2024屆高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)專題技能突破演練：32 寫作之提綱作文（含解析）

　　專題技能突破(32) 寫作之提綱作文

　　【技能講解】　提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給出的提示性文字，確定文字的中心思想，然后展開論述。寫作時需注意：首先，認(rèn)真審題，分析所給出的提綱。按照提綱的思路寫，既不能偏離提綱內(nèi)容，也不能隨意刪減提綱內(nèi)容；其次，提綱內(nèi)容不等于全部內(nèi)容?？忌谔峋V內(nèi)容基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充，或引用名人名言、諺語警句，或聯(lián)系自身經(jīng)歷、體會，使文章更加有血有肉、有說服力；再次，分析每個提綱內(nèi)容間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系，用合適的從句、合適的銜接詞等把文章的每句話串起來，使之成為一個嚴(yán)絲合縫的整體。

　　典例剖析[2024·課標(biāo)全國卷]假定你是李華，你校英文報“外國文化”欄目擬刊登介紹美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點如下：

　　1．欄目介紹；

　　2．稿件內(nèi)容；

　　3．稿件長度：約400詞；

　　4．交稿日期：6月28日前。

　　注意：

　　1．詞數(shù)100左右；

　　2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

　　3．開頭語已為你寫好。

　　Dear Peter，

　　I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newpaper.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　[范文]

　　Dear Peter，

　　I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.

　　The “Foreign Cultures”

　　section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.① Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,

　　and the life of American high school students.② You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.③ 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?

　　I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　[解析]　“written by...”過去分詞短語作后置定語，修飾articles。

　　how引導(dǎo)的從句作介詞about的賓語，“美國人如何度過他們的假期和節(jié)日，以及美國高中生的生活”。

　　“so long as”引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句；“relevant”(相關(guān)的)修飾“anything”，作后置定語。

　　技能演練[2024·安徽高考]為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長，某中學(xué)英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。

　　內(nèi)容要點如下：

　　1.表示理解并給予安慰；

　　2.提出建議并說明理由。

　　注意：

　　1.詞數(shù)120左右；

　　2.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；

　　3.信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

　　參考詞匯：temper n．脾氣，情緒

　　Hi Worried，

　　I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.

　　Yours，

　　Jamie

　　One possible version：

　　Hi Worried，

　　I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The

　　truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going

　　wrong, so you don't have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to

　　control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret. Here

　　are three useful tips：

　　First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of

　　letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, going outdoors

　　and playing team games with your friends as physical exercise are effective ways

　　to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

　　I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

　　Yours，

　　Jamie

　　專題技能突破(32) 寫作之提綱作文

　　【技能講解】　提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給出的提示性文字，確定文字的中心思想，然后展開論述。寫作時需注意：首先，認(rèn)真審題，分析所給出的提綱。按照提綱的思路寫，既不能偏離提綱內(nèi)容，也不能隨意刪減提綱內(nèi)容；其次，提綱內(nèi)容不等于全部內(nèi)容?？忌谔峋V內(nèi)容基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充，或引用名人名言、諺語警句，或聯(lián)系自身經(jīng)歷、體會，使文章更加有血有肉、有說服力；再次，分析每個提綱內(nèi)容間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系，用合適的從句、合適的銜接詞等把文章的每句話串起來，使之成為一個嚴(yán)絲合縫的整體。

　　典例剖析[2024·課標(biāo)全國卷]假定你是李華，你校英文報“外國文化”欄目擬刊登介紹美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點如下：

　　1．欄目介紹；

　　2．稿件內(nèi)容；

　　3．稿件長度：約400詞；

　　4．交稿日期：6月28日前。

　　注意：

　　1．詞數(shù)100左右；

　　2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

　　3．開頭語已為你寫好。

　　Dear Peter，

　　I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newpaper.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　[范文]

　　Dear Peter，

　　I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.

　　The “Foreign Cultures”

　　section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.① Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,

　　and the life of American high school students.② You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.③ 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?

　　I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　[解析]　“written by...”過去分詞短語作后置定語，修飾articles。

　　how引導(dǎo)的從句作介詞about的賓語，“美國人如何度過他們的假期和節(jié)日，以及美國高中生的生活”。

　　“so long as”引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句；“relevant”(相關(guān)的)修飾“anything”，作后置定語。

　　技能演練[2024·安徽高考]為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長，某中學(xué)英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。

　　內(nèi)容要點如下：

　　1.表示理解并給予安慰；

　　2.提出建議并說明理由。

　　注意：

　　1.詞數(shù)120左右；

　　2.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；

　　3.信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

　　參考詞匯：temper n．脾氣，情緒

　　Hi Worried，

　　I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.

　　Yours，

　　Jamie

　　One possible version：

　　Hi Worried，

　　I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The

　　truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going

　　wrong, so you don't have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to

　　control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret. Here

　　are three useful tips：

　　First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of

　　letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, going outdoors

　　and playing team games with your friends as physical exercise are effective ways

　　to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

　　I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

　　Yours，

　　Jamie