考研英語小作文批改例文第三期求職信

　　8-10分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement on the internet about the recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as a physician.

　　I am a graduate of Peking University with a doctor degree in clinical medicine. I know which(改為what) qualities a doctor should possess and I think I have these qualifications. My specialized skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I have the confidence to be one of you.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　加名字

　　8分

　　同學你好，你的作文寫的很好，但是一定要注意書信的寫作格式。另外，which一定要有選項。

　　第二篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searchingI would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　Dear Sir or Madam ,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searching (加逗號)I would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills(去掉s), as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　8分

　　同學你好，你的作文寫的很不錯，但是要明確一點，要靈活使用模版，因為skill 前面填的是具體的某項能力，所有要用單數，如果是填一個形容詞，例如professional，那么就可以用復數了。

　　8-10分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement on the internet about the recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as a physician.

　　I am a graduate of Peking University with a doctor degree in clinical medicine. I know which(改為what) qualities a doctor should possess and I think I have these qualifications. My specialized skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I have the confidence to be one of you.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　加名字

　　8分

　　同學你好，你的作文寫的很好，但是一定要注意書信的寫作格式。另外，which一定要有選項。

　　第二篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searchingI would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　Dear Sir or Madam ,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searching (加逗號)I would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills(去掉s), as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　8分

　　同學你好，你的作文寫的很不錯，但是要明確一點，要靈活使用模版，因為skill 前面填的是具體的某項能力，所有要用單數，如果是填一個形容詞，例如professional，那么就可以用復數了。