附范文及作文解析
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 現在網上購物已成為一種時尚
2. 網上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題
3. 我的建議
Online Shopping
Nowadays, with the rapid development of information technology, online shopping has gained great popularity among more and more web users. For example, it is fashionable for youngsters to purchase daily essentials, such as books, clothes, electrical equipment, on some famous website, like Taobao, EBay and Alibaba.
Undoubtedly speaking, online shopping has many advantages. Firstly, compared with traditional shopping, it s very convenient. What you need to do is just clicking your mouse and waiting instead of going out by foot or driving. Secondly, more choices than real store are another attraction to customers. However, in spite of convenience and more choices of online shopping, we cannot turn a blind eye to its disadvantages. Obviously, quality problem is its first disadvantage. It s common that articles aren t so good just as they are described online that customers always buy fake commodities. In addition, it s troublesome and annoying for many customers to make a change when they are not satisfied with what they bought online.
As a college student, I like online shopping but I expected that effective measures should be taken to make it better。Specifically speaking, government should work out strict regulations and rules to prevent unfaithful and unlawful activities of online shop owners. Only by this way can online shopping become really safe and attract an increasing number of customers.
此次考試的作文題目為Online shopping，是一個考生們相當熟悉的話題，這也沿襲了四級考試貼近學生生活的特點，相信考生一定會覺得有話可說。
從題材上來看，此次作文屬于校園生活類
，題材上屬于議論文，命題類型是現象解釋型，這與2006年新題型，2007年12月以及2009年6月是同一類型的，考生考前若能掌握了寫作模板，寫好這篇文章應該不難。主要寫作思路如下：
第一段應該是現象引入段，主要①描述現象，引起話題;②表現較為典型的一個方面;
③進一步闡述現象。
第二段是說明原因段，主要①承上啟下,解釋這一現象的原因一;②原因二;③原因三;
④重申觀點，總結上述觀點。
第三段是總結觀點段，主要①講述導致的結果;②作者的態度;③原因一;④原因二;⑤總結全文。
下面是文都四六級精品圖書《大學英語四級考試三層突破 寫作 完形 翻譯》中 現象解釋型 的模板，請同學們對照一下：
第一段：Nowadays, there exists a public controversy concerning the issue of引出現象.What amazes us most is典型的一個方面.It is true that進一步闡述現象.
第二段：Many reasons account for 這一現象The main reason is原因一.What is more, 原因二. Thirdly, 原因三.
第三段：As a result,總結上述觀點.Considering all these, 講述導致結果及作者態度.For one thing, 原因一. For another, 原因二.In conclusion,總結全文.
通過對比，大家對自己此次作文的寫作是否滿意呢?可見，考前多看書、多練習，對于過關得高分還是很有必要的。要相信： 一分耕耘，一分收獲 。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 現在網上購物已成為一種時尚
2. 網上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題
3. 我的建議
Online Shopping
Nowadays, with the rapid development of information technology, online shopping has gained great popularity among more and more web users. For example, it is fashionable for youngsters to purchase daily essentials, such as books, clothes, electrical equipment, on some famous website, like Taobao, EBay and Alibaba.
Undoubtedly speaking, online shopping has many advantages. Firstly, compared with traditional shopping, it s very convenient. What you need to do is just clicking your mouse and waiting instead of going out by foot or driving. Secondly, more choices than real store are another attraction to customers. However, in spite of convenience and more choices of online shopping, we cannot turn a blind eye to its disadvantages. Obviously, quality problem is its first disadvantage. It s common that articles aren t so good just as they are described online that customers always buy fake commodities. In addition, it s troublesome and annoying for many customers to make a change when they are not satisfied with what they bought online.
As a college student, I like online shopping but I expected that effective measures should be taken to make it better。Specifically speaking, government should work out strict regulations and rules to prevent unfaithful and unlawful activities of online shop owners. Only by this way can online shopping become really safe and attract an increasing number of customers.
此次考試的作文題目為Online shopping，是一個考生們相當熟悉的話題，這也沿襲了四級考試貼近學生生活的特點，相信考生一定會覺得有話可說。
從題材上來看，此次作文屬于校園生活類
，題材上屬于議論文，命題類型是現象解釋型，這與2006年新題型，2007年12月以及2009年6月是同一類型的，考生考前若能掌握了寫作模板，寫好這篇文章應該不難。主要寫作思路如下：
第一段應該是現象引入段，主要①描述現象，引起話題;②表現較為典型的一個方面;
③進一步闡述現象。
第二段是說明原因段，主要①承上啟下,解釋這一現象的原因一;②原因二;③原因三;
④重申觀點，總結上述觀點。
第三段是總結觀點段，主要①講述導致的結果;②作者的態度;③原因一;④原因二;⑤總結全文。
下面是文都四六級精品圖書《大學英語四級考試三層突破 寫作 完形 翻譯》中 現象解釋型 的模板，請同學們對照一下：
第一段：Nowadays, there exists a public controversy concerning the issue of引出現象.What amazes us most is典型的一個方面.It is true that進一步闡述現象.
第二段：Many reasons account for 這一現象The main reason is原因一.What is more, 原因二. Thirdly, 原因三.
第三段：As a result,總結上述觀點.Considering all these, 講述導致結果及作者態度.For one thing, 原因一. For another, 原因二.In conclusion,總結全文.
通過對比，大家對自己此次作文的寫作是否滿意呢?可見，考前多看書、多練習，對于過關得高分還是很有必要的。要相信： 一分耕耘，一分收獲 。
