2024屆高考英語一輪復習寫作指導課件：第5講 強調形式在寫作中的應用（牛津譯林版）

　　一、魔法導航 在英語寫作中有時為了強調某一成分、突出表意效果,我們常常采用強調的形式。下面把寫作中常用的強調形式做一下簡要總結。 1.用感嘆句來表示強烈的感情,突出說話人的情感。 ?典句引領 What an interesting picture it is!

　　這是一張多么有意思的照片呀! ?雕詞琢句 (1)　????(這個旅程將會多么令人愉快)if you make it smooth for others! ?答案　 How sweet the journey will be ——強勢出擊,一句千鈞 (2) 于敏是一個多么無私的科學家啊!(2024安徽) ?

　　??? ?答案　What a selfless scientist Yu Min is! 2.用助動詞“do/does/did+動詞原形”對謂語動詞進行強調。 ?典句引領 If you need any further information, do let me know.

　　如果你需要進一步的信息,一定要讓我知道。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and　????(我們的確玩得很高興) that day. (2024浙江) ?答案　 we did have lots of fun/we did enjoy ourselves

　　(2)我真的希望你能幫助我提高英語寫作能力,尤其是詞匯和一些重點語法的恰當運用。(2024四川) ???

　　? ?答案　I do hope you can help me improve my English writing ability, especial- ly the proper use of vocabulary and some important grammar.

　　3.用強調句型“It is/was+被強調的部分+that/who+其他”來對句子的主語、賓語或狀語進行強調,突出說話人的意愿。 ?典句引領 It was not until the end of the 19th century that shooting earned its status as a sport. 直到19世紀末期射擊才成為一項運動項目。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story 　????(重要). (2024福建) ?答案　 that counts/matters/is important (2)重要的是那些遵守規則的人。(2024江蘇) ?

　　??? ?答案　It is the people who obey the rules that matter. 4.通過使用such...that..., so...that..., not...but...等一些固定的搭配達到強調的目的。 ?典句引領 It was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. 這是如此美麗的一天以至于他們將永遠記住它。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)　????(生活將會豐富多彩) in ten years that I will enjoy it much.(2014課標全國Ⅱ) ?答案　Life will be so rich and colorful

　　(2)這些書籍非常有趣,你們可能會非常喜歡。(2024天津) ??

　　?? ?答案　The books are so interesting that you may like them very much. 5. 通過使用排比、重復等修辭手段對句子進行強調。 ?典句引領 I like Shakespeare because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world;I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English lan-guage;I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! 【評析】　作者通過使用like、love和admire三個動詞使語氣層層遞進,通過使用三個because引導的排比句充分說明了自己喜歡莎士比亞的原因。 二、學以致用 1.完美文章 結合括號中的提示,用不同的強調手段把下面的短文補充完整。 Nowadays, lots of children in rural areas can't live together with their parents working in other places. Several factors result in the problem. Firstly, some parents (1)　????(強調謂語動詞:的確擔心) that it will influence their work if they take the children a-long with them. Secondly, the living costs and education fees in the place where parents work are(2)　????(如此高他們負擔不起). The phenomenon does harm to children in many ways. First of all, children will feel quite lonely without parents' love and care. Worse still, such children get into bad habits easily, which (3)　????(強調謂語動詞:確實會影響他們的健康成長). In my opinion, (4)　????(強調句型:父母和政府應為這個問題負責).However, whatev-er difficulties we are faced with, we should take effective measures to overcome them.

　　???? (1)do worry (2)so high that they can't afford them (3)does influence their healthy growth (4)it's the parents and the government that are to blame for the problem 2.話題寫作 [本期話題]　動物保護 [寫作要求]　至少運用三種強調形式。 根據下面的信息提示,寫一篇70詞左右的英語短文。 1.我認為保護野生動物的確很重要; 2.它們是自然界的珍寶和人類的朋友; 3.它們可以保持自然界的平衡; ?答案 4.它們非常珍貴,必須采取措施保護它們; 5.保護它們就是保護我們自己。 ??

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　　?? ?答案 One possible version: I do attach great importance to protecting wild animals. As far as I'm concerned, they are not only the treasure of nature but also our friends. As we all know, it is wild animals that play an important role in keeping the balance of nature. They are so rare that effective measures must be taken right now to protect them from be-ing hunted and dying out. Just as some scientists say, protecting wild animals is protecting ourselves.

　　三、美文賞讀

　　本周你班班會的主題是“To be self-confident”,你是班長,請根據下面的提示準備一篇發言稿。 提示: 1.簡述自信的重要性; 2.你曾經缺乏信心,是誰給了你鼓勵,什么事讓你改變了態度; 3.適當加入自己的評論。 注意:1.詞數100左右;

　　2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節,使行文連貫。 ? ?

　　? ?答案 One possible version: Boys and girls, Sometimes, life is a hard and bitter journey. Therefore, I'd like to say, “No mat-ter what happens, ①do be self-confident.” [我來試寫] ??

　　?? I still remember that when I just entered this high school, I suffered a lot of stress and was too nervous to answer the teachers' questions whenever they asked me in class. Later, something happened that ②did change my life. An English speech contest was to be held in my class. ③It was with great efforts that the teacher per-suaded me to participate in it. He said ④it was so important an opportunity for me to build up my confidence that I shouldn't give it up. I chose a topic a bit chal-lenging for me—Self-confidence and Success. I wrote down whatever I had to say and kept reciting it. ⑤It was with the teacher's encouragement that I won a prize. From then on, I held a firm belief that self-confidence is the first step to success. Thus, my friends, ⑥do be self-confident and you will achieve success. That's all. Thank you.

　　【寫作點評】 在文中①—⑥作者巧妙運用各種強調形式,不僅豐富了句式,而且突出了表達效果,增強了語言的感染力,出色完成了寫作任務。

　　一、魔法導航 在英語寫作中有時為了強調某一成分、突出表意效果,我們常常采用強調的形式。下面把寫作中常用的強調形式做一下簡要總結。 1.用感嘆句來表示強烈的感情,突出說話人的情感。 ?典句引領 What an interesting picture it is!

　　這是一張多么有意思的照片呀! ?雕詞琢句 (1)　????(這個旅程將會多么令人愉快)if you make it smooth for others! ?答案　 How sweet the journey will be ——強勢出擊,一句千鈞 (2) 于敏是一個多么無私的科學家啊!(2024安徽) ?

　　??? ?答案　What a selfless scientist Yu Min is! 2.用助動詞“do/does/did+動詞原形”對謂語動詞進行強調。 ?典句引領 If you need any further information, do let me know.

　　如果你需要進一步的信息,一定要讓我知道。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and　????(我們的確玩得很高興) that day. (2024浙江) ?答案　 we did have lots of fun/we did enjoy ourselves

　　(2)我真的希望你能幫助我提高英語寫作能力,尤其是詞匯和一些重點語法的恰當運用。(2024四川) ???

　　? ?答案　I do hope you can help me improve my English writing ability, especial- ly the proper use of vocabulary and some important grammar.

　　3.用強調句型“It is/was+被強調的部分+that/who+其他”來對句子的主語、賓語或狀語進行強調,突出說話人的意愿。 ?典句引領 It was not until the end of the 19th century that shooting earned its status as a sport. 直到19世紀末期射擊才成為一項運動項目。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story 　????(重要). (2024福建) ?答案　 that counts/matters/is important (2)重要的是那些遵守規則的人。(2024江蘇) ?

　　??? ?答案　It is the people who obey the rules that matter. 4.通過使用such...that..., so...that..., not...but...等一些固定的搭配達到強調的目的。 ?典句引領 It was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. 這是如此美麗的一天以至于他們將永遠記住它。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)　????(生活將會豐富多彩) in ten years that I will enjoy it much.(2014課標全國Ⅱ) ?答案　Life will be so rich and colorful

　　(2)這些書籍非常有趣,你們可能會非常喜歡。(2024天津) ??

　　?? ?答案　The books are so interesting that you may like them very much. 5. 通過使用排比、重復等修辭手段對句子進行強調。 ?典句引領 I like Shakespeare because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world;I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English lan-guage;I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! 【評析】　作者通過使用like、love和admire三個動詞使語氣層層遞進,通過使用三個because引導的排比句充分說明了自己喜歡莎士比亞的原因。 二、學以致用 1.完美文章 結合括號中的提示,用不同的強調手段把下面的短文補充完整。 Nowadays, lots of children in rural areas can't live together with their parents working in other places. Several factors result in the problem. Firstly, some parents (1)　????(強調謂語動詞:的確擔心) that it will influence their work if they take the children a-long with them. Secondly, the living costs and education fees in the place where parents work are(2)　????(如此高他們負擔不起). The phenomenon does harm to children in many ways. First of all, children will feel quite lonely without parents' love and care. Worse still, such children get into bad habits easily, which (3)　????(強調謂語動詞:確實會影響他們的健康成長). In my opinion, (4)　????(強調句型:父母和政府應為這個問題負責).However, whatev-er difficulties we are faced with, we should take effective measures to overcome them.

　　???? (1)do worry (2)so high that they can't afford them (3)does influence their healthy growth (4)it's the parents and the government that are to blame for the problem 2.話題寫作 [本期話題]　動物保護 [寫作要求]　至少運用三種強調形式。 根據下面的信息提示,寫一篇70詞左右的英語短文。 1.我認為保護野生動物的確很重要; 2.它們是自然界的珍寶和人類的朋友; 3.它們可以保持自然界的平衡; ?答案 4.它們非常珍貴,必須采取措施保護它們; 5.保護它們就是保護我們自己。 ??

　　?? ??

　　?? ??

　　?? ??

　　?? ??

　　?? ??

　　?? ??

　　?? ?答案 One possible version: I do attach great importance to protecting wild animals. As far as I'm concerned, they are not only the treasure of nature but also our friends. As we all know, it is wild animals that play an important role in keeping the balance of nature. They are so rare that effective measures must be taken right now to protect them from be-ing hunted and dying out. Just as some scientists say, protecting wild animals is protecting ourselves.

　　三、美文賞讀

　　本周你班班會的主題是“To be self-confident”,你是班長,請根據下面的提示準備一篇發言稿。 提示: 1.簡述自信的重要性; 2.你曾經缺乏信心,是誰給了你鼓勵,什么事讓你改變了態度; 3.適當加入自己的評論。 注意:1.詞數100左右;

　　2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節,使行文連貫。 ? ?

　　? ?答案 One possible version: Boys and girls, Sometimes, life is a hard and bitter journey. Therefore, I'd like to say, “No mat-ter what happens, ①do be self-confident.” [我來試寫] ??

　　?? I still remember that when I just entered this high school, I suffered a lot of stress and was too nervous to answer the teachers' questions whenever they asked me in class. Later, something happened that ②did change my life. An English speech contest was to be held in my class. ③It was with great efforts that the teacher per-suaded me to participate in it. He said ④it was so important an opportunity for me to build up my confidence that I shouldn't give it up. I chose a topic a bit chal-lenging for me—Self-confidence and Success. I wrote down whatever I had to say and kept reciting it. ⑤It was with the teacher's encouragement that I won a prize. From then on, I held a firm belief that self-confidence is the first step to success. Thus, my friends, ⑥do be self-confident and you will achieve success. That's all. Thank you.

　　【寫作點評】 在文中①—⑥作者巧妙運用各種強調形式,不僅豐富了句式,而且突出了表達效果,增強了語言的感染力,出色完成了寫作任務。