2024高考英語二輪書面表達訓練：圖文作文（01）

　　訓練（01）及參考范文

　　情景作文（20分）

　　假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華，校報英文版正在開展“續寫雷鋒日記”活動。請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，將你所做的一件好事以日記形式記述下來，向校報投稿。

　　注意：1.日記的開頭已為你寫好。

　　2.詞數不少于60。

　　Saturday，June2

　　Fine

　　This morning

　　【參考范文】

　　第一節：基礎寫作

　　假如你叫李華，是惠州的一名中學生。最近，當地政府正在實施快速公交和橋梁建設，結果引起人們的廣泛爭議。請你根據人們不同的觀點，給當地報社寫一封信，反映這一情況。

　　贊成觀點 反對觀點

　　1．能夠解決交通問題，方便人民生活；

　　2．有助于發展經濟，提高人民生活水平；

　　3．有助于提高惠州作為現代化旅游城市的形象。 1．會造成環境污染；

　　2．會產生噪音，打擾居民平靜的生活；

　　3．時常造成交通堵塞。

　　[寫作要求]

　　1．只能使用5個句子表達全部內容；

　　2．可適當發揮，但不能出現真實的學校和學生姓名。

　　3．短文開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入5個句子中。

　　[評分標準]

　　句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。

　　參考詞匯：快速公交系統BRT

　　高架橋overpass

　　Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is taking place in our city.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　第二節：讀寫任務

　　閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

　　What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30 pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roommates until she "tracks me down".

　　As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can pick up my mother's phone call, telling her a white lie that I'm already at home.

　　Recently I ran into a matchmaking meeting, which is held in a park and specifically designed for single white – collar workers in Beijing. The interesting part is that all of the attendees are single people’s parents, eager to look for a life partner for their children.

　　One mother told me that her 33-year-old son is busy with his career and has zero time to find a suitable girl for himself. So she goes to the matchmaking every week, trying to find her son a perfect bride.

　　She guaranteed that her future daughter-in-law doesn't need to worry about anything for she has prepared an apartment and a car for them, and if they can’t find a kindergarten near the apartment she has bought, she will buy them another one. Looking at hundreds of middle – aged parents standing in the cold outdoors in a freezing winter trying to build their children a perfect future, I suddenly understand my mother more.

　　【寫作內容】

　　1．以約30個詞概括這段短文的內容；

　　2．然后以約120個詞就“父母的過分關愛”進行議論，內容包括；

　　（1）請舉一個你或你周圍的周學得到父母的過分關愛的事例；

　　（2）談談你對此事的看法。

　　【寫作要求】

　　1．在作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

　　2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　【評分標準】

　　概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫。

　　1、Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is taking place in our city. Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people.

　　Some agree that we should carry out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city in the northeast of Guangdong province.

　　But others believe that the construction work may cause air pollution and traffic jams may appear now and then. What’s worse, the people who are against the construction think that the noise produced by the work will disturb people’s peaceful life.

　　2、Editor,

　　I'm writing to talk about the construction project which is going on in our city.

　　Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people. Some agree that we should carry out this construction project because they can not only solve some traffic problems which is becoming worse and worse, but also help to make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, they think that it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city.

　　But others are against it, saying that they the project may cause air pollution. They also believe the noise produced by the project will disturb people's peaceful life. Personally, I think the construction project will certainly do a lot of good to the city and the people. If we focus our attention on the environment, all of us will lead a better life in the future.

　　第二節：讀寫任務：

　　The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.

　　What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roomates until she "tracks me down".

　　As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can I can pick up my mother's phone call, telling her a white lie that I'm already at home.

　　The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.

　　訓練（01）及參考范文

　　情景作文（20分）

　　假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華，校報英文版正在開展“續寫雷鋒日記”活動。請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，將你所做的一件好事以日記形式記述下來，向校報投稿。

　　注意：1.日記的開頭已為你寫好。

　　2.詞數不少于60。

　　Saturday，June2

　　Fine

　　This morning

　　【參考范文】

　　第一節：基礎寫作

　　假如你叫李華，是惠州的一名中學生。最近，當地政府正在實施快速公交和橋梁建設，結果引起人們的廣泛爭議。請你根據人們不同的觀點，給當地報社寫一封信，反映這一情況。

　　贊成觀點 反對觀點

　　1．能夠解決交通問題，方便人民生活；

　　2．有助于發展經濟，提高人民生活水平；

　　3．有助于提高惠州作為現代化旅游城市的形象。 1．會造成環境污染；

　　2．會產生噪音，打擾居民平靜的生活；

　　3．時常造成交通堵塞。

　　[寫作要求]

　　1．只能使用5個句子表達全部內容；

　　2．可適當發揮，但不能出現真實的學校和學生姓名。

　　3．短文開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入5個句子中。

　　[評分標準]

　　句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。

　　參考詞匯：快速公交系統BRT

　　高架橋overpass

　　Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is taking place in our city.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　第二節：讀寫任務

　　閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

　　What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30 pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roommates until she "tracks me down".

　　As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can pick up my mother's phone call, telling her a white lie that I'm already at home.

　　Recently I ran into a matchmaking meeting, which is held in a park and specifically designed for single white – collar workers in Beijing. The interesting part is that all of the attendees are single people’s parents, eager to look for a life partner for their children.

　　One mother told me that her 33-year-old son is busy with his career and has zero time to find a suitable girl for himself. So she goes to the matchmaking every week, trying to find her son a perfect bride.

　　She guaranteed that her future daughter-in-law doesn't need to worry about anything for she has prepared an apartment and a car for them, and if they can’t find a kindergarten near the apartment she has bought, she will buy them another one. Looking at hundreds of middle – aged parents standing in the cold outdoors in a freezing winter trying to build their children a perfect future, I suddenly understand my mother more.

　　【寫作內容】

　　1．以約30個詞概括這段短文的內容；

　　2．然后以約120個詞就“父母的過分關愛”進行議論，內容包括；

　　（1）請舉一個你或你周圍的周學得到父母的過分關愛的事例；

　　（2）談談你對此事的看法。

　　【寫作要求】

　　1．在作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

　　2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　【評分標準】

　　概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫。

　　1、Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is taking place in our city. Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people.

　　Some agree that we should carry out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city in the northeast of Guangdong province.

　　But others believe that the construction work may cause air pollution and traffic jams may appear now and then. What’s worse, the people who are against the construction think that the noise produced by the work will disturb people’s peaceful life.

　　2、Editor,

　　I'm writing to talk about the construction project which is going on in our city.

　　Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people. Some agree that we should carry out this construction project because they can not only solve some traffic problems which is becoming worse and worse, but also help to make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, they think that it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city.

　　But others are against it, saying that they the project may cause air pollution. They also believe the noise produced by the project will disturb people's peaceful life. Personally, I think the construction project will certainly do a lot of good to the city and the people. If we focus our attention on the environment, all of us will lead a better life in the future.

　　第二節：讀寫任務：

　　The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.

　　What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roomates until she "tracks me down".

　　As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can I can pick up my mother's phone call, telling her a white lie that I'm already at home.

　　The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.