揭陽市2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（6）附參考范文

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　　短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　該文中共有十處錯誤,每句中最多有兩處,錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧), 并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2、只允許修改十處, 多者(從第11處起) 不計分。

　　I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor抯 advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, 揂n apple a day keeps the doctor graway? However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instgead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.

　　【答案】

　　I like eating fruit and vegetables what （改為which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改為health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow（改為following） the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改為goes）, “ An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改為disliking或在dislike前加who） fruit and vegetables. On（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were（改為are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改為 stronger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.（改為 it）

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　　I. 表格提示類

　　1. 下表是對某中學高三一班50個學生健康問題的調查表。請根據表格內容，綜述學生當前存在的健康問題，并就中學生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建議。詞數要求: 120左右。

　　問題類型學習焦慮逆反心理缺乏交往睡眠不足缺乏鍛煉視力不佳

　　人數 35 20 15 40 25 35

　　比例 70％ 40％ 30％ 80％ 50％ 70％

　　As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of students having learning anxieties as well as bad eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep. Coming next is the lack of physical exercise. 40% of the students surveyed won't obey their parents or teachers. Still fewer claimed not to have enough communication with others.

　　So far as 1 am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies. Just like a saying goes:" All work but no play makes Jack a dull boy," without a sound body one cannot achieve anything; However, too much attention has been paid only to studies. Therefore, I suggest we be given less homework and more time for out-of--classroom activities to solve all the problems. Only in this way can we lead a healthy life.

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　　短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤，對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃一個（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤）；則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,

　　66.

　　the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring ??????? 67.

　　Festival．My grandma was the best cooker in the world??? ????? 68.

　　but could make the most delicious dishes．One time, I just

　　69.

　　couldn't wait for the Spring Festival dinner．As I was???????? 70.

　　about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in ?????? 71.

　　the kitchen looking at me．Shake her head, she said, ‘It????? ?72.

　　isn't a good time to do that, dear．' At once I apologize?????? 73.

　　and controlled me at my best till the dinner started．You???? ??74.

　　know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month．"?????

　　75.

　　參考答案

　　66.boy前加a

　　67.去掉when

　　68.cooker改為cook

　　69.but改為and

　　70.√

　　71.about后加to

　　72.Shake改為Shaking

　　73.apologize改為apologized

　　74.me改為myself

　　75.month改為months

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　　假如你是張華，你的一個筆友Alice將要來你市參觀游玩。本來你答應要去機場接她的，但是由于某些原因，你不能按時去接機。為此，你給她發一封e-mail，內容包括：

　　1. 向她道歉，說明原因(自己設想)；

　　2. 提出解決辦法(叫她在旅客休息室等你)；

　　3. 你們是第一次見面，告訴她如何認出你來(自己設想)。

　　注意：詞數不少于120。

　　參考詞匯：旅客休息室arrival lounge

　　_______________________________________________________________________

　　參考范文

　　One possible version：

　　Dear Alice,

　　I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport on time.

　　The reason is that your flight will arrive at 9 o'clock on the morning of May 9, and unluckily our teacher has decided to give us an English test at that time. So the earliest time when I can reach the airport will be about an hour after you land. Will you please wait for me in the arrival lounge? You can have a rest while you wait.

　　By the way, as we have never met before, I must tell you that I will wear a white T-shirt, two red balloons in hand that day so that you can recognize me easily.

　　Hope we can meet soon.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Zhang Hua

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　　表格提示類

　　10．請你根據列表格內容，寫一篇短文，比較newspaper與website的異同，并談談你的看法。

　　相同點不同點

　　1．向讀者提供信息 1．報紙一經出版不能改變，而網站可以不斷更新內容。

　　2．通過刊登廣告賺錢 2．報紙要花錢，而在網上可以免費瀏覽信息。

　　3．可以容易地在網站上發表自己的看法。

　　我的看法……

　　注意：1、短文必須包括表內所有的內容，可以適當增加細節，使內容連貫；

　　2、首句已給出，不列入總詞數；

　　2、詞數：120詞左右。

　　One possible version:I am a senior three student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in senior three, shouldering heavy loads, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that I’ll not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can’t accept her ideas. I think it is a relaxation to watch TV after a day’s hard work. Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. Now we’ve at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news, programs ,entertainment, sports and science.

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　　高考英語作文精選范文---純文字信息提示類

　　純文字信息提示類

　　1. 目前家長為孩子請家教是一種普遍現象。前幾年多見于初、高中學生，現在有些小學生也請家教。父母們如此舍得花錢和忍心占去孩子的時間，究竟是為什么呢？某中學生英語報正在征文，了解其中原因。請根據下面所給的標題和首段內容，分析慢、中、快三類學生請家教的原因并說明你對家教現象的態度。注意：詞數100詞左右。參考詞匯：1．慢等生：catch up with sb. ; become dependent on sth.依賴……

　　2．中等生：surpass vt.超過3．快等生：more competitive 更有競爭力的

　　Why Students Have Tutors（家教）？

　　Les’s take one class, either in primary or high school, as an example and divide it into three groups: the slow, the middle, and the fast learners. In the past, the slow learners used to have tutors. Today, however, it seems all of them have tutors for one reason or another.

　　The slow learners need tutors because they can’t catch up with others with their own efforts. They have difficulty in understanding the teachers and doing their homework.. So after – class tutoring is really important to them. But the problem is that they may become dependent on tutors and not work very hard in class.

　　As to the middle group learners, they worry about being surpassed and turn to tutors, too.

　　What about the fast learners? Though they are confident about their present position, they are not quite satisfied. They fix their eyes on a high goal. They desire to learn more in order to be more competitive later.

　　I think they have the right to have tutors, though I have no tutors.

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　　高考英語作文精選范文---純文字信息提示類

　　2. 閱讀下面這封中學生來信（摘自 China Daily 21 Century）.

　　Dear Editor:

　　I am a new student at No. 1 Middle School of Chongqing. My home is far from Chongqing, so I must live at school. This is the first time for me to get away from my parents. I feel very sad. When I left home, I could hardly tearing myself away from them. .I do not want to be alone at school, and I am a shy girl. I have been crying in bed at night these days. I want to stay at home forever. I miss my parents very much.. Could you tell me what to do ?

　　Your early reply is expected.

　　Regards

　　Amy

　　請根據以上內容，寫一封回信（信的開頭已為你好。詞數120左右）。

　　回信應包括如下要點；1．鼓勵Amy堅定求學信心，志存高遠，四海為家。

　　2．就Amy的目前狀況，提兩到三個建議。

　　Dear Amy:

　　Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you.

　　People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. You cannot live with your parents forever. I think you should realize that present separation will help your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.

　　You need to make friend in your school, sharing ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it.

　　Wish you happy every day.

　　Faithfully yours

　　Editor

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　　高考英語作文精選范文---純文字信息提示類

　　3. 眾所周知，2008年奧運會將在北京舉行。為了辦好這次國際盛會，北京市將進一步改善環境，修建更多的體育場館。與此同時，提高市民的素質和修養也勢在必得，因為文明的舉止在國際交往中非常重要。作為年輕人，我們自身也存在著一些不文明行為。請列舉你所觀察到的一些不文明行為（三種以上），并就此做出評論或提出建議。

　　It is known to all that the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. In order to make it successful event, we will improve the environment of Beijing and build more venues . As the same time ,it is necessary for us to improve the quality and culture of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication. I notice that sometimes some young people don’t behave properly in our daily lives. For example ,spitting in public places can be seen somewhere .The lawns are entered in the park although it is not right to do so .The flowers in public garden are picked .What is worse , rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street .

　　In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad impressions upon visitors to China . So every one of us should form good habits from now on.

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　　高考英語作文精選范文---純文字信息提示類

　　4. 肥胖已經成為危害人們健康的嚴重問題，中小學生的肥胖趨勢更為明顯。你們班對此展開討論。根據不同的觀點，寫一篇100詞左右的短文。

　　1．肥胖危害健康，應該節食，鍛煉，預防肥胖。已經超重的，應該采取措施減肥。

　　2．中學生長身體的時候，減肥會影響身體發育，也會影響學習，因此應該順其自然。

　　肥胖：fatness