2024屆高考英語一輪復習寫作指導課件：第7講 倒裝和省略在寫作中的應用（牛津譯林版）

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　　英語 第7講　倒裝和省略在寫作中的應用 一、魔法導航 倒裝和省略是強調句意、豐富句式、增加語言表現形式的重要手段。 (一)倒裝 在寫作中常用的倒裝形式主要有以下幾種。 1.含有否定意義的詞no, not, never, seldom, rarely, little, hardly或短語not only, no sooner, not until, at no time, in no way, by no means, on no condition, under no circumstances等置于句首時,句子用部分倒裝。 ?典句引領 Not only can traveling relax us, but it can also broaden our horizons. 旅游不僅能使我們得到放松,而且可以開闊我們的眼界。 Hardly had he finished his talk when he was surrounded by the excited fans. ——倒裝省略,風景獨好 他剛一結束講話就被興奮的粉絲們圍了起來。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)As far as I'm concerned, 　????(她的慷慨不僅能夠幫助那些生活困難的人實現夢想),but also it will motivate more people to participate in such a good deed. (2024廣東) ?答案　not only will her generosity help those in need realize their dreams (2)直到父親回來,我才上床睡覺。 ??

　　?? ?答案　Not until my father came back did I went to bed.

　　(3)這種測試不僅能預測嚴重的疾病和食物偏好,而且也能為人們提供恰當的運動方式。(2024廣東) ?

　　?? ?答案　Not only can the test predict serious illnesses and food preference, but al- so it can present people with proper ways to exercise. 2.only修飾副詞、介詞短語或狀語從句置于句首時,句子/主句使用部分倒裝。 ?典句引領 Only after all the fish died did the villagers realize the importance of protecting the environment.

　　直到所有的魚都死光后,村民們才意識到保護環境的重要性。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)　????(只有你意識到英語的重要性)can you put your heart into it. ?答案　Only when you realize the importance of English

　　(2)只有努力學習,我們才能不斷取得進步。(2024福建) ?

　　??? ?答案　 Only if we study hard can we make continuous progress.

　　3.在so...that和such...that句型中,so或such置于句首時,主句使用部分倒裝。 ?典句引領 So charming is my hometown that it attracts visitors from all over the country ev-ery year. 我的家鄉如此迷人,每年都吸引著全國各地的游客。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Besides,　????(我英語掌握得非常好) that I am elected as my English teacher's assistant.(2024陜西) ?答案　such a good command of English do I have (2)這個欄目非常受歡迎,我們在空閑時間都喜歡閱讀。(2024課標全國Ⅰ) ???

　　? ?答案　 So popular is the section that all of us like reading it in the free time.

　　4.as作“盡管/雖然”講時,引導讓步狀語從句,從句用倒裝。 ?典句引領 Child as he is, he knows a lot.

　　盡管他是個孩子,卻懂很多。 Tired as we were, we continued working.

　　盡管我們很累,但我們繼續工作。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)　????(盡管我感到失望)at the shabby campus and the poorly-e-quipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate.

　　?答案　Disappointed as I felt

　　(2)盡管這個小男孩非常貧窮,但他想辦法努力學習。(2024福建) ?

　　??? ?答案　 Poor as the little boy was, he tried to find ways to study hard. 5.當副詞here, now, off, up, in, out, down, away, there, then等或表方位的介詞短語置于句首且主語是名詞時,句子使用完全倒裝。 ?典句引領 On the left side of the road stands our library, where there are various kinds of books. 路的左側是我們的圖書館,里面有各種各樣的書。 Out rushed the boy before I could say a word. 我還沒來得及說句話,男孩就沖了出去。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Just to the south of Tian'anmen Square　????(是前門大街), which is a famous street.

　　?答案　is Qianmen Street

　　(2)這是給你的兩條建議。(2024四川) ???

　　? ?答案　Here are two suggestions for you. 1.當狀語從句的主語和主句的主語一致,且從句謂語中含有be動詞時,可以省略狀語從句中的主語和be動詞。 ?典句引領 Once lost, time can never be made up for. 一旦失去,時間不可彌補。 When walking in the street, I met my good friend. 在大街上散步的時候,我遇到了我的好朋友。 ?雕詞琢句 　????(面臨困難的時候), the child didn't give up but managed to over-come them. ?答案　 When faced with difficulties/When facing difficulties (二)省略 2.當狀語從句中的主語是it,謂語中又含有be動詞時,可以把it和be動詞同時省略。 ?典句引領 I want to smile whenever and wherever (it is) possible. 我想隨時隨地地笑。 ?雕詞琢句 有可能的時候,你就可以練習說普通話。(2024四川) ?

　　??? ?答案　 Whenever possible, you can practice speaking Mandarin.

　　二、學以致用 1.完美文章 結合括號中的提示,用合適的倒裝或省略形式完成下面的文章。 (1)　????(如此美麗)Jiuzhaigou Valley that I had dreamed about traveling there.Last year,I realized my dream,spending three days in Jiuzhaigou Valley,where the charming sights made a deep impression on me.Only then(2)　????　????(我才意識到) that traveling was quite necessary for improving life quality.However,(3)　????(當看到一些游客丟垃圾時) here and there,I felt very angry.I thought it was high time that some effective measures were taken to make travelers aware of the importance of protecting the environment.Only in this way (4)　????(九寨溝才能變得越來越美麗). ?答案 (1)So beautiful was (2)did I come to realize (3)when seeing some visitors throwing rubbish (4)could Jiuzhaigou Valley become more and more beautiful 2.話題寫作 [本期話題]　興趣愛好 [寫作要求]　至少運用三種倒裝或省略形式。 根據下面的信息提示,寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。 1.說到個人興趣,我非常喜歡音樂。 2.它不僅能豐富我們的生活,還可以使我們得到放松; 3.在高中學習的時候,我選學了音樂欣賞這門課; 4.我非常喜歡音樂,一有時間就唱各種各樣的歌曲并欣賞它們; 5.盡管在無休止的考試后我感到非常累,但仍然沒有停止; 6.直到那時我才真正意識到我是多么喜歡音樂。 ??

　　?? When it comes to my interest, I do like music very much. Not only can it enrich our life, but also it can relax us especially when we are tired. When studying in high school, I took one course called Music Appreciation. So much did I like it that whenever possible I would sing all kinds of songs and appreciate them. Tired as I was after endless exams, I didn't stop doing that. Only then did I realize how much I love music.

　　?答案 One possible version: 三、美文賞讀 假設你是李華,上周你所在的研究性學習小組對你校中學生的健康狀況進行了一次調查。請根據下面的相關信息寫一篇英語短文,刊登在你校的英文校報上。 注意:1. 可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫; 2.參考詞匯:肥胖obesity　近視short sight 現狀 肥胖、近視等健康問題逐年增多 原因 作業負擔重;體育鍛煉少;睡眠不足;飲食不均衡 建議 減輕學生負擔;加強鍛煉;多吃果蔬,拒絕垃圾食品 [我來試寫] ??

　　?? ?答案 One possible version: Our research group made a survey about the health condition of the students studying in our school. It shows health problems are common among students, such as obesity, short sight and so on.

　　There are various reasons for the phenomenon. ①When faced with endless homework and exams, many students have little time to do exercise. ②So busy are they that they find it difficult to have enough sleep. What's worse, a great many students don't have a balanced diet.

　　In order to solve the problems, it's suggested that ③not only should the school reduce students' learning load, but also some effective measures should be taken to encourage students to exercise regularly. In addition, students are supposed to eat more fruits and vegetables and refuse junk food④if possible.⑤Only in this way can the health of students be greatly improved.

　　文中①—⑤處作者巧妙運用倒裝或省略形式,不僅突出了句意的表達而且豐富了句式,增強了語言的感染力,出色完成了寫作任務,值得學習。 【寫作點評】

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　　英語 第7講　倒裝和省略在寫作中的應用 一、魔法導航 倒裝和省略是強調句意、豐富句式、增加語言表現形式的重要手段。 (一)倒裝 在寫作中常用的倒裝形式主要有以下幾種。 1.含有否定意義的詞no, not, never, seldom, rarely, little, hardly或短語not only, no sooner, not until, at no time, in no way, by no means, on no condition, under no circumstances等置于句首時,句子用部分倒裝。 ?典句引領 Not only can traveling relax us, but it can also broaden our horizons. 旅游不僅能使我們得到放松,而且可以開闊我們的眼界。 Hardly had he finished his talk when he was surrounded by the excited fans. ——倒裝省略,風景獨好 他剛一結束講話就被興奮的粉絲們圍了起來。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)As far as I'm concerned, 　????(她的慷慨不僅能夠幫助那些生活困難的人實現夢想),but also it will motivate more people to participate in such a good deed. (2024廣東) ?答案　not only will her generosity help those in need realize their dreams (2)直到父親回來,我才上床睡覺。 ??

　　?? ?答案　Not until my father came back did I went to bed.

　　(3)這種測試不僅能預測嚴重的疾病和食物偏好,而且也能為人們提供恰當的運動方式。(2024廣東) ?

　　?? ?答案　Not only can the test predict serious illnesses and food preference, but al- so it can present people with proper ways to exercise. 2.only修飾副詞、介詞短語或狀語從句置于句首時,句子/主句使用部分倒裝。 ?典句引領 Only after all the fish died did the villagers realize the importance of protecting the environment.

　　直到所有的魚都死光后,村民們才意識到保護環境的重要性。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)　????(只有你意識到英語的重要性)can you put your heart into it. ?答案　Only when you realize the importance of English

　　(2)只有努力學習,我們才能不斷取得進步。(2024福建) ?

　　??? ?答案　 Only if we study hard can we make continuous progress.

　　3.在so...that和such...that句型中,so或such置于句首時,主句使用部分倒裝。 ?典句引領 So charming is my hometown that it attracts visitors from all over the country ev-ery year. 我的家鄉如此迷人,每年都吸引著全國各地的游客。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Besides,　????(我英語掌握得非常好) that I am elected as my English teacher's assistant.(2024陜西) ?答案　such a good command of English do I have (2)這個欄目非常受歡迎,我們在空閑時間都喜歡閱讀。(2024課標全國Ⅰ) ???

　　? ?答案　 So popular is the section that all of us like reading it in the free time.

　　4.as作“盡管/雖然”講時,引導讓步狀語從句,從句用倒裝。 ?典句引領 Child as he is, he knows a lot.

　　盡管他是個孩子,卻懂很多。 Tired as we were, we continued working.

　　盡管我們很累,但我們繼續工作。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)　????(盡管我感到失望)at the shabby campus and the poorly-e-quipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate.

　　?答案　Disappointed as I felt

　　(2)盡管這個小男孩非常貧窮,但他想辦法努力學習。(2024福建) ?

　　??? ?答案　 Poor as the little boy was, he tried to find ways to study hard. 5.當副詞here, now, off, up, in, out, down, away, there, then等或表方位的介詞短語置于句首且主語是名詞時,句子使用完全倒裝。 ?典句引領 On the left side of the road stands our library, where there are various kinds of books. 路的左側是我們的圖書館,里面有各種各樣的書。 Out rushed the boy before I could say a word. 我還沒來得及說句話,男孩就沖了出去。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Just to the south of Tian'anmen Square　????(是前門大街), which is a famous street.

　　?答案　is Qianmen Street

　　(2)這是給你的兩條建議。(2024四川) ???

　　? ?答案　Here are two suggestions for you. 1.當狀語從句的主語和主句的主語一致,且從句謂語中含有be動詞時,可以省略狀語從句中的主語和be動詞。 ?典句引領 Once lost, time can never be made up for. 一旦失去,時間不可彌補。 When walking in the street, I met my good friend. 在大街上散步的時候,我遇到了我的好朋友。 ?雕詞琢句 　????(面臨困難的時候), the child didn't give up but managed to over-come them. ?答案　 When faced with difficulties/When facing difficulties (二)省略 2.當狀語從句中的主語是it,謂語中又含有be動詞時,可以把it和be動詞同時省略。 ?典句引領 I want to smile whenever and wherever (it is) possible. 我想隨時隨地地笑。 ?雕詞琢句 有可能的時候,你就可以練習說普通話。(2024四川) ?

　　??? ?答案　 Whenever possible, you can practice speaking Mandarin.

　　二、學以致用 1.完美文章 結合括號中的提示,用合適的倒裝或省略形式完成下面的文章。 (1)　????(如此美麗)Jiuzhaigou Valley that I had dreamed about traveling there.Last year,I realized my dream,spending three days in Jiuzhaigou Valley,where the charming sights made a deep impression on me.Only then(2)　????　????(我才意識到) that traveling was quite necessary for improving life quality.However,(3)　????(當看到一些游客丟垃圾時) here and there,I felt very angry.I thought it was high time that some effective measures were taken to make travelers aware of the importance of protecting the environment.Only in this way (4)　????(九寨溝才能變得越來越美麗). ?答案 (1)So beautiful was (2)did I come to realize (3)when seeing some visitors throwing rubbish (4)could Jiuzhaigou Valley become more and more beautiful 2.話題寫作 [本期話題]　興趣愛好 [寫作要求]　至少運用三種倒裝或省略形式。 根據下面的信息提示,寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。 1.說到個人興趣,我非常喜歡音樂。 2.它不僅能豐富我們的生活,還可以使我們得到放松; 3.在高中學習的時候,我選學了音樂欣賞這門課; 4.我非常喜歡音樂,一有時間就唱各種各樣的歌曲并欣賞它們; 5.盡管在無休止的考試后我感到非常累,但仍然沒有停止; 6.直到那時我才真正意識到我是多么喜歡音樂。 ??

　　?? When it comes to my interest, I do like music very much. Not only can it enrich our life, but also it can relax us especially when we are tired. When studying in high school, I took one course called Music Appreciation. So much did I like it that whenever possible I would sing all kinds of songs and appreciate them. Tired as I was after endless exams, I didn't stop doing that. Only then did I realize how much I love music.

　　?答案 One possible version: 三、美文賞讀 假設你是李華,上周你所在的研究性學習小組對你校中學生的健康狀況進行了一次調查。請根據下面的相關信息寫一篇英語短文,刊登在你校的英文校報上。 注意:1. 可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫; 2.參考詞匯:肥胖obesity　近視short sight 現狀 肥胖、近視等健康問題逐年增多 原因 作業負擔重;體育鍛煉少;睡眠不足;飲食不均衡 建議 減輕學生負擔;加強鍛煉;多吃果蔬,拒絕垃圾食品 [我來試寫] ??

　　?? ?答案 One possible version: Our research group made a survey about the health condition of the students studying in our school. It shows health problems are common among students, such as obesity, short sight and so on.

　　There are various reasons for the phenomenon. ①When faced with endless homework and exams, many students have little time to do exercise. ②So busy are they that they find it difficult to have enough sleep. What's worse, a great many students don't have a balanced diet.

　　In order to solve the problems, it's suggested that ③not only should the school reduce students' learning load, but also some effective measures should be taken to encourage students to exercise regularly. In addition, students are supposed to eat more fruits and vegetables and refuse junk food④if possible.⑤Only in this way can the health of students be greatly improved.

　　文中①—⑤處作者巧妙運用倒裝或省略形式,不僅突出了句意的表達而且豐富了句式,增強了語言的感染力,出色完成了寫作任務,值得學習。 【寫作點評】