高考英語滿分作文評分標準！附11篇高考英語話題作文，建議收藏

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寫好英語作文是高考英語取得高分的關鍵，而理解高考英語作文評卷的相關標準，對大家提高英語作文水平很有幫助。

今天，就帶大家了解一下高考作文考查要點和評分原則，以及各個檔次的給分范圍及標準。

高考作文考查要點和評分原則

高考英語書面表達題（作文題）的考查要點及評分原則：準確運用語法、詞匯、拼寫、標點。使用某些句型、短語、清楚地表達自己的意思，寫出流暢易懂的短文。

評分主要從以下4個方面考慮：

1.內容要點 (content points) 。

2.運用詞匯和語法結構的數量。

3.詞匯的準確運用與句子的結構把握 (accuracy of vocabulary and structures) 。

4.上下文的連貫性(coherence)。

各個檔次的給分范圍及標準（滿分25）

第一檔(極差)：0分

未能傳達給讀者任何信息：內容太少，無法評判，寫的內容均與所要求的內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。（具體什么樣子，小簡老師從來沒見過，可能是字母表默寫，字跡還很潦草那種）。其實跟得滿分一樣，得零分也挺難的，一般隨便寫兩句靠譜的話閱卷老師也會給一兩分的。

第二檔(差)：1-5分

1.未完成試題規定的任務。

2.明顯遺漏主要內容，寫了一些無關內容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。

3.語法結構單調、詞匯項目有限。

4.較多語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內容的理解。

5.缺乏語句間的連接成分，內容不連貫。

6.信息未能傳達給讀者。

點評：

1.語法錯誤較多，基本詞匯掌握不足；

2.句子結構不完整，缺乏連貫性；

3.卷面混亂，表達錯誤。

建議得分：2-4

第三檔(較差)：6-10分

1.未恰當完成試題規定的任務。

2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容，寫了一些無關內容。

3.語法結構單調、詞匯項目有限。

4.有一些語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內容的理解。

5.較少使用語句間的連接成分，內容缺少連貫性。

6.信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。

點評：本文能夠覆蓋所有的信息點，能夠嘗試使用不同的簡單的句式結構，語言表達錯誤較多，但基本能夠表達信息內容。

建議得分：8-9

第四檔(適當)：11-15分

1.基本完成了試題規定的任務。

2.雖漏掉一些內容，但覆蓋所有主要內容。

3.應用的語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求。

4.有一些語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。

5.應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內容連貫。

6.整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。

點評：

1.有一定的語言積累，努力嘗試使用一些常用的句型和詞匯，但表達過于冗長并且意義欠準確；

2.覆蓋了要表述的所有內容，表達還欠準確；

3.語篇整體有連貫意識，但選詞欠準確。

建議得分：11.5-12

點評：

1.字體優美，語言表達得體流暢，語言邏輯非常好；語言比較簡潔；高級的句型運用準確，詞匯的選擇豐富到位；

2.覆蓋了要表述的所有內容，表達比較準確；

3.語篇整體連貫，行文流暢。

建議得分：14 -15

第五檔(好)：16-20分

1.完全完成了試題規定的任務。

2.雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內容。

3.應用的語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求。

4.語法結構或詞匯方面應用基本準確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞匯所致。

5.應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。

6.達到了預期的寫作目的。

第六檔(很好)：21-25分

1.完全完成了試題規定的任務。

2.覆蓋所有內容要點。

3.應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。

4.語法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。

5.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。

6.完全達到了預期的寫作目的。

高分作文關鍵因素及秘訣

從上面可以看出，英語作文高分的關鍵因素及高分秘訣：三點關鍵定檔因素(不跑題是前提)：詞匯多樣性、語法復雜性、文章連貫性。書面表達的五項秘訣：審題，遣詞，造句，潤色，謀篇

既然知道了這些關鍵因素和高分秘訣，我們要如何從這些方面入手呢?

審題的概念

拿到試卷后，首先瀏覽書面表達的題目，研究題目要求。正確的審題內容包括審標題、審體裁、審要點。審標題：看文章是否要求有題目(title)或者主題(topic)能夠確保你不跑題；審體裁：確能夠定文章的文體，為你寫作提供方向。審要點：如果英語作文中，有要求要點的，一般打分時是踩點給分的，準確把握住要點，是高分的一個訣竅。

如何審要點？要做到以下兩個方面：

總結歸納要點：不是所有內容都要寫出來，而是抓住其中的關鍵要點、銜接要點！

理順要點：將提煉的要點按邏輯關系(如時間關系、因果關系、轉折關系等)重新安排，這樣整篇文章看起來就整體有序，流暢自然，更加容易打動評分老師，從而作文分數提升一檔。

構思文章提綱：根據題目的要點，安排好段落和主次關系。要形成良好的分段意識，寫作分段是必須要進行的(2至4段為佳)，這樣顯得文章不會擁擠并且層次分明。在行文意識上，要注意突出要點。

遣詞的注意點

不出現語言錯誤、詞語和短語搭配、適度使用加分詞匯、避免詞語重復、注意詞語和短語搭配使用、可以適度的使用加分詞句：高級詞、同義詞、短語等替代

造句的原則

表達意思要清楚無誤，多種表達方式表達相同含義，避免句式單調(簡單句，并列句，復合句等適度調整)，表達意思清楚無誤：具體化、細節化，可以用形象思維來表達(什么叫形象思維?比如說你朗讀的“很好聽”，用“抑揚頓挫”來表達就是形象思維)

謀篇的攻略

注意分段、詳略搭配；注意連貫、行文時多用關聯詞、引導詞；把文章句子通過各種關系整合起來，達到起承轉合，運用自如的目的，從而獲取高分。

具體的連接關系有：并列關系、遞進關系、因果關系、轉折關系、讓步關系、列舉關系、條件關系、舉例關系、時間關系等。

高考英語作文常考的11個話題：求助信、建議信、感謝信、告知信、申請信、通知、邀請信、道歉信、新聞報道、咨詢信以及演講。下面為大家匯總了這11個常考話題范文，一起來看看吧！！

話題一求助信

一、假定你是李華，當前你在英語學習方面遇到了一些問題。于是你向你校的外籍老師Tom寫一封求助信尋求幫助。要點如下：

1.本人簡介。2.求助內容。3.希望得到Tom的幫助。

Dear teacher,

My name is Li Hua. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help.

I have met much difficulty in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What’s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn.

Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily? In the meanwhile, I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar.

I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.

二、假定你是李華，你正在為高考緊張復習，但最近你遇到了-些問題導致無法集中精力學習。于是你給你校的外籍心理老師Kate寫一封求助信尋求幫助。要點如下：

1.作業多，沒有時間運動。2.壓力大，難以入睡。3.希望得到Kate的幫助。注意: 1. 詞數100左右。

Dear Kate,

I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you for help.

I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.

Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems?

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

話題二建議信

一、假定你是李華。你的筆友曉東是某學校一名高一學生。最近他來信說不知道如何學好高中英語，感到苦惱。請你給他寫一封回信，提出你的建議。建議內容如下：

1.盡量用英語交流，不要怕犯錯誤；2.堅持每天早晚朗讀英語；3. 多讀英文報紙，看英文電影。

Dear Xiao Dong,

I’m sorry you are having trouble in learning English in senior high school. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.

Firstly, why not try to communicate with others in English? If you do so, you will feel confident gradually. Also, don’t be afraid of making mistakes because everyone makes mistakes. Secondly, you should keep on reading aloud English sentences every morning and evening. That way, you’ll learn many important expressions. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you read more English newspapers and watch English movies.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

二、假定你叫李華，你的美國朋友Jack 來信，說他寒假期間要來中國交流學習。他學了兩年中文，但是仍然擔心用中文交流時會遇到困難。請你用英語給Jack寫封回信，提幾點建議，要點如下：

1.大膽自信；2.放慢語速；3.借助圖畫或肢體語言等表達方式。

參考詞匯：自信的 confident 肢體語言 body language

Dear Jack,

How is everything going? I’m glad to learn that you’re going to China this winter. You say you’re worried about your Chinese if you are in China. Now let me give you some advice.

First, you should be brave and confident to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. We Chinese are very friendly, so you don’t be afraid to make any mistakes. Second, speak Chinese slowly and clearly when you talk to others. In this way, you can make yourself understood easily. Finally, you can use pictures or drawings and body language. As you know, most of body language is in common in the world. I hope these suggestions will help you.

Best wishes

Yours, Li Hua

話題三感謝信

一、假定你是李華，你們學校和一所美國中學簽署了教師交流協議。在過去的一年里，你們的英文老師是來自這所中學的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美國任教。請你根據下列寫作要點和要求給Sue寫封電子郵件。

1.對她表達感謝之意。2.介紹她離開后你自己及班里發生的事情。3.希望了解她的近況。

Dear Sure,

I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.

We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see it?

How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.

All the best.

Yours, Li Hua

二、假定你是李華，你被自己心儀的大學錄取了。請你給你的外教Mrs. Wilson寫封感謝信，感謝在校期間她對你的教導和幫助，內容包括：

1.對老師的辛勤教學工作表示感謝；2.感謝在校期間老師對自己的教導；3.表達對老師的想念以及衷心祝愿。

Dear Mrs. Wilson,

I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college, which I have been dreaming of. Firstly, I’d like to express my gratitude for your excellent teaching and your care as well as love for me! Thank you for your encouraging words, which never fail to brighten my way ahead. It’s you who cheered me up. Never will I forget what you said-- doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. Without your help, I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. And I really appreciate your instruction.

I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Are you still too busy? How I miss you, my beloved teacher! Wish you all the best.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

話題四告知信

一、假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學習漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計劃。內容包括：

1.時間和地點；2.內容：學習唐詩；3.課前準備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。

Dear Leslie,

How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson.

The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang Poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.

If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me.

Looking forward to meeting you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

二、假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發郵件向你詢問有關習俗，請你回復郵件，內容包括：

1.到達時間；2.合適的禮物；3.餐桌禮儀。

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.

Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

Best wishes!

話題五申請信

一、假定你是李華，從互聯網上得知一個國際中學生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。

內容主要包括：1.自我介紹(包括英語能力)；2.參加意圖(介紹中國、了解其他國家)；3. 希望獲準。

Dear Sir or Madam,

Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, IlI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Looking forward to your reply!

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I’ve learned on the Internet that your summer camp, which is going to be held in Singapore, is round the corner. I am really interested in it.

I, who am active and enjoy various activities, hope to take part in it very much. I know the ability of communication is of great importance and I can speak English quite fluently. In addition, in your camp, there are so many students from different countries. Therefore, I can communicate with the students from different parts of the world. Not only can I introduce China to them, but I can know more about their countries as well.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Li Hua

話題六通知

一、你受學生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則英文通知，請大家觀看一部英文短片Growing Together，內容包括：

.短片內容：學校的發展；2.放映時間、地點; 3.歡迎對短片提出意見。

Notice

In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments./ Everyone is welcome to participate in it.

The Student Union

June 8, 2023

二、假如你是校學生會主席。新年即將到來，為了幫助你校的外國留學生更好地了解中國文化，學生會將為他們舉辦一個新年晚會。請你根據以下提示，用英語向他們發出口頭通知。時間：下周五6：00—8：00 地點：教學樓101室

內容：1.唱中國歌；2.比賽用筷子；3.學習包餃子。

Good afternoon, everyone. May I have your attention, please?

I’m the chairman of the Students’ Union. As the New Year is around the corner（即將到來）, we are going to hold a New Year party for you, which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture.

During the party, not only can you sing a Chinese song, but you will also compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks. What’s more, you’ll learn at the party how to make dumplings. Sounds great, doesn’t it? The party is scheduled（計劃于） in Room 101of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday.

Please make sure you won’t miss it. Thank you for your attention.

話題七邀請信

一、假定你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人們過重陽節(the Double Ninth Festival)。請給外教Lucy寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，

內容包括：1.出發及返回時間；2.活動：包餃子、表演節目等。

Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.

Its the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly there. Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which I hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon.

If you are able to come with us, please let me know and well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning. Looking forward to your reply.

二、假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂部(photography club)將舉辦國際中學攝影展。請給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信。請他提供作品。

信的內容包括：1.主題：環境保護；2.展覽時間；3.投稿郵箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

Dear Peter,

How are you getting along? Im writing to invite you to join in the International Students Photography Show held by the photography club of our school.

As your best friend, I know you are skilled at taking photos. Now the International Students Photography Show is a chance for you to display your talent., The theme is environmental protection, aiming to call on more people to do what they can to protect the environment. The show will last from 8 June to 12 June,

If you want to join in the activity , please send your photos to intIphotoshow@ gmschool.com before May 31. Dont hesitate to ask me for help if you have any questions.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

話題八道歉信

一、假定你是李華，與留學生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說明原因；3.另約時間。注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Dear Bob,

I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

話題九新聞報道

5月1日，高二(3)班的學生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去陽光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)開展志愿者活動(送水果.打掃.聊天等)。假如你是校英語報的記者，請按下列要點用英語寫一則100-120個詞的新聞報道。1.時間.地點.任務.活動；2.老人們的反應；3.簡短評論。　

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

On May Day, Student Volunteers from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, they were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.

When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.

Student Volunteers were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.

By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

話題十咨詢信

一、假定你是李華，計劃暑假期間去英國學習英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請給該校寫封信，詢問有關情況(箭頭所指內容)。參考詞匯：住宿 accommodation

Dear Sir/Madam，

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Ive seen your ad，and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course. First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week？Besides，I wish there would not be too many students in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation isincluded.Would there be host families or university dormitories?

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

As a student of Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have special price for students. As for the money you charge(索要), does it include the entrance fees for visiting the places? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring my own food?

How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for travelling? I really want to have a look at the places of interest in London.

話題十一演講稿

假如你是高三學生李華，請寫一篇演講稿，準備代表全體同學在畢業典禮上發言，內容要點如下：1.畢業的心情；2.高中三年的收獲；3.感謝和決心。

Good morning, everyone.

I’m Li Hua. It’s my great honor to stand here to deliver my speech. It has been three years since I started my high school. At this moment, I cannot bear to part but I am also eager for my new life in university. During the three years, not only have I made some true friends who shared sorrows and joys with me, but also I have gained various knowledge.

Before leaving, I’d like to express my sincere gratitude to my teachers. It was they who patiently answered our endless questions. Besides, I owe many thanks to my dear classmates. Without their help and encouragement, I couldn’t have overcome so many difficulties. Now I’ve been determined to lead a more meaningful life in university and I will live up to the expectations of my teachers and my parents.

Thank you for your listening.

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