12月四級作文審題、創作、檢查三步走拿高分
四六級名師曹倩、尹延、余浩視頻點評本次考試
在剛剛過去的12月四六級考試中，估計許多同學一拿到考卷的section I作文單項，一看到題目和那個詭異的圖表，許多人的腦子立刻blank了，心都碎了只因為，曾幾何時，他們過于相信某些人類的相關押題，導致的是自己根本沒有實際的動腦，也沒有動手去做一些作文練習，掌握些句子，運用些段落。但就我看來，此次作文單項并非傳說中的喪心病狂，下面我將就此次作文題目進行一些具體分析：
第一步肯定是審題。題目中涉及的education pays容易被理解為教育支出，但我們不妨回想一下，2003年六級真題為it pays to be honest也考察了pay這個單詞做動詞的用法，因此此處可以理解為接受教育得到的回報，是值得的。
接下來就是動手寫，這次考試作文材料來源于美國勞工部網站的一份統計表，本次作文截取了其中一部分數據，并對時間做了修改。我在四級強化班上將四級作文歸納為社會熱點、觀點對比、圖表、諺語、書信五大類，雖然重點講解了前兩大類，但是對于后三類話題也沒有忽視，對同學們的要求是：掌握段落結構。在近年來的英語四、六級考試中，圖表作文已經成為非常難得一見的題型。但據統計，1991年和2002年的英語四級考試中考過圖表作文，加上這次考試，幾乎是10年才會考到一次。所以拿到新題型，切莫慌張，深吸一口氣，仔細回憶上課所講圖表題寫作結構和思路，相信凡是上課認真聽講的同學，應該可以輕松hold住作文。
根據上課筆記，圖表題第一段應該包含三個部分現象概述+總體描述+細節描述，分三句話來描述就好，因為這是圖片題，所以先上句應景的廢話as is impressively demonstrated in the bar chart above總體描述需要總體把握學歷和失業率的總體關系，而細節描述需要選取幾個有代表性的特殊值。圖表題最難的部分在第一段、第二段和反復強調的社會熱點話題一樣，要寫成總分結構，要從原因結果來談，要分層來談，要用第一第二連接詞。這些都是課堂上的老生常談，這里就不再贅言了。在寫作文的時候，我們要用正確的語言來表達清晰的思路，所以先想清楚到底是什么導致了這個現象。
寫完后一定要檢查一下自己的作文確保自己沒有犯一些低級錯誤，保證創作的正確性。
除此之外，值得關注的是，這次四級考題和考研英語二作文是幾乎如出一轍，而回憶2023年6月份的六級考題，和2009年考研英語一作文也是異曲同工。這冥冥之中似乎在暗示著我們，國內四六級和考研考試正趨于一體化，四六級正往考研考試類型上靠攏，建議各位同學在以后的復習過程中，如果學有余力，可以用一些高端考試的真題來訓練自己，這樣有利于提高自己的英語應試水平。
最后，附上本人原創范文一篇，還望能對大家起到一點借鑒作用：
The past few years has witnessed the phenomenon that numerous individuals are in the blind pursuit of diplomas or vocational credentials. According to the statistics impressively demonstrated in the bar chart above, education degree does have a relationship with earnings, contrary to the recent theory of useless education. Those who possess a doctoral degree earn 1,551dollars median weekly, ranking first among people of other education level. The median weekly earnings of people with associate degree and below can not reach the average of 797 dollars, ranking from 768 dollars to 451 dollars.
Ample reasons can account for the issue of Education Pays，while the following one might be the most critical. To begin with, compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which can ensure a distinctive handsome-income work. Apart from that, with the advancement of technology and the adjustment of industrial structure, quite a few high-tech industries emerge overnight, which leads to a soaring demand of workforces with high educational degree, thus, it is natural that graduates with bachelor and higher degree get a high pay-packet and enjoy a stable and ideal job. Without a systematic and scientific acquiring of knowledge, students can hardly enjoy a competitive edge in the employment market.
To my way of thinking, the issue mentioned above will bound to generate more consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. Therefore, we should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen substantial education investment. And，it is high time that all of us ,parents，educators，and the authorities, make combined efforts to tell the young the fact about the Education Pays. Only when we mesh with the social needs can we fulfill our dreams, and correspondingly build an ideal paradise where life can be enjoyed to the uttermost.
名師簡介：
韓勤勤，武漢學校國內考試部優秀老師。主講四六級寫作，考研寫作。英語語言學研究生，英語專業八級，獲上海市高級口譯資格證書，英語功底扎實，課堂教學生動充實，為人親和，讓學生如沐春風，被學生親切地喚為觀音姐姐。
四六級名師曹倩、尹延、余浩視頻點評本次考試
在剛剛過去的12月四六級考試中，估計許多同學一拿到考卷的section I作文單項，一看到題目和那個詭異的圖表，許多人的腦子立刻blank了，心都碎了只因為，曾幾何時，他們過于相信某些人類的相關押題，導致的是自己根本沒有實際的動腦，也沒有動手去做一些作文練習，掌握些句子，運用些段落。但就我看來，此次作文單項并非傳說中的喪心病狂，下面我將就此次作文題目進行一些具體分析：
第一步肯定是審題。題目中涉及的education pays容易被理解為教育支出，但我們不妨回想一下，2003年六級真題為it pays to be honest也考察了pay這個單詞做動詞的用法，因此此處可以理解為接受教育得到的回報，是值得的。
接下來就是動手寫，這次考試作文材料來源于美國勞工部網站的一份統計表，本次作文截取了其中一部分數據，并對時間做了修改。我在四級強化班上將四級作文歸納為社會熱點、觀點對比、圖表、諺語、書信五大類，雖然重點講解了前兩大類，但是對于后三類話題也沒有忽視，對同學們的要求是：掌握段落結構。在近年來的英語四、六級考試中，圖表作文已經成為非常難得一見的題型。但據統計，1991年和2002年的英語四級考試中考過圖表作文，加上這次考試，幾乎是10年才會考到一次。所以拿到新題型，切莫慌張，深吸一口氣，仔細回憶上課所講圖表題寫作結構和思路，相信凡是上課認真聽講的同學，應該可以輕松hold住作文。
根據上課筆記，圖表題第一段應該包含三個部分現象概述+總體描述+細節描述，分三句話來描述就好，因為這是圖片題，所以先上句應景的廢話as is impressively demonstrated in the bar chart above總體描述需要總體把握學歷和失業率的總體關系，而細節描述需要選取幾個有代表性的特殊值。圖表題最難的部分在第一段、第二段和反復強調的社會熱點話題一樣，要寫成總分結構，要從原因結果來談，要分層來談，要用第一第二連接詞。這些都是課堂上的老生常談，這里就不再贅言了。在寫作文的時候，我們要用正確的語言來表達清晰的思路，所以先想清楚到底是什么導致了這個現象。
寫完后一定要檢查一下自己的作文確保自己沒有犯一些低級錯誤，保證創作的正確性。
除此之外，值得關注的是，這次四級考題和考研英語二作文是幾乎如出一轍，而回憶2023年6月份的六級考題，和2009年考研英語一作文也是異曲同工。這冥冥之中似乎在暗示著我們，國內四六級和考研考試正趨于一體化，四六級正往考研考試類型上靠攏，建議各位同學在以后的復習過程中，如果學有余力，可以用一些高端考試的真題來訓練自己，這樣有利于提高自己的英語應試水平。
最后，附上本人原創范文一篇，還望能對大家起到一點借鑒作用：
The past few years has witnessed the phenomenon that numerous individuals are in the blind pursuit of diplomas or vocational credentials. According to the statistics impressively demonstrated in the bar chart above, education degree does have a relationship with earnings, contrary to the recent theory of useless education. Those who possess a doctoral degree earn 1,551dollars median weekly, ranking first among people of other education level. The median weekly earnings of people with associate degree and below can not reach the average of 797 dollars, ranking from 768 dollars to 451 dollars.
Ample reasons can account for the issue of Education Pays，while the following one might be the most critical. To begin with, compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which can ensure a distinctive handsome-income work. Apart from that, with the advancement of technology and the adjustment of industrial structure, quite a few high-tech industries emerge overnight, which leads to a soaring demand of workforces with high educational degree, thus, it is natural that graduates with bachelor and higher degree get a high pay-packet and enjoy a stable and ideal job. Without a systematic and scientific acquiring of knowledge, students can hardly enjoy a competitive edge in the employment market.
To my way of thinking, the issue mentioned above will bound to generate more consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. Therefore, we should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen substantial education investment. And，it is high time that all of us ,parents，educators，and the authorities, make combined efforts to tell the young the fact about the Education Pays. Only when we mesh with the social needs can we fulfill our dreams, and correspondingly build an ideal paradise where life can be enjoyed to the uttermost.
名師簡介：
韓勤勤，武漢學校國內考試部優秀老師。主講四六級寫作，考研寫作。英語語言學研究生，英語專業八級，獲上海市高級口譯資格證書，英語功底扎實，課堂教學生動充實，為人親和，讓學生如沐春風，被學生親切地喚為觀音姐姐。
