2024屆內蒙古包頭市高考英語短文改錯一輪優選訓練（8）
內蒙古包頭市2024高考英語短文改錯一輪優選練習（8）及答案
短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
請你修改以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So we had to moved apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.
【參考答案】1
短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）
假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。
修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
As we all know, travelling can be an excited experience. Let me give you some advices that you have to pay attention. You can find out more about your destination by surf the internet before you set out. You needn’t take too many cash. Since it can be very convenient to pay in cash, using cheques is much more reliable. In additional, it will be wise of you to take an umbrella in case of it should rain. And if you are to travel abroad, you’d better understand the cultural diversity. Keep this in mind that being polite in foreign countries can help you had a wonderful trip.
【參考答案】2.改錯：
1: excited-exciting
2: advices-advice
3.attention 后面加 to
4: surf-surfing
5.many-much
6. Since—Though
7. additional-addition
8.in case of去掉of
9. this-it
10. had-have
4.短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( )劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意: 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.
Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.
【參考答案】4.
Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.
students
Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors
or
first so that they can learn what they are interested∧. It will also make it possibly for them to take
in
possible
their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the
believe
environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from
graduating或加who
leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to
choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a
cannot或can’t或后加not
good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if
we
a
5.短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有l0處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for
everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me
because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?
Please give me some advices.
Yours,
Mary
【參考答案】5.
Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to ∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me
disliked
She
be
because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem
friendly
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?
Or
Please give me some advices.
advice
Yours,
Mary
6.短文改錯
文中共有10處語言錯誤。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。
注意： 1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
【參考答案】6.
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after
with
school. She holds∧view that senior three students have to make fully use of
the
full
every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am
her
allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about my
be
study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.
eyes
In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.
watching
work
Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at
has
刪除at
abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
1.短文改錯
Dear Tom,
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you may often feel lonely．That's why you are new from here and people don't know about you．But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices below．
First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters．At the same time, never fail to listening to other people's views．Second, you should learn your classmates' likes and dislikes．Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people and show them that you are actually very friendly．Last but not least, I will always be ready to help you．We can take part in some activities together, that I can introduce you to others．
As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you．
Best regards．
Peter
1.
Dear Tom,
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you
is
may often feel lonely. That’s why you are new from here and people don’t know
because
about you. But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices
advice
below.
First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own
an
opinions about the matters. At the same time, never fail to listening to other
listen
people’s views. Second, you should learn/ your classmates’ likes and
about
dislikes. Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people
will
and show them that you are actually very friendly. Last but not least, I will
always be ready to help you. We can take part in some activities together, that I
where
can introduce you to others.
As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make
With(或者把going改為goes)
friends with you.
Best regards.
Peter
2.文中共有10處語言錯誤， 要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.
每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。
Dear Editor,
Recently we have made a discussion about the prevent of global warming in our research group. Everybody has become aware the green-house effect, what has drawn the attention of the world. Many scientists on the summit of COPENHAGEN warned any rise above 2 degrees could lead to a sea level rise threatening islands and coastal cities, kill off many specie of animals and plants. As a result of, every nation should work together to limit the release of carbon dioxide. Everybody should shoulder the responsible to fight against climate change, and a low carbon life is a must.I think fight against global warming is part of environmental protection. If we humans are more friend to nature, nature will be friendly, too. It’s time everybody rethink our role in keeping peace with our mother, nature.
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
【參考答案】2.
1. prevent→ prevention
2. aware∧ of
3.what → which
4.kill →killing
5.specie →species
6. result of → result
7. responsible →responsibility
8. fight → fighting
9. friend → friendly
10. rethink → rethought
內蒙古包頭市2024高考英語短文改錯一輪優選練習（8）及答案
短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
請你修改以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So we had to moved apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.
【參考答案】1
短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）
假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。
修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
As we all know, travelling can be an excited experience. Let me give you some advices that you have to pay attention. You can find out more about your destination by surf the internet before you set out. You needn’t take too many cash. Since it can be very convenient to pay in cash, using cheques is much more reliable. In additional, it will be wise of you to take an umbrella in case of it should rain. And if you are to travel abroad, you’d better understand the cultural diversity. Keep this in mind that being polite in foreign countries can help you had a wonderful trip.
【參考答案】2.改錯：
1: excited-exciting
2: advices-advice
3.attention 后面加 to
4: surf-surfing
5.many-much
6. Since—Though
7. additional-addition
8.in case of去掉of
9. this-it
10. had-have
4.短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( )劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意: 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.
Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.
【參考答案】4.
Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.
students
Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors
or
first so that they can learn what they are interested∧. It will also make it possibly for them to take
in
possible
their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the
believe
environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from
graduating或加who
leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to
choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a
cannot或can’t或后加not
good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if
we
a
5.短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有l0處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for
everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me
because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?
Please give me some advices.
Yours,
Mary
【參考答案】5.
Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to ∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me
disliked
She
be
because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem
friendly
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?
Or
Please give me some advices.
advice
Yours,
Mary
6.短文改錯
文中共有10處語言錯誤。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。
注意： 1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
【參考答案】6.
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after
with
school. She holds∧view that senior three students have to make fully use of
the
full
every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am
her
allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about my
be
study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.
eyes
In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.
watching
work
Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at
has
刪除at
abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
1.短文改錯
Dear Tom,
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you may often feel lonely．That's why you are new from here and people don't know about you．But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices below．
First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters．At the same time, never fail to listening to other people's views．Second, you should learn your classmates' likes and dislikes．Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people and show them that you are actually very friendly．Last but not least, I will always be ready to help you．We can take part in some activities together, that I can introduce you to others．
As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you．
Best regards．
Peter
1.
Dear Tom,
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you
is
may often feel lonely. That’s why you are new from here and people don’t know
because
about you. But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices
advice
below.
First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own
an
opinions about the matters. At the same time, never fail to listening to other
listen
people’s views. Second, you should learn/ your classmates’ likes and
about
dislikes. Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people
will
and show them that you are actually very friendly. Last but not least, I will
always be ready to help you. We can take part in some activities together, that I
where
can introduce you to others.
As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make
With(或者把going改為goes)
friends with you.
Best regards.
Peter
2.文中共有10處語言錯誤， 要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.
每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。
Dear Editor,
Recently we have made a discussion about the prevent of global warming in our research group. Everybody has become aware the green-house effect, what has drawn the attention of the world. Many scientists on the summit of COPENHAGEN warned any rise above 2 degrees could lead to a sea level rise threatening islands and coastal cities, kill off many specie of animals and plants. As a result of, every nation should work together to limit the release of carbon dioxide. Everybody should shoulder the responsible to fight against climate change, and a low carbon life is a must.I think fight against global warming is part of environmental protection. If we humans are more friend to nature, nature will be friendly, too. It’s time everybody rethink our role in keeping peace with our mother, nature.
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
【參考答案】2.
1. prevent→ prevention
2. aware∧ of
3.what → which
4.kill →killing
5.specie →species
6. result of → result
7. responsible →responsibility
8. fight → fighting
9. friend → friendly
10. rethink → rethought
