2024屆高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作指導(dǎo)課件：第17講如何寫開放類作文（牛津譯林版）

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　　英語第17講　如何寫開放類作文一、魔法導(dǎo)航 1.仔細(xì)觀察,認(rèn)真審題。審題對開放類作文的寫作相當(dāng)重要,通過審題確定文章的主題、時(shí)態(tài)和體裁。 2.直奔主題,重點(diǎn)突出。盡管開放類作文考生發(fā)揮的空間較大,但一定要緊緊圍繞主題展開寫作,在文章結(jié)構(gòu)上必須做到重點(diǎn)突出。 3.內(nèi)容充實(shí),緊扣主題。全文要緊扣所給信息的主題,進(jìn)行合理的闡述,并表達(dá)自己的感想。在這一部分,只要用簡單的語言講出道理即可,沒必要過深地挖掘信息,同時(shí)要保證文章的立意是積極向上的。 4.過渡自然,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。要讓一篇文章讀起來通順、流暢,就應(yīng)該注意段落之間的過渡銜接。因此,有必要在上下文之間添加一個(gè)過渡詞或過渡句。 ——收放自如,文采飛揚(yáng) 5. 全面審核,仔細(xì)檢查。寫完文章后,要注意對照寫作要求仔細(xì)審核,看所寫內(nèi)容是否符合題意,內(nèi)容是否充實(shí),句型是否正確,有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤等。二、常用句式 1.分析原因 (1)There are...reasons for... (2)The reasons for this are as follows.

　　(3)The reason for this is that... 2.表示重要、必要、困難、方便、(不)可能 (1)It is important/necessary/difficult/convenient/possible for sb. to do... (2)It plays an important role/part in... (3)be of importance/significance to... (4)attach importance to... 3.說影響 (1)have an impact/effect on... (2)do great harm to/be harmful to...

　　4.列措施 (1)...can do many things to... (2)A good many/A variety of things can be done to... (3)Strong/Effective measures should be taken to... 5. 展望與呼吁 (1)appeal to sb. to do/urge sb. to do/call on sb. to do... (2)try/do one's best to do... (3)do what/all that sb. can to do... (4)spare no effort to do/make the greatest effort to do... (5)do everything in one's power to do... 6. 表示好處 (1)It has the following advantages. (2)It does us a lot of good. 三、典題示例 ?真題在線 (2024湖北) 請根據(jù)以下提示,并結(jié)合具體事例,用英語寫一篇短文。 Small things make a big difference.The small things we do can make us a respon-sible member of the society. 注意:①無須寫標(biāo)題; ②除詩歌外,文體不限; ③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例; ④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱; ⑤詞數(shù)不少于120,如引用提示語則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 ?

　　? ?審題謀篇寫作類型開放類作文中心人稱第一人稱主體時(shí)態(tài) 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 一般過去時(shí) 要點(diǎn) 布局第一段:引入話題,如說明自己經(jīng)歷的一件小事對自己的影響等。第二段:記敘一件證明自己觀點(diǎn)的事例,說明“小事不小”的道理。敘事時(shí)一定要緊扣主題,擴(kuò)展要得當(dāng),過渡要自然。第三段:自己的認(rèn)識和感想,升華主題。考場作文:

　　From a thing some days ago, I know that it isn't too hard to become a responsible member of the society.

　　I can still remember ①a incident which hap-pened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was ②waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car,which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid. I also joined in without hesitation. ③Comparing with the es-caped driver, I am proud of what I did. As a member of the society, I realize that re-sponsibility plays a very important role in creat-ing a better society. 文章提升: 1.修改錯(cuò)誤: 1)incident讀音以元音音素開頭,故應(yīng)將①a改為????。 2)wait是不及物動詞,故應(yīng)在②waiting后加介詞????。 3)compare與其邏輯主語I之間是被動關(guān)系,故將③Comparing改為????。 2.提升建議: 將畫線部分改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句型: ? ?

　　?閱卷現(xiàn)場參考范文: During the last summer vacation I experienced many things but it was one small thing that was the most unforgettable. On a sunny Saturday, I was taking a bus to visit my uncle. So many people were there on the bus that some persons had to stand, including an old woman. On seeing this scene, I offered my seat to her without hesitation because I thought respecting the old is a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. When seeing the smile on the woman's face, I felt very proud.

　　From this small thing I came to understand that small things make a difference to the world. Only when everyone places a high value on responsibility for the society can we create a better society to live in. ?答案 1.修改錯(cuò)誤:1)an　2)for????(3)Compared 2.提升建議:it's responsibility that plays a very important role in creating a better society 四、高分秀場 (2024江西高三十校第一次聯(lián)考) 北大前任校長王恩哥說過:作為新時(shí)代的學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該插上兩個(gè)翅膀——理想和毅力,結(jié)交兩個(gè)朋友——圖書館和運(yùn)動場。請就以上話題展開想象寫一篇文章,闡述你對此的理解。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 3.參考詞匯:理想 ideal;毅力perseverance ? ?

　　? ?答案 One possible version: As Wang Enge, former President of Peking University once put, “Give yourself two wings—ideals and perseverance;make two friends—the library and the play-ground.”

　　What he said is surely of great importance and benefit to us. Ideals reflect what we value and cherish in the world, which will shape us in the future. Without them, we may get lost and don't know where to start in life. On the contrary, if you stick to them and persevere, never quitting halfway, you will make it. And then we should have another two friends—the library and the playground. The library is where knowledge is stored. Equipping us with knowledge is a must for us to survive or even fly higher. Meanwhile, the playground is another friend we can't ignore. Without good health, you can do nothing but lie down, sighing all day and left in deep sorrow.

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　　From a thing some days ago, I know that it isn't too hard to become a responsible member of the society.