2024屆高考英語二輪復習大題沖關秘籍短文改錯：創新押題（含解析）
題組一
Passage1
In modern time, the pace of our life is getting faster and faster. We have to work under pressure, which makes that hard for us to live a healthy life. However, developing a healthy lifestyle is very important unless we want to enjoy a good health.
First of all, work long hours in front of a computer is bad for our eyes and backs. Drinking and smoking also do harmful to our health. However, taking physical exercise can builds up our body. In addition to, we should have a balanced diet contains a lot of grain, fruits and vegetables. Last but not least, having enough sleep is also necessary for us to stay health. Personally, having a healthy lifestyle is just your choice.
Passage2
As we know, Charlie Chaplin brightened the lives of Americans and British during the period of silent films. Up to now nobody had been able to do this well than Charlie Chaplin .He made people laugh at a time when they felt depressed, so they could feel more content in their lives. His charming character, the little tramp, was well-known all over the world. It was a poor and homeless person wearing large trousers, worn-out shoes and a small round black hat, and carried a walking stick. This character was social failure and he was loved for his optimism and determination to overcome all difficulties. In the famous film The Gold Rush, Chaplin managed to make the situation entertained. Charlie Chaplin wrote, directed and produced the films he starred in them. He is loved and remembered as a great actor which could inspire people with great confident.
Passage3
Last summer I did some fruit-picking. It is pretty hard work. I had to start in 7 am and pick for a good eight hour. But it was such cheerful that we had great fun. Some of we had guitars, so in the evenings we had barbecues and played a bit music together. I only got about $80 a week, but at the least they gave me all my meals, and the food was not that awfully. Basic accommodation was also supplying. Still, I’m afraid I won’t be going fruit-picking this summer, because I’ve got a temporary job in town what pays better.
Passage4
Last Sunday, I wanted very much to see a film together with my brother after supper. On my way to the cinema, we happen to meet an American named Peter. He lost his way, looked worried. When he told us that he wasn’t able to find the hotel, we decided take him there. Along the way we told of Peter the great changes that had been taken place in our country in the last few years. Peter also told us a lot of things about America.
Although we missed a interesting film, but we felt very happy. We not only helped Peter out of trouble and also learnt something by him.
題組二
Paasage1
I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9. You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed to me. I had no more choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn’t allowing. The real moment began before I stood on the platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank.
But my listeners were waiting patient. Gradually, I found me back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speak before a big audience had disappeared. Actually, now I’ve become a great speaker!
Passage2
Last weekend’s concert, organized and performing by the students of the Welsh Community College, was great success. The student had been practicing for months for the concert. They were excited that when they heard Gareth Jones was coming to present the prizes. Over 100 young performers play a mixture of jazz, classical or folk music. One of the highlights were 14-year-old Megan Evans, playing traditional Welsh folk songs. The concert ended with a very loud pop tune and anyone in the hall stood up and danced with the music. It was a magically atmosphere and a wonderful evening.
Passage3
Dear Sophia,
I’m Li Hua from Beijing ABC Senior School. I’m happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chair and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close from our home, because we could go to school by bike. In noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m surely you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoying talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join in other students in playing ball games or swimming. There will be a lot of funs.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make my stay here in Beijing pleasant experience.
Best wishes
Li Hua
Passage4
On Friday, our teacher told us that there would an English corner in front of our teaching building. I set about soon after the last class in the afternoon.
To my joy, the English corner had just been on for a few minute. I joined them on their talk. At first, I was afraid that my English was so poor and limit that I couldn’t follow them or make myself understand. I was also afraid that anyone might laugh at me. But a smiling face here or an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease. Though I speak to them only in simple English that day, I believe in future I will make a greater progress.
題組一
Passage1
In modern , the pace of our life is getting faster and faster. We have to work under pressure, which makes
hard for us to live a healthy life. However, developing a healthy lifestyle is very important
we want to enjoy
good health.
First of all,
long hours in front of a computer is bad for our eyes and backs. Drinking and smoking also do
to our health. However, taking physical exercise can
up our body. In addition , we should have a balanced diet /
a lot of grain, fruits and vegetables. Last but not least, having enough sleep is also necessary for us to stay . Personally, having a healthy lifestyle is just your choice.
Passage2
As we know, Charlie Chaplin brightened the lives of Americans and British during the period of silent films. Up to now nobody ?been able to do thisthan Charlie Chaplin. He made people laugh at a time when they felt depressed, so they could feel more content ?their lives. His charming character, the little tramp, was well-known all over the world. It was a poor and homeless person wearing large trousers, worn-out shoes and a small round black hat, and ?a walking stick. This character was ?social failure ?he was loved for his optimism and determination to overcome all difficulties. In the famous film The Gold Rush, Chaplin managed to make the situation. Charlie Chaplin wrote, directed and produced the films he starred in . He is loved and remembered as a great actor ?could inspire people with great .
【】喜劇演員查理卓別林風趣幽默，他的表演給人們帶來了許多快樂。他扮演的流浪者的角色因其樂觀及有客服困難的決心深受大家喜歡。他自導自演的電影《淘金熱》十分出名。卓別林是一位偉大的演員，他用極大的自信鼓舞著我們。第一處：had改為has。考查時態。時間狀語up to now（到目前為止）應與現在完成時連用，故將had改為has。第二處：well改為better。考查比較級。由該詞后面的than可知應使用比較級，故將well改為better。第三處：in改為with。考查形容詞短語。be content with…是固定搭配，表＂對滿意＂。第四處：第五句中的carried改為carrying。考查非謂語動詞。動詞carry與wearing由and并列連接作person的后置定語，該動詞與person之間是邏輯上的主動關系，故用carrying。第五處：第六句中was和social中間加a。考查冠詞。該句中抽象名詞failure具體指代this character，故抽象名詞具體化，應加a。第六處：第六句中的and改為but。考查連詞。該連詞前后的內容是轉折關系，故將and改為but。第七處：entertained改為entertaining。考查形容詞。entertaining表＂令人愉快的；有趣的＂，常用來修飾指物的名詞或代詞；entertained表＂感到快樂的＂，常用來修飾指人的名詞或代詞。該句中作賓語的名詞situation后缺少賓補，故用entertaining。第八處：第八句中的them去掉。考查定語從句。he starred in是省略關系代詞的定語從句，被省略的關系代詞已經是in后面的賓語，故將重復的賓語them去掉。第九處：最后一句中which改為that。考查定語從句引導詞。先行詞是指人的名詞actor，且關系代詞在從句中作主語，故用who或that。第十處：confident改為confidence。考查名詞。介詞with后應用名詞，故將confident改為confidence。Last summer I did some fruit-picking. It ?pretty hard work. I had to start ? 7 a.m. and pick for a good eight . But it was ?cheerful that we had great fun. Some of ?had guitars, so in the evenings we had barbecues and played a bit? music together. I only got about $80 a week, but at? least they gave me all my meals, and the food was not that . Basic accommodation was also. Still, I’m afraid I won’t be going fruit-picking this summer, because I’ve got a temporary job in town
pays better.
第一處is 改為was 考查時態。句意：去年暑假，我挑選水果，那時相當難的工作，所以用一般過去時。第處in改為at考查介詞。具體的時間點前用介詞at。第處hour 改為hours考查名詞單復數。句意：整8個小時，此處表示復數。第處such 改為so考查固定搭配。so+形容詞+that...＂如此以致與＂。第處we 改為us考查代詞。介詞后跟代詞的賓格。句意：我們中的一些人有吉他。第處a bit和 music之間增加of考查介詞短語。a bit of.... ＂一點＂。第處the去掉考查冠詞。at least ＂至少＂ 固定搭配。第處awfully 改為awful考查副詞。句意：食物不是那么的糟糕。此處做表語故用形容詞。第處supplying 改為supplied考查動詞的被動。句意：劇本的食宿被提供。此處主語和動詞之間是被動關系。第處what 改為that/which考查定語從句。句意：在城鎮里我已經得到了一個薪酬不錯的臨時工作。此處that/which引導定語從句。爓ay to the cinema, we 句爐o meet an American named Peter. He lost his way, 處爓orried. When he told us that he wasno’t able to find the hotel, we decided
take him there. Along the way we told燩eter the great changes that had?ttaken place in our country in the last few years. Peter also told us a lot of things about America.
Although we missed
interesting film, ?we felt very happy. We not only helped Peter out of trouble ?also learnt something ?him.
第一處：on my way 改為 on our/the way 考查代詞。句意：在我們到電影院的路上，我們遇見了一位叫Peter的美國人。
第二處：happen改為happened考查動詞時態。文章是發生在過去，所以此處用一般過去時。
第三處：looked改為looking考查非謂語動詞。句意：他迷路了，看起來很擔心。此處現在分詞做狀語。
第四處：decided take改為 decided to take 考查動詞搭配。句意：我們決定帶他到哪，decide to do sth ＂決定做某事＂。
第五處：刪除told后的 of考查動詞短語。句意：一路上我告訴他，在過去的很多年里我們的國家發生了很大的變化。
第六處：刪除 taken place前的been
考查動詞語態。take place ＂發生＂不能用于被動語態。
第七處：a interesting film改為 an interesting film 考查冠詞。interesting為元音因素開頭，故用an。
第八處：but去掉或改為yet考查連詞。although與but ＂雖然,但是＂不能連用，但although可以與yet/still連用。
第九處：and also 改為but also 考查連詞短語。Not only...but also... ＂不但……而且……＂固定搭配。
第十處：by him改為 from him考查介詞。句意：我們不僅幫助他拜托掉麻煩而且從他身上學到很多東西。learn...from... ＂從……學到＂。
題組二
Passage1
I can still remember I was once asked to make
speech before the whole class at the age of 9. You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed
me. I had no
choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn’t . The real moment began
I stood on the platform with my legs trembling
my mind blank. But my listeners were waiting . Gradually, I found
back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of
before a big audience
disappeared. Actually, now I’ve become a great speaker!
第一處：make后加a。make a speech意為＂＂a。
第二處：to→on。fix on意為＂＂on。
第三處：去掉more。have no choice but別無選擇，故去掉more。
第四處：allowing→allowed。這里是被允許，應用被動語態，故allowing改為allowed。
第五處：before→when。此處表示＂當我站在講臺上＂應該用whenbefore改為when。
第六處：or→and。前后為并列關系，此處表示＂＂or改為and。
第七處：patient→patiently。修飾謂語動詞were waiting應該用副詞patient改為patiently。
第八處：me→myself。find oneself back意為＂＂me改為myself。
第九處：speak→speaking。of是介詞，介詞后面動詞用-ing的形式，故speak改為speaking。
第十處：had→has。根據時間狀語Ever since then可知本句應該用現在完成時had改為has。
Passage2
Last weekend’s concert, organized and
by the students of the Welsh Community College, was
great success. The
had been practicing for months for the concert. They were excited
when they heard Gareth Jones was coming to present the prizes. Over 100 young performers
a mixture of jazz, classical
folk music. One of the highlights
14-year-old Megan Evans, playing traditional Welsh folk songs. The concert ended with a very loud pop tune and
in the hall stood up and danced
the music. It was a
atmosphere and a wonderful evening.
第一處：performing→performed。and連接的并列成分作定語修飾前面的concertperform與concert之間為被動關系故用過去分詞
第二處：was后加a。本句中的名詞success由抽象名詞具體化為可數名詞＂成功的事＂，此處表示泛指，需要加冠詞a。
第三處：student→students。根據常識可知一場音樂會應該由很多同學一起表演，所以使用可數名詞復數形式。
第四處：刪除that。本句中when引導時間狀語從句，主句是They were excited，that是多余。
第五處：play→played。本文講述的是上周發生的事情，所以使用過去式played。
第六處：or→and。此處表示并列關系，而且表示所列所有內容，因此用and＂和，又＂。
第七處：were→was。主語是One of the highlights，為單數名詞，謂語動詞應用單數形式。
第八處：anyone→everyone。所有人都站起來隨著音樂跳舞，everyone表示＂所有人＂。
第九處：with→to。dance to the music伴隨著音樂跳舞，為常見用法。
第十處：magically→magical。修飾名詞atmosphere應該用形容詞magical。
Passage3
Dear Sophia,
I’m Li Hua from Beijing ABC Senior School. I’m happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of ?and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close ?our home, ?we could go to school by bike. ?noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m ?you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and ?talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join in other students in playing ball games or swimming. There’ll be a lot of .
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make ?stay here in Beijing ? pleasant experience.
Best wishes
Li Hua
第一處：chair是可數名詞，和a couple of搭配用復數。故chair改成chairs。第二處：be close to為固定搭配，意為＂離很近＂。故from改成to。第三處：我們學校離我們家很近，所以我們可以騎自行車回家。表示結果用so。故because改成so。第四處：表示＂在中午＂用at noon。故In改成At。第五處：作be動詞的表語用形容詞。故surely改成sure。第六處：和like并列用原形。故enjoying改成enjoy。第七處：join可以直接搭配sb。故去掉in。第八處：fun是不可數名詞，不能用復數。故funs改成fun。第九處：句意：我們會盡我們所能讓你在北京逗留期間成為愉快的經歷。故my改成your。第十處：experience作為＂經歷＂的時候是可數名詞，表示＂一次愉快的經歷＂用不定冠詞，pleasant是輔音音素開頭的單詞。故pleasant前面加aOn Friday, our teacher told us that there would ?an English corner in front of our teaching building. I set ?soon after the last class in the afternoon.
To my joy, the English corner had just been on for a few. I joined them ?their talk. At first, I was afraid that my English was so poor and?that I couldn’t follow them or make myself . I was also afraid that ?might laugh at me. But a smiling face here ?an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease. Though I ?to them only in simple English that day, I believe in future I will make?greater progress.
