考研英語復習資料考研英語作文范文的批改44

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam:(英語中有逗號) I am a student graduate from Nanjing Normal University. My major is chinese(Chinese) professional. I am writing this letter in purpose of applying for a staff number. I am sure that I am qualified for it. To begin with, I worked as a staff in a compang(拼寫錯誤) in last summer holiday. Whats more, my cheerful personality is well suited to this position. Last but not least my hobbies include music and play basketball. I would extend my precious appreciation if you are so kind to give me an oppotrunity(拼寫錯誤) to your companys interview. Looking forwad(拼寫錯誤) to your reply. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 點評：6分中間一段顯得有點過于簡潔，可以再加一條你的學習對工作的幫助等信息。或是將最重要的一條展開一兩句來說明。注意拼寫。