英語模型|讓你的英語作文變高級的3個方法（附句型+詞組）

原標題：英語模型 | 讓你的英語作文變高級的3個方法（附句型+詞組）

《普通高中英語課程標準》中明確表示：寫作部分主要考查學生的寫作能力，其中包括寫作的流利性、準確性和得體性。

高考英語書面表達第五檔(21~25分)的評分標準：

1. 覆蓋所有內容要點；

2. 應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯；

3. 語法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致；

4. 具備較強的語言運用能力；

5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。

從課程標準的要求以及書面表達的評分標準不難看出，要寫出高分作文,考生除了要保證內容要點完整外，還要保證語言具有多樣性，學會恰當運用高級詞匯、句式以及銜接詞，為文章增加亮點。

這些亮點能夠體現考生的語言運用能力，幫助考生提高書面表達的得分檔次。

根據試題調研第5輯《寫作高分技法》中的內容，調研整理了讓作文看起來更高級的3種方法，電子版在文末領取哦~

高級詞匯，擺脫俗套

攻略一：摒棄籠統表達，細化描寫。

籠統詞具有較強的概括性，考生相對熟悉，但具體詞能形象地描述事物或反映細膩的感情色彩變化，使表達更出彩。

例1：Thats a very wonderful movie.

wonderful比較籠統，可以選用更為具體的詞：

instructive 有教育意義的

moving/touching 令人感動的

enlightening 具有啟發性的

攻略二：多用高級表達，短語優先。

恰當地選用一些貼切、地道的高級表達對提高書面表達的得分檔次至關重要。所以考生不妨考慮在文章中使用較高級的表達，充分展現自己的語言功底。

1. 校園生活

能夠做某事：be able to do sth.

升級表達：

be capable of doing sth.

be competent to do sth.

努力做某事：try to do sth.

升級表達：

spare no effort to do sth.

strive/ endeavor to do sth.

某人必須要做的事情：something sb. must do

升級表達：a must for sb.

試圖做某事：try to do sth.

升級表達：

attempt/seek to do sth.

make an attempt to do sth.

參加：join in, take part in

升級表達：

participate in,

get involved in,

attend

engage in

2. 動作行為

記住：remember

升級表達：keep/bear in mind that...

面對，面臨：face

升級表達：

be faced with

meet with,

encounter

意識到：know, realize

升級表達：

be aware of/that

be conscious of

come to realize

重視：value

升級表達：

attach great importance to

take sth. seriously

參觀：visit

升級表達：

pay a visit to

go to... for a visit

某人想到某：sb. think(s) of sth.

升級表達：

sth. occur(s) to/strike(s) sb.. sb.

come(s) up with sth.

3. 人際關系

向某人道歉：say sorry to sb.

升級表達：

make an apology to sb.

apologize to sb.

因某事感激某人：thank sb. for sth.

升級表達：

be grateful to sb. for sth.

express ones gratitude to sb. for sth.

遇見：meet

升級表達：

come across

encounter

run into

鼓勵某人：encourage sb.

升級表達：cheer sb. up

支持：support

升級表達：be in favor of

向某人求助：ask sb. for help

升級表達：turn to sb. for help

4. 修飾形容

不同種類的：different kinds of

升級表達：

a wide range of

a variety of

various

varieties of

大量的，很多：a number of, a lot of

升級表達：

a considerable number of

an overwhelming majority of

large quantities of

scores of

dozens of

countless

numerous

對...有益：be useful to，be good for

升級表達：

be of great benefit to

do good to

be beneficial to

.....組成：be made up of

升級表達：

consist of

be composed of

疲憊不堪：be tired

升級表達：

be worn out

feel exhausted

5. 陳述事實

幾天前：a few days ago

升級表達：the other day

大家公認：people think that...

升級表達：its acknowledged/accepted/ believed that..

實際上：actually

升級表達：as a matter of fact

談及：talk of/about, mention

升級表達：

refer to

speak of

when it comes to

顯然：clealy

升級表達：apparently , obviously

應該：should

升級表達：be supposed to

句式豐富，彰顯文采

作文中出現過多的簡單句會給人單調乏味之感，句子與句子之間的關系也會顯得松散；而文章中過多地出現復合句又顯得累贅，讀起來費勁。

考生要想寫出一篇優秀的作文，需要適當地運用較高級的語法結構，這樣可以使文章結構更緊湊，語言更豐富，表達更出彩。

攻略1：以事/物開頭，使表達更地道

恰到好處地使用被動句以及一些以事/物開頭的句子，會使語篇連貫性更強、結構更緊湊、重點更突出、表達更地道，如：

例2：I thought of an idea when I read the article. 我讀這篇文章時有了個想法。

升級表達：A good idea occurred to/hit/struckme when I read the article.

攻略2：以非主語開頭，增加表現力

多使用非主語成分開頭的句子不但能使寫作句式多樣化，而且能有效地向閱卷老師展示自己的語言功底。

1. 介詞短語置于句首

例3：You need to hand in a report together with your innovations , and you must explain your idea and what materials you have used.

升級表達：Along with your wonderful innovations, you need to hand in a report explaininghow the idea occurred to you and what materials you have used.

2. 使用獨立主格結構/with復合結構

例4：As time goes by, more and more people begin to realize the importance of protecting the environment.

升級表達：With time going by, more and more people begin to realize the importance of protecting the environment.

攻略三：巧用副詞和形容詞，生動形象

在寫作中，考生可將副詞置于句首增強文章的連貫性或用以強調、彰顯句子的感情色彩，也可以將形容詞置于句首或句末，增強情緒感染力，使句子更生動形象。

例5：Unfortunately,my grandpa caught a serious cold several days ago due to climate change and he is still in hospital now.

攻略四：活用非謂語，精簡表達

1. 運用非謂語動詞(短語)整合簡單句，提升表達

考生可以利用非謂語動詞(短語)對兩個甚至兩個以上的簡單句進行整合，使句子更加簡潔、凝練，表達更高級。

例6：Its widely acknowledged that China boasts abundant and unique cultures. They range from calligraphy to folk dances and local operas.

升級表達：Its widely acknowledged that China boasts abundant and unique cultures, ranging fromcalligraphy tofolk dances and local operas.

2. 運用非謂語動詞(短語)簡化復合句，精煉語言

在表達復雜含義的時候，常常用到復合句，句子有時會較長，考生可以利用非謂語動詞(短語)對復合句進行簡化，使語言更精練。

例7：When I saw a car running towards her, I reached my hand out and pulled her back.

升級表達：Seeinga car running towards her, I reached my hand out and pulled her back.

攻略五：巧用三大從句，豐富結構

1. 運用定語從句，讓表述更豐滿

例8：This semester our school offers many optional courses to the students and each of them appeals to many students.

本學期我們學校為學生提供了許多選修課，每一門都吸引了很多學生。

升級表達：This semester our school offers many optional courses to the students, each of whichappeals to many students.

2. 運用名詞性從句，讓表述更具體

例9：Her daughter satisfied all the admissions requirements. She was satisfied with the result. 她的女兒符合所有錄取條件,她很滿意。

升級表達：She was satisfied with the result thather daughter satisfied all the admissions requirements.

3. 運用狀語從句，讓邏輯更清晰

例10：The task is tough. But there is no doubt that we will overcome all the difficulties and succeed.這項任務是艱巨的。但是毫無疑問,我們會克服所有的困難并取得成功。

升級表達：No matter how tough/However toughthe task is, there is no doubt that we will overcome all the difficulties and succeed.

攻略六：套用提分句式，升級表達

1. 運用強調句，突出重點

例11：I didnt calm down until my head teacher patted me on the shoulder.直到校長拍了拍我的肩膀,我才平靜下來。

升級表達：It was not untilmy head teacher patted me on the shoulder that I calmed down.

運用強調句 可以加強語氣，突出所表達的情感態度或者突出某些人扣或事件。

2. 運用倒裝句，以示強調

例12：We got to the farm and then started to plant trees.我們到了農場,然后開始種樹。

升級表達：Hardly had we got tothe farm whenwe started to plant trees.

恰當地使用例裝句能夠使文章句式更手富，重點更鮮明。

3. 運用虛擬語氣，表達看法

例13：Your selfless assistance made me achieve such great progress in English.你無私的幫助讓我在英語方面取得了如此大的進步。

升級表達： Had it not been foryour selfless assistance,I couldnt have madesuch great progress in English.

虛擬語氣可以用來傳遞強烈的情愿，表達說話人的心理和真實感受。

4. 運用省略形式，避免累贅

例14：If Im given the job, Im sure to be a good guide.

升級表達：If given the job, Im sure to be a good guide.

如果我得到了這份工作，我一定會成為一名好向導。

略形式可以避免重復，使句子簡潔緊湊、信息突出。

5. 運用感嘆句，傳遞情感

例15：I was happy to be one of the members in your team.

升級表達：How happy I wasto be one of the members in your team !

我很高興成為你們團隊的一員。

感嘆句可將說話人的情感更加強更地表達出來，使描述更生動。

結構清晰，渾然天成

結構混亂、邏輯不清是寫作失分的一個重要原因。

寫作時要注意句子內部、句與句之間、段與段之間的連貫性和邏輯性，可以用過渡表達把文章的不同部分巧妙地連接在一起。

這樣，文章會更加連貫、自然和緊湊，段落或文章的脈絡也會更清晰，中心思想也會更明確。

攻略：牢記常用過渡表達

考生可以根據意思和作用來選取合適的過渡表達，常用的過渡表達歸納如下：

1. 段落起始的過渡表達:

generally speaking

to begin/start with

first of all

in the first place

as we know

as is known to all

as is shown in

2. 段落結尾進行總結的過渡表達：

to sum up

in conclusion

in a word

in summary

all in all

3. 時間順度的過渡表達：

first/second/third

(soon)afterwards

meanwhile

finally

at first/at last

in the beginning/in the end

subsequently

eventually

5. 解釋說明的過渡表達：

in fact

as a matter of fact

in other words

namely to put it differently

6. 表示因果的過渡表達：

considering that

owing to

due to

because

therefore

as a result

consequently

thereby

thus

so

7. 表示強調的過渡表達：

certainly

indeed

above all

surely

to tell (you) the truth

8. 表示遞進或補充的過渡表達：

in addition

also

moreover

whats more

besides

to make matters worse

worse still

more/most importantly

last but not least

additionally

9. 舉例或例舉的過渡表達：

for example

for instance

such as

... be as follows

10. 表示讓步或轉折的過渡表達：

but/however/though/yet

11. 表示比較或對比的過渡表達：

like/unlike

in the same way

similarly

in contrast

whereas

instead/instead of

while

12. 表示觀點的過渡表達：

personally

from my perspective

in my opinion

Im fully convinced that

as I see it

as far as Im concerned

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