action to do sth.為固定搭配。改為happily 考查副詞。根據動詞live可知應用副詞修飾動詞故用副詞形式happily。E
(2024·廣州市模擬)etition，I did my best to be full prepared.But the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank.The experience of lose a competition was really painful.Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like
battlefield.You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks for his advice, I never give up when I do anything.
【答案與解析】 me some advice, but I seldom took
seriously.One day he
encouraged me to participate in a speech competition.So I signed up and
the competition, I did my best to be
prepared.
But the moment I stood on the stage, I was
nervous that my mind completely went blank.The experience of
a competition was really painful.Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like
battlefield.You have to lose many
to win the final victory.” Thanks
his advice, I never give up when I do anything.
①gives改為gave 考查動詞時態。由took可知此處表示過去發生的事情應用一般過去時。改為it 考查代詞。advice是不可數名詞故用it代指。刪除was 考查動詞語態。根據語境可知與encourage為主謂關系不能用被動語態故刪除was。改為before 考查介詞。根據prepared可知此處表示在賽前做充分的準備故用介詞before。改為fully 考查副詞。副詞修飾形容詞在句中作狀語故用副詞fully修飾形容詞prepared。改為so so...that...意為“如此……以至于……”是副詞修飾形容詞nervous符合語境。such修飾名詞。改為losing 考查動名詞。介詞后跟名詞、代詞或動名詞作賓語故用動名詞losing作介詞of的賓語。后加a 考查冠詞。battlefield是可數名詞且第一次在文中出現故用不定冠詞修飾。改為times 考查名詞。time在此處表示次數是可數名詞由many可知應用其復數形式。改為to 考查固定搭配。thanks to意為“幸虧由于”符合語境故用介詞to。 F
(2024·濟南市模擬)ing to Beijing this summer vacation.You asked many question in your letter, and now let me answer them.
To start with, Beijing, the capital of China, is very attractive city with a long history.You can
found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing, of that the most famous is the Beijing roast duck.I hope we will enjoy it.Besides, there is a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace or the Forbidden City.These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists in this year.I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.
I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.
Yours，
Lin Chao
【答u asked many
in your letter, and now let me answer them.
To start with, Beijing, the capital of China, is very attractive city with a long history.You can
all kinds of delicious food in Beijing, of
the most famous is the Beijing roast duck.I hope
will enjoy it.Besides, there
a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace
the Forbidden City.These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists
this year.I promise you will have a
time here in Beijing.
