SAT寫作 句子的可讀性很重要
SAT寫作培訓能夠幫助大家備考SAT寫作,其中在備考中大家需要注意總結一下SAT寫作題目。下面小編就來給大家介紹一下SAT寫作考試中,句子的可讀性很重要,希望大家有所了解。 下面我們就來看一些例子,體會一些寫得并不成功的長句和如何修改的建議:
1. 一些空洞的單詞或詞組更本不能為句子帶來任何相關的或重要的信息,完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子:
When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents,in my opinion.
這句話當中的when all things are considered和in my opinion都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為:Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
所以說還是建議大家參加一些SAT寫作培訓,總結歸納SAT寫作題目,對于大家的SAT寫作學習很有幫助。
2. 有些空洞和繁瑣的表達方式可以進行替換,例如:
Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
due to the fact that就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達方式的例子,可以替換,簡化為下面的表達方式:
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents,they did not have the options that young people have now.
所以說在SAT作文寫作中要頻繁使用空洞的單詞和詞組,讓你的句子看起來很長,但是卻失去了可讀性,讓評分老師會覺得你這樣寫很刻意而不自然,我們在SAT作文中一定要避免出現這種問題。
SAT寫作培訓能夠幫助大家備考SAT寫作,其中在備考中大家需要注意總結一下SAT寫作題目。下面小編就來給大家介紹一下SAT寫作考試中,句子的可讀性很重要,希望大家有所了解?! ∠旅嫖覀兙蛠砜匆恍├?,體會一些寫得并不成功的長句和如何修改的建議:
1. 一些空洞的單詞或詞組更本不能為句子帶來任何相關的或重要的信息,完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子:
When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents,in my opinion.
這句話當中的when all things are considered和in my opinion都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為:Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
所以說還是建議大家參加一些SAT寫作培訓,總結歸納SAT寫作題目,對于大家的SAT寫作學習很有幫助。
2. 有些空洞和繁瑣的表達方式可以進行替換,例如:
Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
due to the fact that就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達方式的例子,可以替換,簡化為下面的表達方式:
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents,they did not have the options that young people have now.
所以說在SAT作文寫作中要頻繁使用空洞的單詞和詞組,讓你的句子看起來很長,但是卻失去了可讀性,讓評分老師會覺得你這樣寫很刻意而不自然,我們在SAT作文中一定要避免出現這種問題。