高中英語語法-巧指導:小詞做出大文章
巧指導:小詞做出大文章
書面表達閱卷標準要求作文最高檔得分應具備有高級表達的詞句。但很多學生誤以為高級詞匯是指長詞、難詞,甚至偏詞、生詞。其實,有些小詞在作文中的巧用,活用,常常能起到畫龍點睛,四兩撥千金的作用。小詞俏皮、生動、靈巧、嫵媚。小詞用在開頭,輕盈、生動,讓人欲罷不能;用在長句中承前啟后,長短交錯,令閱卷老師有視覺上的美感;用在結尾,簡結、明快,讓人回味無窮。之所以稱之為小詞,是因為這些詞是我們熟視無睹的小玩意兒,你對它們還沒有足夠的重視。殊不知,用好小詞,絕對比用大詞,長詞的效果要好得多。
當然,要想小詞用得好,用得妙,還要老師精心指導,耐心挑選。下面是筆者向同學們推薦的小詞、小短語、小句型。它們不僅詞義豐富,而且用法多樣,請同學們先來品味一下小詞匯的大魅力吧!
(一)動詞類:
see,occur,strike,run,digest,fail,offer,risk,share,manage,do (行;可以),help (有用),work (起作用)。
(二)名詞類:
a must,a nice fit,a sign,a treat,a hit,a case,a better / best choice,arrival,stay .
(三)形容詞類:
top,tasty,fresh,catchy,latest,brief,charming,rare,worth .
(四)副詞類:
thus,ever,pretty (相當),though,instead,this (這么),that (那般),in (時尚),out (落伍), else,so .
(五)介詞(短語)類:
beyond,with,next to,on,within,for ages,in a flash,on a second thought .
(六)動詞短語類:
light up,owe to,fix ones eyes on,take steps to,come up with,make sense,come to an end,have a gift for,see to it that,be due to,be lost in .
(七)句型類:
1. be about to when
2. Whats up?
3. It depends.
4. There is no point in doing
5. Do come!
6. if so / any / ever / possible / necessary / invited .
下面是學生曾經翻譯的句子,請仔細對照指導前的句子,品味一下指導后的句子,是不是文采倍增,令人耳目一新!
1. 2005 年中國成功發射了神州六號。
(指導前,以下簡稱前)In 2005,China successfully launched Shenzhou VI.
(指導后,以下簡稱后)The year 2005 saw the successful launch of Shenzhou VI in China.
2. 她是個美麗而優秀的女孩,經常主動幫助我們。
(前) She is a beautiful and excellent girl,who always helps us.
(后) She is a charming top girl,who is always offering us help.
3. 突然,他想起了一個好主意。
(前) Suddenly,he thought of a good idea.
(后) In a flash,a fresh idea occurred to him.
4. 就這樣,他開始逐漸把精力集中到學習上來。
(前) In this way,he began to put his mind into his study.
(后) Thus,he took steps to fix his attention on study.
5. 對我們來說,掌握一門外語很重要。
(前) It is important for us to master a foreign language.
(后) A foreign language is a must for us.
山東無棣孫玉芳
巧指導:小詞做出大文章
書面表達閱卷標準要求作文最高檔得分應具備有高級表達的詞句。但很多學生誤以為高級詞匯是指長詞、難詞,甚至偏詞、生詞。其實,有些小詞在作文中的巧用,活用,常常能起到畫龍點睛,四兩撥千金的作用。小詞俏皮、生動、靈巧、嫵媚。小詞用在開頭,輕盈、生動,讓人欲罷不能;用在長句中承前啟后,長短交錯,令閱卷老師有視覺上的美感;用在結尾,簡結、明快,讓人回味無窮。之所以稱之為小詞,是因為這些詞是我們熟視無睹的小玩意兒,你對它們還沒有足夠的重視。殊不知,用好小詞,絕對比用大詞,長詞的效果要好得多。
當然,要想小詞用得好,用得妙,還要老師精心指導,耐心挑選。下面是筆者向同學們推薦的小詞、小短語、小句型。它們不僅詞義豐富,而且用法多樣,請同學們先來品味一下小詞匯的大魅力吧!
(一)動詞類:
see,occur,strike,run,digest,fail,offer,risk,share,manage,do (行;可以),help (有用),work (起作用)。
(二)名詞類:
a must,a nice fit,a sign,a treat,a hit,a case,a better / best choice,arrival,stay .
(三)形容詞類:
top,tasty,fresh,catchy,latest,brief,charming,rare,worth .
(四)副詞類:
thus,ever,pretty (相當),though,instead,this (這么),that (那般),in (時尚),out (落伍), else,so .
(五)介詞(短語)類:
beyond,with,next to,on,within,for ages,in a flash,on a second thought .
(六)動詞短語類:
light up,owe to,fix ones eyes on,take steps to,come up with,make sense,come to an end,have a gift for,see to it that,be due to,be lost in .
(七)句型類:
1. be about to when
2. Whats up?
3. It depends.
4. There is no point in doing
5. Do come!
6. if so / any / ever / possible / necessary / invited .
下面是學生曾經翻譯的句子,請仔細對照指導前的句子,品味一下指導后的句子,是不是文采倍增,令人耳目一新!
1. 2005 年中國成功發射了神州六號。
(指導前,以下簡稱前)In 2005,China successfully launched Shenzhou VI.
(指導后,以下簡稱后)The year 2005 saw the successful launch of Shenzhou VI in China.
2. 她是個美麗而優秀的女孩,經常主動幫助我們。
(前) She is a beautiful and excellent girl,who always helps us.
(后) She is a charming top girl,who is always offering us help.
3. 突然,他想起了一個好主意。
(前) Suddenly,he thought of a good idea.
(后) In a flash,a fresh idea occurred to him.
4. 就這樣,他開始逐漸把精力集中到學習上來。
(前) In this way,he began to put his mind into his study.
(后) Thus,he took steps to fix his attention on study.
5. 對我們來說,掌握一門外語很重要。
(前) It is important for us to master a foreign language.
(后) A foreign language is a must for us.
山東無棣孫玉芳