SAT寫作練習(xí)中的重復(fù)現(xiàn)象
有些同學(xué)在SAT寫作練習(xí)中為了湊文章的單詞數(shù)總是喜歡把簡單的句式復(fù)雜化,把一個(gè)本應(yīng)該簡潔的表達(dá)方式寫得很羅嗦,甚至把一個(gè)意思用幾個(gè)相近的單詞反復(fù)說明,我們一定要在SAT寫作練習(xí)中避免這些重復(fù)。
1. 盡量避免重復(fù)使用同樣的詞匯?;蛘哂械臅r(shí)候雖然詞匯沒有重復(fù),但意思卻有重復(fù)。這時(shí)候可以做一些簡化的工作。例如下面這個(gè)例子:
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size. Large 對一個(gè)farm來說就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改為:The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更簡潔的表達(dá)方式為:My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2. 有時(shí)一個(gè)詞組可以用一個(gè)更簡單的單詞來替換,例如: My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents farm.
這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly,顯得更為簡潔: My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents farm.
以上提到的問題在很多同學(xué)的SAT寫作練習(xí)中都有發(fā)生,復(fù)雜的句式讓人讀起來都覺得很繞口,SAT寫作中我們可以通過多舉例來說明問題,而不應(yīng)該發(fā)生這種重復(fù)現(xiàn)象。