高校學(xué)生評(píng)價(jià)教師制度的利弊
1.各高校實(shí)行學(xué)生評(píng)價(jià)教師的制度
2.這種制度的好處
3.這種制度也會(huì)帶來(lái)負(fù)面的影響
On Students' Evaluation of Teachers
Recently a brand new system that students evaluate their teachers among universities appears. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily，a high proportion of colleges，98. 5 percent use the new system.
The biggest benefit is that teachers should do their best to improve not only their specialized knowledge and skills but also their teaching methods in order to meet the needs of their students. In addition, by owing the right to evaluate teachers，students may pay full attention to their classes，which will undoubtedly improve their study performance.
Apart from the benefits mentioned above，we also face several un-avoidable challenges. The students' evaluation of teachers cannot always be objective-it should be combined with evaluation from authority and colleagues. Only when we deal with these problems successfully can we benefit most from such a new system.(140詞)
“一句話”點(diǎn)評(píng)
毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，第二段的China Daily和百分比吸引了閱卷老師的眼球。conduct , a proportion of等好詞及短語(yǔ)的使用，無(wú)疑增加了亮點(diǎn)。
快捷構(gòu)思
第一段:開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山展現(xiàn)段落中心“各高校實(shí)行學(xué)生評(píng)價(jià)教師的制度”。而后“一句話”數(shù)例為具體現(xiàn)象展示，說(shuō)明很多的高校在使用學(xué)生評(píng)價(jià)教師的制度。)
第二段:直接展現(xiàn)段落中心“這種制度的好處”，并用improve not only their specialized knowledge and skills but also their teaching methods和pay full attention to their classes兩個(gè)原因，來(lái)支持這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。
第三段:開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山提出段落中心“這種制度也會(huì)帶來(lái)負(fù)面的影響”，并用("cannot always be objective來(lái)支持，以一個(gè)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句Only when we deal with these problems successfully can we benefit most from such a new system作為結(jié)尾。
美麗詞句
(1)specialized knowledge and skills專(zhuān)業(yè)知識(shí)和技能
(2)undoubtedly毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)地，高分詞匯
(3)pay full attention to集中注意力
(4)Only when we deal with these problems successfully can we benefit most from such a new system.倒裝句，高分作文的一種常用句式。
1.各高校實(shí)行學(xué)生評(píng)價(jià)教師的制度
2.這種制度的好處
3.這種制度也會(huì)帶來(lái)負(fù)面的影響
On Students' Evaluation of Teachers
Recently a brand new system that students evaluate their teachers among universities appears. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily，a high proportion of colleges，98. 5 percent use the new system.
The biggest benefit is that teachers should do their best to improve not only their specialized knowledge and skills but also their teaching methods in order to meet the needs of their students. In addition, by owing the right to evaluate teachers，students may pay full attention to their classes，which will undoubtedly improve their study performance.
Apart from the benefits mentioned above，we also face several un-avoidable challenges. The students' evaluation of teachers cannot always be objective-it should be combined with evaluation from authority and colleagues. Only when we deal with these problems successfully can we benefit most from such a new system.(140詞)
“一句話”點(diǎn)評(píng)
毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，第二段的China Daily和百分比吸引了閱卷老師的眼球。conduct , a proportion of等好詞及短語(yǔ)的使用，無(wú)疑增加了亮點(diǎn)。
快捷構(gòu)思
第一段:開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山展現(xiàn)段落中心“各高校實(shí)行學(xué)生評(píng)價(jià)教師的制度”。而后“一句話”數(shù)例為具體現(xiàn)象展示，說(shuō)明很多的高校在使用學(xué)生評(píng)價(jià)教師的制度。)
第二段:直接展現(xiàn)段落中心“這種制度的好處”，并用improve not only their specialized knowledge and skills but also their teaching methods和pay full attention to their classes兩個(gè)原因，來(lái)支持這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。
第三段:開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山提出段落中心“這種制度也會(huì)帶來(lái)負(fù)面的影響”，并用("cannot always be objective來(lái)支持，以一個(gè)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句Only when we deal with these problems successfully can we benefit most from such a new system作為結(jié)尾。
美麗詞句
(1)specialized knowledge and skills專(zhuān)業(yè)知識(shí)和技能
(2)undoubtedly毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)地，高分詞匯
(3)pay full attention to集中注意力
(4)Only when we deal with these problems successfully can we benefit most from such a new system.倒裝句，高分作文的一種常用句式。
