六級寫作高分常見錯誤（6）
5. 邏輯域錯誤。這個應該不難判斷，但還是經常出錯：
If people become friends, both of them wont care about money... [可改為neither of them care about money...]
其他：
語義重復
In my opinion, I agree with the view that... [agree一詞本身就表示說話人的觀點，可將In my opinion去掉，或把后面的一半改為the view that... is right]
share many common interests [common與share屬同義反復，可改為have many common interests或share many interests]
論斷過于絕對，缺乏足夠思考
A person with good finance will not understand why his poor friend gets on a sardine-jam like bus and always choose to dine at some poor-condition restaurant at the roadsides... [相信富人也不至于笨到這個程度]
句義嚴重反復，缺乏變化
Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship. Some believe that financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. For my part, I agree with the latter, because financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. [不必多說了]
連詞錯誤
It is not difficult to imagine if those rich people have some poor friends with common interests. [if一詞顯然應該是that，不過更通順的說法應該是It is not difficult to imagine rich people having some poor friends with similar interests.]
不會使用照應語
We wont ask people whether they have much money or not when making friends with other people. [people和other people顯然應該是同指關系，后面的other people應改為them才對]
作文是對語言的綜合運用，可以集中體現出學習者的基本功和思維能力;語感非常重要，不過要形成好的語感還需要長期的反復訓練。過去指導英語專業大四學生畢業論文，每屆都發現有不少已經過了TEM8的英語專業學生的語言能力有明顯缺陷。寫作能力必須建立在大量閱讀、用心感受和無數次練習的基礎上，對此曾對學生反復講過多次，不過由于無法立竿見影，多數學生不能很好地堅持，很是遺憾。
5. 邏輯域錯誤。這個應該不難判斷，但還是經常出錯：
If people become friends, both of them wont care about money... [可改為neither of them care about money...]
其他：
語義重復
In my opinion, I agree with the view that... [agree一詞本身就表示說話人的觀點，可將In my opinion去掉，或把后面的一半改為the view that... is right]
share many common interests [common與share屬同義反復，可改為have many common interests或share many interests]
論斷過于絕對，缺乏足夠思考
A person with good finance will not understand why his poor friend gets on a sardine-jam like bus and always choose to dine at some poor-condition restaurant at the roadsides... [相信富人也不至于笨到這個程度]
句義嚴重反復，缺乏變化
Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship. Some believe that financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. For my part, I agree with the latter, because financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. [不必多說了]
連詞錯誤
It is not difficult to imagine if those rich people have some poor friends with common interests. [if一詞顯然應該是that，不過更通順的說法應該是It is not difficult to imagine rich people having some poor friends with similar interests.]
不會使用照應語
We wont ask people whether they have much money or not when making friends with other people. [people和other people顯然應該是同指關系，后面的other people應改為them才對]
作文是對語言的綜合運用，可以集中體現出學習者的基本功和思維能力;語感非常重要，不過要形成好的語感還需要長期的反復訓練。過去指導英語專業大四學生畢業論文，每屆都發現有不少已經過了TEM8的英語專業學生的語言能力有明顯缺陷。寫作能力必須建立在大量閱讀、用心感受和無數次練習的基礎上，對此曾對學生反復講過多次，不過由于無法立竿見影，多數學生不能很好地堅持，很是遺憾。
