考研英語小作文批改感謝信5-7分例文5

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第五篇

　　Dear Ms. Wang,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who are my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Ms. Wang,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who are my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　6分

　　同學你好，寫作文時要再認真一點，寫完后再檢查一遍，有些小錯就可以及時改正，另外，建議你去看一下虛擬語氣的句型。時態要保持一致。

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第五篇

　　Dear Ms. Wang,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who are my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Ms. Wang,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who are my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　6分

　　同學你好，寫作文時要再認真一點，寫完后再檢查一遍，有些小錯就可以及時改正，另外，建議你去看一下虛擬語氣的句型。時態要保持一致。